my life your love:ff note on page 123 - Page 11

Chapter-11

Charecter sketch:

Kalpi's flat:

Evening: 7:00 PM

(kalpi preparing dinner.ashu & tiya go for ride...darsh read books)

Darsh- mom tiya aur maasi kab aayenge?

Kalpi- bas aate hi honge?

( door bell ring)

Kady- lagta hai aa gaye..

Darsh- main kholta hoon..

Kalpi- stop..ise hi darwaja mat kholna..1st dekho ke kaun hai?

Darsh- ok..mom

(darsh go and see raghav from key hol)

Darsh (pov)- oh no ye yaha..ab kya karu...if mom ko pata chala ki tiye ne subah inke saath fighting ki thi toh gadbad ho jaayegi.main room main chup jaata hoon.

(darsh run from there go toh his room)

Kalpi- isse achanak kya ho gaya.aur door pe kaun hai jisko dekh ke ye iss tarah se bhaag gaya?

(kalpi open the door and shock to see raghav)

Raghav- hi..

Kalpi- aap yaha wo bhi is time pe.aur aapko mera address kaha se mila?

Raghav- tum bhool rahi ho ki main raghav shinghania hoon.tumhara address hi nahi phone number bhi mere pass hai.so ab jayada sawaal maat pooche aur chalo mere saath..

Kalpi- kaha?

Raghav- kamala maa se milne...wo tumhara wait kar rahi hai...

Kalpi- aapne aai ko bata diya ki main laut aayi hoon.

Raghav- haan...aur wo tumse milna chahti hai..so chalo.

kalpi (pov)- aai baba se toh mujhe bhi milna hai but darsh ko akela chod ke main abhi nahi jaa sakti. (in loaud voice) sorry but main abhi nahi aa sakti...aai ko bol dijiye ki main kal aa jayungi.

Raghav- soory...but tumhe aaj hi chalna hoga maine kamala maa se promise kiya ki main tumhe lekar aaunga.so tum mere saath abhi chalo ya phir ek kaam karte hai main unko leke yaha aa jaata hoon.

Kalpi (pov)- ager ye aai-baba koleke yaha aa gaye toh problem ho jaayegi.lagta hai mujhe jana hi hoga...(to raghav) unko yaha laane ki jaroorat nahi hai main aap ke saath aane ke liye ready hoon.aap niche wait kariye main 5 min main aati hoon.

Raghav- ok...come fast

Kady- di apne unko darwaaje se hi lauta diya?kaun the wo?

Kalpi-tum unko chodo...koi nahi the wo...now look main kuch der ke liye baher jaa rahi hoon tab ke liye darsh ka khayal rakhna.aur ashu kehna ki mujhe call kare.

(darsh come to hall)

Darsh- mom where are you going?

Kalpi- look darsh main thodi der ke liye baher jaa rahi hoon so kady massi ko pareshaan mat karna...main jaldi laut aayungi..promise.

(then kalpi go chawl with raghav.in a way they not talk with eachother.kalpi ignore raghav all the time.raghav stop the car in front of chawl.see kalpi there kamala run towords kalpi and stop front of kalpi)

Raghav- jaise main ne promise kiya tha aapki ki beti ko le aaya hoon...

(kamala see in kalpi's eyes and slap her)

Kamala- tumhari himmat kaise hui yaha jaane ki...jaate samay ek baar bhi hamre baare main nahi socha.tujhe ek baar bhi nahi laga ki tumhare baad humara kya hoga? (after listen to kamala's words kalpi hug her and cry...its 1 half and hour kalpi only cry on kamala's lap)

kalpi- socha aai bahut socha...aur sochne ke baad hi yaha se jaane ka decision liya tha...jo kuch bhi uski ke baad mere yaha rehna mushkil ho gaya tha aur main aapke liye aur problem's nahi create karna chahti thi isliye...

