love start after hatred part 2 updated on 5/7

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part 1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109259969

part2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109568433



Character sketch

Hi guys thanks for ur love & wonderful comments which encourage me to write so I'm back here again with my new os.😊😆😆

I hope u like this.

So here is the character sketch.

Jadhav family:

4 members in their family

Vithal, kamla, kalpana, pakya.

There is no pakhi & kamla mother daughter relation here kamla is totally belong to kalpi.& she love her daughter & her son.

Singhania family.

There are 5 members in their family.

Vikram singhania:guari singhania's husband.

Guari singhania .with her 3 Childs, raghav singhania, samar singhania both are twins & pakhi singhania who is the apple of her family eyes.

Kapoor's family:

Sahil, neetu & prem kapoor, ria kapoor (new character) prem's sister.

I hope u like this

So here a bit of story part.

Kalpana is really irritated with pakya becoz he love a girl & she is a daughter of army chief Vikram singhania, who is really strict & full of attitude in her eyes..

in kalpana's pov pakhi is not the right choice for her brother.& same raghav & sammy thinking they don't want their sister to marry a man who is not interested in army they want their sister to marry major , or caption , as it's their dream .both of them are major & caption in Indian army.

Today jhadhav are going to meet singhania's for further proceeding. Where vithal is really nervous becoz it's his first attempt to meet someone for his son marriage, whether people around the world know him as a successful business man but he is a simple leaving man with high thinking. Kalpi is trying to pacify his dad nervousness.

She is filling his dad ear about pakhi, she thinks that she is arrogant & rude like her brothers, she know raghav & samaira she meet them in party she actually don't like army man. But it's her bad luck that her brother falls in love with pakhi singhania.

Kamla is also worried for her daughter who is trying her best to change her brother mind, but all in vain.

Kamla is actually worries becoz today her daughter is coming with them to singhania s mansion for pakya proposal, she is worried as she know that how her daughter hates army people, & after marriage how she will manage both her child's antic , she know is difficult for her to handle kalpi, she know her she is too stubborn & hot temper & now she is praying with god to help her,

That's it I hope u all like if u want me to continue then let me know, if not then also I will write this if I get more comments & like here.😆

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Saanjh26 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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he he he me 1st..
continue soon
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please continue dear, I like it!
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awesome this one I am really looking forward to
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U made my day with Pakhi being Raghav sister lol
Amazing start
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Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

U made my day with Pakhi being Raghav sister lol
Amazing start

ha ha ha yes now no more rakhi n all confusion😆
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Awesome story happy poo raghav's sister
pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow thts intrsting concept
klpi hate army man
and pakya is in love with paakhi
awsom
tht best thing paakhi is ragav sis
lol
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KReyAS

wow thts intrsting concept

klpi hate army man
and pakya is in love with paakhi
awsom
tht best thing paakhi is ragav sis
lol
cont soon
thnx fr pm

welcome dear & thanks for ur comment😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks u so much guys for liking this.


Part1:

Jadhav's reaches Singhania mansion. Singhanias welcome them.

Kalpi glance here & there & then she start making faces. kamla notices her & nudge on her arm.

Kalpi give her mother an irritated look.

Then guari singhania asked them to sit.

All sit.

Then sammy & raghav comes down.

Then Vikram singhania introduce him with vithal.

Vikram:hello MR jhadhav I'm glad to meet u, I know u r a busy man , but I'm really grateful to u that u r here in this short notice.

Vithal:ohh plz don't say this mr. singhania, don't embarrassed me well it's nice to meet & for bacho ki khushiyo ke lie to maa baap time nikla hi lete he.

Vikram:agreed.

Then vikram introduce raghav & sammy to them

Vikram meet my son raghav he is a caption in airforce ,& meet my another son sammy he is major in navy.

Kalpana:sorry to say this uncle but in ur home is everyone in army.

Kamla again nudge her & say in low voice to keep quite.

Vikram laugh on this & say yes in my family everyone is in army. U knows we love our nation it's my pleasure to serve my country.

Kalpana gave a fake smile to them.

Kalpana:that's great uncle but sorry again when u r in mood to serve us, I means I'm thirsty,

Vikram look towards her wife who is really embarrassed & order servants. For water & nasta,

Raghav in his mind this girl is too much,

Sammy:bro , don't u think she thought that she so smart,

Raghav: u right sammy, but what we can do pakhi love her brother.

& we have to bear her.

Sammy:yes bro , I don't why pakhi fall for him.

Just then pakhi enters there with tray in her hand with tea.she offer them tea.

First vithal kamla, then pakya , pakya look at her & they have an eye lock.

& kalpi is noticing this is irritated, and then pakhi turns to kalpi & offer her tea.

But she refused by saying that she didn't drink tea, she drink coffee so if u don't mind will u plz bring that for me.

Pakhi nodded in yes & moves towards the kitchen.

Kamla in her low voice with smile on her face: kalpi beta I know u r not comfortable here, I know u hate army men, but beta ur brother love her, so plz be gentle with her.

Kalpana: look at mother & smiled back.

Pakhi comes there with coffee for kalpi.

Kalpi takes that & smile to her after one sip her eyes widen after that sip she placed that mug on table.

With an irritated look forced smile on her face.

Guari noticed that.

Guari:pakhi beta come here & sit with ur would be in law.

Kalpi look at her & think that how can u bro , why u fall love with her, she don't even know how to make coffee she added salt in that .

& she looks towards raghav & sammy they are looking at her

They all staring at each other. Kamla who is looking at them noticed that.

Kamla :bappa plz aaj bach lena kal sach me apke mandir me ake Prasad chadaugi.

All 3 busy in staring at each other.

After sometime kamla say I like pakhi she is perfect for my son.& she gift her one box.

Then she makes her wear her khandani bangles & asked her to take care of them as they are precious for them.

Pakhi says she do that & she touches their feet,then without wasting a sec kamla nudge vithal & then she told singhnaia's that they are leaving & invite them to visit their hme.

Guari say :yes we did

Then kamla pinch kalpi who is busy in her staring session

Kalpi:oouch maa.

Kamla:chale beta.

Kalpi:yes mom.

& then they all leave from.

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