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Posted: 11 years ago
Both chapter's are awesome...
i loved it...
thank god raghav aur samy ne tia ko dekh liya...
can't wait to see raghav's reaction after knwing truth...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chapter anu
thanks for double chapters
really like kalpi tiya and daksh conves.
Lots of hugs to u
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wonderful updates😊
tiya is same as raghav..
loved it...
interesting precap..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update👏👏 continue soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Interesting tia n raghav saath me
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gudiyalovesguru, shikha-aggarwal, sharanya0011, nirosha_reedy, rani214
thank you so much for reply.hope u all like the the story.i update next part plz read and reply.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aru18

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thank you so much for reply.hope u all like the the story.i update next part plz read and reply.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter- 13

(raghav, sammy and tiya come there where bus was stand but now bus is not there..they are leave)

Tiya- oh...no...bus toh chali gayi ab kya hoga? (to raghav) aap jab bhi mujhe milte hai kuch naa kuch gadbad jaror hoti hai...dekha aapki waja se meri bus chali gayi..

Raghav- meri wajah se?main kya kiya?bus se niche tum utri thi?kisne utrne ke liya kaha tha tumse...

Tiya- ager main nahi niche nahi aati toh ye puppy ki jaan chali jaati..

(raghav answer her back sammy stop him)

Sammy- plz u to stop fighting..ye fighting karne ka time nahi hai hamain problem ka kuch solution dhoodna hai...so thodi der ke liye shaan raho

(its haif and hour left...raghav park his car in road side..and tiya sit in car's bonnet...)

Raghav (in angry tone)- its half and hour ...hum kab tak yaha ise khade rahenge...kya tumhe lagta hai ki iski bus yaha wapas aayegi?

Sammy- haann...ager unko pata chala hoga ki ye gaadi main nahi hai toh..

Raghav- aur ager unko subah tak nahi pata chala toh...toh kya hum subah tak yahi wait karenge.

Sammy- your right (to tiya) hey princess hum yaha ab jayada wait nahi kar sakte..bahut raat ho gayi hai..

Tiya- toh thik ab aap mujhe mahableshwar chodenge...waise bhi aap bhi toh wahi jaa rahe hain naa

Sammy- ok..no problem hum tumhe waha chod denge...

(raghav interupt)

Raghav- what? sammy tumpagal ho agye ho.hum isko kaise chodenge aur kaha?humain khud kuch pata nahi waha ke baare main aur hum waha meeting ke liye jaa rahe hai...iski teacher ko kaha se dhodhnege.

Sammy- toh kya hum isko yahi sadak pe chod denge..

Raghav- main ne toh nahi kaha...

Sammy- then what ab tum hi batado ki aaage kya karna chahiye.

(raghav think somthing & call someone)ab tum kise caal kar raho raghav?

Raghav- wait...(raghav call ashu & see pick up the phone)hello...ashwini

Ashu- haaan...but aap kaun

Raghav- hi main raghav bol raha hoon...

Ashu- ho..boliye sir, itni raat ko call kiya..kuch kaam tha?

Raghav- haan..wo fighter cock mere saath hai

Ashu (in mind)-fighter cock...oh no he means tiya..tiya aur inke saath...lekin wo tho ..

Raghav- hello...are u there?

Ashu- haan sir,,yahi hoon main...btw wo aapke pass kya kar rahi hai?

(raghav told her full story) kya aap tiya ko phone denge plz.

Raghav- ye lo tumhari massi tumse baat karna chati hai...

Tiya- what?apne massi ko kyun caal kiya?ab wo pakka mom ko bata degi...i hate you...(and tiya take phone from raghav's hand) (to ashu) massi 1st plz don't shout, 2nd plz mom ko mat batana and 3rd i'm sorry dubara ye mistake nahi hogi. (and she give the phone back)

Ashu- hello sir...

Raghav- tumhe kaise pata ki usne phone mujhe diya hai?

Ashu- usko ache se janti hoon main...wo humesha yahi karti hai jab usko daat nahi khani hoti...btw app chinta mat kijiye main abhi tiya ki teacher ko phone karti hoon...aap jaha hai main unko bol deti hoon ki tiya ko wahe se leke jaaye.

Raghav- hey don't worry iski jarorat nahi hai...main bhi mahabaleshwar jaa raha hoon only tell me that ki wo kaha rukne wale hai main tiya ko waha chod dunga.

Ashu- sorry...but excatly place toh mujhe bhi nahi pata...but ya give me 5 min...main phone karke phir aapko batati hoon.

Raghav- nahi uski jaroorat nahi hai...if you don't no then main usko apne saath leke jata hoon.abi bahut raat ho gayi toh kal subah tum mujhe bata dena ki wo kaha hai..meeting ke baad main khud isko nke pass chod ke aayunga...haan bas unko bol dena ki wo mere saath hai warna wo pareshaan ho jaayenge.

(ashu say ok and cut the call)

Tiya- massi ne kya kaha?

Raghav- kuch nahi...tum mabhi hamre saath aa rahi ho..kal tumhe hum tumhari teacher ke pass chod denge.