(vitthal come there)

Vitthal- isliye ghr chod ke chali gayi...ab main bhi yahi karta hoon jab mujhe lagega ki main tum logo ko pareshaan kar raha hoon main ghar chod ke chala jaata hoon..kyun? (kalpi happy to see vitthal and go to hug him but he stop her) nahi ab ye pyaar dikhane ki jaroorat nahi hai...jab chod kar gayi thi tab baba ka khayal nahi aaya?

Kalpi-i'm sorry baba...main jaanti hoon ki maine galti ki hai..plz mujhe maaf kar dijiye..i promise ki main ab aapko chod ke kahi nahi jaayungi.

Vitthal- kahi nahi jaayungi matlab...tum jaayogi tab jab main tujhe jaane doonga...(and vitthal hug kalpi) tujhe kitna yad kiya pata hai..per tujhe bilkul tere baba ki yaad nahi aayi naa

(pakya interupt to light atmosphere)

Pakya- chalo ab kalpi wapas aa gayi hai toh mera paata cut,..ab sara laad pyaar issi ko milne wala hai mujhe toh koi poochega bhi nahi.

(vitthal little slap pakya on this line...that time kalpi's phone rining...ashu is another side)

Ashu- kaha ho tum?think toh ho? aur kaun aaya tha tumhe lene ke liye?kiske saath kaha gayi ho tum?

Kalpi- stop...stop...kitne sawaal...don't worry main bilkul thik hoon aur baki ki baate ghar aaka batati hoon.(to kamala and vitthal) aai-baba ab mujhe jana hoga bahut raat ho gayi hai.

Kamala- ab tu kaha jaa rahi...

Kalpi- ghar..

Kamala- ghar..beta tu ab yahi rahegi hamre saath...kahi jaane ki kya jaroorat hai?

Kalpi- aai kaise batu tujhe bato ki main yaha nahi ruk sakti...mere jaana bahut jarori hai...amin ashu ko (in mind darsh aur tiya) waha akela nahi chod sakti.per tujhe jab bhi mujhse milne ka maan kare bas ek call kar dena main aa jayungi.

Kamala- tu kahi nahi jaa rahi hai ye akhri faisla hai aur mujhe iss per koi bhaise nahi chahiye?

Kalpi- aai dekh samjane ki koshish kar main yaha nahi ruk sakti..mujhe jana hi hoga but main wada karti hoon ki main tujhse milne aati rahungi.abhi main jaa rahi hoon abhut late ho gaya hai baad main wapas aayungi

(after that kalpi did not stop to listen to anyone ..all are dumbstruck of her behaviour but that time she only thinks about tiya and darsh)

(kalpi take a taxi to go to home bcoz she come with raghav and she didn't want to go with him)

Kalpi (pov)- sorry aai but main waha nahi reh sakti...ab tak sab kuch thik nahi hua hai...abhi bhi kuch hai jo main tumse aur baba se chupa rahi hoon aur wo batane ki himmat abhi mujha main nahi hai...pata nahi jab tujhe tiya aur darsh ke baare main pata chalega toh kaise react karegi...aur tiya aur darsh unse kya kahungi...pata nahi ye sab bahut complecated ho gaya hai...

(thinking of all this kalpi come back to her house)

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(its week kalpi start working with raghav but she not talk with him more then work.. )

In Mall:

Evening: 6:30

(raghav in mall with gauri,sammy and paakhi...ashu, tiya and darsh also there)

Raghav- you all go to your shopping.i'll wait in cafetaria.shopping ho jaane ke baad waha aa jaan

Sammy- ok but wahi per rehna.kahi ghum mat ho jaana.

Raghav- sammy main bacca nahi hoon jo tum mujhe issi instruction de rahe ho.

Sammy- per tumhari harkate toh bachoo jaise hain naa.

(raghav gives sammy an angry look and come to cafetaria...he sit and thinking about kalpi and see pic's of kalpi in mobile)

Raghav (pov)- thank god ki tum thik-thak laut aayi ho..agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh kabhi apne aap ko maaf nahi kar pata...ab bas ek baar tumse baat karke maafi mangni hai...

