LOVE AS DEVOTION -ff update ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART-1
Kalpi meet up with a huge n terrible accident her family n ppl around presume her dead except raghav.😃
Raghav whose really in a inconsolable state tried very hard 2 find her but failed n helpless while doing dat
puky try 2 console rags but rags shout at her n dis time d real old anger mode "stay away puky"😆 she reply in returns raghav im ur wife n I have a rite on u rags dis time madly no u don't have any rite n even I never c u as my wife coz 4 me my life n wife only kalpi he tell her whole sindoor fiasco n 1 yr revenge story but dat puky keep hymin but we r married legally raghav!!😡 rags relpied wat marriage I never luved u n never will nt in future nt in present👏. I only luved kalpi n always will !!!👏pakhi said but raghav she's nomore she's dead !!! rags shouted at her badly😡 how dare u say dat my kalpi is alive she luv me so much she cant leave me coz she knws I die without her😭 .But nw I cud give u 1 thing pakhi question her wat do u mean??? rags said I mean DIVORCE coz 4 u I only have dis puky begged her but he already made d paper plzzz sign it fast 😆just then gauri arrived😡wat r u saying she again started blackmailing him but rags said stop it stop it u still care bout ur revenge I lost d 1 I luv d most n still hyming d same tune sadly but I have 2 say dat my life wud b different if I didn't have u back in my life gauri stunned at dis😳 but again started her back story wat Kapoor did 2 her🥱but nw rags took a stand I made up my mind im givin divorce 2 puky n puky still in shocked state n listenin al their conversation.
Gauri still nt convinced n said u have 2 do dis 4 our family sake rags shouts "ENOUGH" f9 u want ur revenge have it but let me do dis 1st he throw kerosene in whole body n ready with matchstick on d other hand nw tell me mom u want ur revenge or ur only son ,dis time gauri luked scared n puky cryin no raghav don't do it but he didn't listen 2 any1 den gauri agree yes I want my son I will 4get bout dis revenge I promise son just throw dat matchstick away then he asked puky 2sign which she signed unwillingly after al begging😆he also gave Kapoor property as 4 alimony so dat al chapter 2 b ended nicely n finally dey r divorced👏 (after al drama atleast here dey do😆)
rags leave Kapoor mansion leaving puky who's cryin like our famous Godzilla version😆 n here rags again started his famous mind talkin😆 I wish kalpi I took dat stand😭earlier atleast den d situation wud b different coz then ur here with 😭
now a very handsome stud hot lukin guy arrived at a hospital asking d doctor did She recover its been a month doctor yes she is .
(ahhh... finally we c our angel kalpi)😳
Yug asked kalpi hey r u ok she said im f9 who r u btw im Yug Raheja then doctor arrive ask her do u remember d last thing happen 2 u kalpi... blank kalpi took huge effort still unable no doc I don't remember anything plzz help me y I cant remember doc asked her 2 relax n gave her sleeping injection😲doc discuss d matter with yug he tell yug dat she lost her memory yug😲
So yug tuk her Delhi with him where his family live which includes a cute granma his parents n his elder but nice sister n after cumin there kalpi got 2 knw dat Yug Raheja is a famous n richest business tycoon of delhi.
Even despise of dat kalpi is really obliged 2 meet every1 coz everybody is so generous 2wards her n infact she find every1 so down 2 earth.
now its been actually 1 yr we have our rags whose back with his old arrogant side(which we al luved) he had a business proposal with (guess wat who ...ya) Yug Raheja😉
Its my 1st plzzz comment regarding it 2😲i mean if im bad or not
part 2 update on page 3 do check frdz I wud luv 2 c ur comments
part 3 update on page 5 do check frdz I wud luv 2 c ur comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear u can also continue its amazing...
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I think you should continue the story. Like it so far. Please continue 😊
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oh thankz yaar 😊but lets c any1 else whose more expert at dis cud sneak up coz I do have a busy lifestyle I thought any1 whose interested al welcum 2 carry 4ward it actually I was just thinking dat n I just wrote scenario even then u want me 2 continue it'll take time😊 datz y I more want any ff specialist cud help me with it😉 u knw our forum r surrounded with gems of talents😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I believe that you're very capable of writing an FF based on what you've written so far. It's really nice..you should continue. 😛
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Plz plz continue the story...the idea is urs and it is awesome.. Plz plz continue..
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you should continue. It is good. Arrogant Raghav singhania is back. Kalpana has lost her memory. It is great way to make them fall in love with each other again with third wheel yug.
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This is awesome... Please continue
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Its nice dear...continue soon...😳
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You are really writing good. I think u should continue this:)

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