Tiya- aapke saath...per main apko jaanti bhi nahi hoon toh aapke saath kaise chal sakti hoon...mamma kehi ki strangers per bharosa nahi karte.

Sammy- ohh...phir ye toh bahut badi problem ho gayi...koi baat nahi hum dost ban jate hain then hum strangers nahi honge...so hi...mera sammy hai..& ye raghav hai...aur aap ka naam

Tiya- tiya ka...( tiya is saying kalpana but that time raghav's phone ring...raghav see the number and then cut the call)

Sammy- kaun tha?why are you cut the call?

Raghav- koi nahi?bus wo kal ki meeting ki reminder ke liye phone tha..but abhi mere mood nahi hai baat karne ka..now shall we leave..

Sammy- lets go...( to tiya) come princess..

Tiya- ok..chalo..(

Raghav- tum is puppy ko leke kaha aa rahi ho?isko yahi per chod do ab..

Tiya- no ager phir se kisi problem main aa gaya tho...main isko yah nahi chodungi

Sammy- raghav plz abhi nahi...if she wants to take puppy with her then plz usko karne do.waise bhi wo tumhari baat nahi maane wali.so don't even try.

(raghav, sammy, tiya reach hotel...tiya is sleeping back sit of raghav's car)

Sammy- hey princess hum hotel aa gaye..chalo now niche utro (said this sammy trun and see her but she is sleeping)

Raghav- aare ye toh so gayi...ab kya kare sammy?

Sammy- ruk main isko uthata hoon..

Raghav- nahi ruk...main isse god main uthata hoon tu jakar room's chaabi le?

Sammy- isko toh tum leke jaayoge but is puppy ka kya?

Raghav- usko tum apne room main leke jaana...wo mere room main nahi rahega.

Sammy- ok relax..chilla mat warna wo phir se jaag jaayegi

(raghav take tiya in his room)

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In moring:

Raghav's room :

(raghav wake up and see tiya is not in room and he is panic...raghav go to sammy's room)

Raghav- sammy open the door...where are u?open the door sammy?

Sammy- kya hai raghav..kyun subah subah meri nindh karab kar raha hai...

Raghav- tiya room main nahi hai...

(here that sammy is in shock and open the door quickly)

Sammy- what do u mean tiya room main nahi hai...kal raat ko wo tumhre sath hi thi naa then ab kaha chali gayi?

Raghav- i don't no...wo mere saath hi so rahi thi but jab main subah utha to waha nahi thi.

Sammy- wo waha se kaha jaa sakti hai raghav...tune thik se poore kamre ko cheak kiya tha naa?

Raghav- haan maine poora room dekh liya wo kahi nahi thi.

Sammy- oh god phir kaha jaa sakti hai...chal reseption per poochte hai

( raghav and sammy ask abot tiya to reseption but they said they did not see her)

Sammy- i think ki wo yaha se bahar nahi gayi hai..ager jaati to inko jaror dikhta.ek kaam karte hai phir se room main cheak karte hai (raghav and sammy come to the room and see tiya there)ye toh yahi hai...khamakha tumne subah meri nind karab kar di.

(raghav hug tiya)

Raghav- kaha thi tum?kitna dar gaya tha main...bina bataye koi jaata hai kya?

Tiya- relax Mr.singhania main toh gaadi se apna sac lene gayi thi aap usko wahi bhool aaye the..and main aapke liye note bhi choda tha..look (tiya show the note that she wrote for raghav)

Sammy- ohh...how sweet princess...but u did wrong if tum raghav ko bata kar jaati toh acha hota

Tiya- u r right (raghav) sorry Mr.singhania i'll not do this again.now chalo 8 baje gaye hai i want to go mandir.

Raghav- kya? 8 baje hai...its late...9 baje meeting hai.

Tiya- no 9 baje nahi 11:30 ko meeting hai.

Raghav- ye kab hua?sammy tune mujhe batay kyun nahi.

Sammy- ye sawal toh mujhe tumse poocha chahiye ki..

(tiya stop them)

Tiya- plz stop... ye aaj morning main hua..(to raghav) they call u for reminder..but i sadi that ki meeting 9 baje nahi balki 11:30 ki hoge.

Raghav (angry tone)- tumne ye kya kiya aur kisi ko pooch ke?tumhe pat abhi iska ajaam kya hoga?

Sammy -raghav plz shant ho jaa bachi hai use galti ho sakti hai.

Tiya- no main koi galti nahi ki...he need to rest ye kal poori night drive kar rahe the...and itni subah koi meeting rakta hai?so main unko bola ki wo meeting baad main kare and they agrred.

Sammy- really...wo such main maan gaye?

Tiya- haan now plz jaldi ready ho jaao mujhe mandir jana hai.and u Mr.singhania spiecally u...

(said this tiya left from there and go to sammy's room)

i want to explore all sides of raghav and tiya's relationship..so that's why i''l go little slow...hope u like this part.plz share u views and hit like.thank you so much for liking my story to all.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update!! Liking the relationship between Raghav abd Tiya. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chapter
tiya is too cute
really like all the scenes between raghav and tiya
continue soon

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