(raghav thinking this that time tiya come there and sit front table of raghav...that time gauri comes there and notice tiya she siting exactly like raghav, rubbing her nose like him, straightening her hair like him, raghav bite his lips tiya also do the same.gauri gose to her, catches her by her ear and takes her side corner)

Gauri- who are you and why are you copying raghav.you don't know its bad manners to copy.

Tiya- i'm not copying him may be he was copying me.( gauri laugh on that) btw who are you and why are you asking me this question.unse jayada manners hai mujh main.

Gauri- main uski maa hoon...aur sorry for disturb you.mujhe laga ki tum usko copy kar rahi ho.

Tiya- ok no problem...misunderstanding kisi ko bhi ho sakti hai but ya apke bete bahut khadoos hai...

(tiya leave from there but that time 1 big banner is fall on raghav..tiya see this and yelling to raghav to get out the way...raghav ducking safely out of the way as the banners fall to the ground.raghav looks tiya and she looks quite scared of him.gauri runs towords raghav)

Gauri- your all right..tumhe kahi chot toh nahi lagi

raghav- i'm allright mom don't worry.lets go. (he is shock ..so he is fought to say thank you to tiya)

(raghav leave from there but stop by tiya's words.)

Tiya- i saved your life..you should say thanks to me Mr.flower chor.

(raghav trun and looks at her)

Tiya- mujhe thank you bolne ki habbit nahi hai.

Tiya- ye toh bahut buri habbit hai you need to change it.my mom say's gratitude and forgiveness that makes one human

(on that line raghav remeber kalpi...)but main kisko ye bol rahi hoon..go to hell..mujhe aapke sorry aur thank you ki jarorat nahi hai..bye

Raghav- hey stop...thank you for saving my life.

(ashu and darsh come there)

Ashu- tiya tum thik ho hona aur kya hua yaha?

Darsh- lagta hai tiya ne phirse inke saath fight ki hai..dekho ye banner yaha gira hua hai?

(ashu look at tiya)

Tiya- don't look me like this...main kuch nahi kiya..wo banner inpe girne wala tha main inki jaan bachayi that's it.

Darsh- what?tumhe toh kahi chot nahi lagi naa.

Tiya- don't panic...main thik hoon...chalo ab chalte hai...i want to go home.(to raghav) and app...apki jaan bachyi isliye don't think that i like you..i always hate u MR.flower chor.

Darsh(to ashu in small voice)- maasi chalo warna tiya phirse inke saath fighting start kar degi..

Ashu (to darsh in small voice)- you are right (to raghav)- sir we want to leave now..take care..bye.

(after this all leave from there...but from that time raghav feel connection with tiya & darsh and thinking about them)

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Chapter- 12

In Raghav's office

Night: 9:00

(kalpi is angry on ashu for she sign the tiya and darsh school picnic permission letter)

Kalpi- how could you ashu...tum issa kaise kar sakti ho? ek toh tum in dono ko yaha office le aayi?wo toh acha hai ki raghav yaha nahi hai warna pata nahi kya ho jata?upper se tumne mujhe bina bataye in dono ko picnic permission letter per sign kar ke submit bhi kar diya?ashu main...

(ashu stop her)

Ashu- meri jaan..chill relax...1st Mr.singhania abhi office nahi aane wale...main confirm kar liya hai and picnic jaane main kya problem hai? 2 din ki toh baat hai...kal subah jaayenge aur parso shaam tak wapas...so don't get panic and jaane do unhe

Kalpi (in angry tone)- ashu tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta...wo dono kahi nahi jaa rahe hai (to tiya and darsh) sun liya tum dono ne tum kahi picnic nahi jaa rahe ho.

(tiya kiss on kalpi's cheeks on this line)

Tiya- thank u mom aapne hi bol diya..i don't like this picnic.bahut bore hoti hai ye school picnic's .ismain adventure hi nahi hota.

Kalpi- toh phir tum kyun jaa rahi ho?

Tiya- bcoz of teacher...she force me to come

Darsh- i also don't want to go?

Kalpi- why? tumhe picnic per jana toh pasand hai phi kyun mana kar rahe ho?

Darsh- mom ager hum chale gaye toh aap toh yaha akele ho jaayoge.and iss new city main akele kaise rahoge?

Tiya- darsh is right mom...humain nahi jaana.

Kalpi- don't worry about me angel's.maine apni poori life isse city main rahi hoon.main reh loongi aur tum log picnic jaayoge.mom aapke bina reh legi.now go and wait in car mamma abhi aati hai.

(tiya and darsh go from there)

Ashu- kya baat hai jaan-e-maan achanak ye palti kyun?

Kalpi- 1st of all stop calling me that...and 2nd i realise that meri wajah se wo apna bachpana kho rahe hai..main chati apna bachpan fully enjoy kare..main nahi chati ki ko meri tarah time se pehle hi bade ho jaaye.main chati hoon ke mere angels apni innosance kabhi naa khoye.

(raghav comes on last line)

Raghav- ye angels kaun hai? (kalpi and ashu shock to see raghav there)..tumne bataya nahi ki ye angels kaun hai?

Kalpi- angle's means farishte...hum unhi ke baare main baat kar rahe the..but app iss time pe yaha kya kar rahe hai?aur apne kisi ko office se baher jaate hue dekha kya?

Raghav- 1st ye mera office hai main yaha kabhi bhi aa jaa sakta hon and 2nd main apne cabin se aa raha hoon so mujhe nahi pata ki kaun aaya aur kaun gaya...main tumhre cabin se bacho ki aawaaj suni isliye dekhne chala aaya.

(kalpi looks ashu in anger and said how could you that type of ir-responsible throw eyes and turn towords raghav)

Kalpi- mere yaha koi bache nahi hai Mr.singhania.wo toh ashu mujhe preshaan karne ke liye awaaj nikal rahi thi.now hatiye mujhe late ho raha hai main ghar jaa rahi hoon aap bhi ghar jaayie.( to ashu) lets leave ashu.

(kalpi and ashu leave and raghv thinking that unse awaaj suni thi and kalpi is hiding somthing)

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------In moring:

School: 2:00 PM

(kalpi come to trop tiya and darsh)

Kalpi- plz angels ek dosre ka khayal rakhna and group chod ke kahi mat jana aur...

(tiya cut her sentense)

Tiya- aur khana time per khana..

Darsh- always teachee ke saath rehna.

Tiya- fighting mat karna..

Darsh- mom ab tak ye baat aap humain ab tak 65 time bol chuki hain...night main 30 time and moring se 35 times.

(that time teacher said to all come we want to go...so they left...)

(its somtime left from start journey and its night...bus stop working in midway)

Teacher- plz kids niche mat utrna..gaadi thik hone main time lagega so yahi per raho.

(but after somtime tiya see a puppy and see some car come towords the puppy...tiya run towords puppy and stop car...raghav & sammy come out of the car)

Raghav- what are you doing in front of car ager kuch ho jata toh?

Tiya- if ager isko kuch ho jaata toh..i want to save him only.if i'll not come between you and his then you hit him by your car.

raghav- main rukh jata isse dekh kar..

Tiay- toh ruke kyun nahi...app rukte toh mujhe nahi aana padta isko bachane ke liya.

Sammy-you 2 stop fighting..and you sweetheart itni raat ko aap yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Tiya- main picnic jaa rahi thi per hamari bus raste main badh ho gayi.

sammy- oh princess app ko ise bus se nahi utrna chahiye..its not safe btw kaha hai aapki bus?

Tiya- trun and says there (she point towords that palce where bus is stand )

Sammy- chalo ..tumhe bus tak chod ke aate hai.

Tiya- no main jaa sakti hoon.bus yahi pass main hi hai

raghav-no its not safe..hum tumhe chodte hai chalo.

(they come there where bus is stop but bus is not there all 3 are shocke...and other side teacher don't know that tiya is not bus and all kids are sleeping so darsh also sleeping so usko bhi pata nahi hai ki tiya bus se uter gayi hai)

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