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Posted: 11 years ago
Too good yaa.. I am very happy for prem.. I fell raghav is innocent n I really wish khushi is nt pakhi n rags daughter..update as soon as possible dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's a good thing Prem saw Raghav or else Kalpi plan would failed
Prem and Kalpi are amazing
I like when Prem text Kalpi saying her manju will give her lots of ice cream lol
Kalpi remembering her happy moments with Raghav only for that bloody witch to call and interrupt RagNa cute moments of memories
Kalpi hurting herself was awful and I like how her Raghav came and dress her wounds
Can I kill Pakhi plzz 🤢 she is so annoying
I'm so happy for Prem finally he get to hear his daughter voice
I hope he reunite with his family soon
As for Kalpi she kept on doubting Raghav which I don't blame her entirely but how can she not see Pakhi evilness. Now she think Raghav make Sheetal leave but where as Pakhi is the culprit
I hope Kalpi realized Raghav is innocent and make Pakhi pay for all her deeds
Beautiful updates
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Wow mindblowing update vish!!!! Amazing is not the word!!! I was sitting on the edge of my chair without even batting an eyelid throughout!

Phew i also forgot to breathe!!!

Thank God Raghav did not misunderstand Kalpi seeing Prem n her together! Oh no Kalpi has to really do something about Sammy! And where was this friend when Kalpi was falsely accused and defamed? Now he is so interested to protect Raghav! Does he have any idea what she has gone through? Well then its about time Sammy gets to taste the bitter truth and I want Sammy to support Kalpi this time!!!

Love it!!! Oh no please dont show Pookhi to be smarter than Kalpi I hate it! Kalpi has to stop getting emotional as this is hampering her decision making abilities and not letting her see the truth!!!

Oh I cried for Kalpi today if not for Prem what would have happened to her! She was left all alone fending for herself! her parents her love no one stood by her! Her so called enemy finally was with her! Love the bonding between Prem and Kalpi! Both were abused by their own families and taken advantage of! Both have gone through the pain of losing love from their life and misunderstanding them! The part where Kalpi punishes herself for being weak in front of Raghav made me emotional! Uff enough is enough cant see my Kalpi in so much pain!

Paakhi is taking advantage of this emotional weakness!! So Maria has a daughter named Pari does that mean khushi is really Rakhi daughter🤢 or did maria have twins! This we can know only when Prem gets to see Pari! OMG this is all so exciting! Please update more soon!!! I cant wait! Yuck I hate Raghav for being so helpless! Why the hell does he not understand what Paakhi is trying to do!
For 5 years he was rude to her now all of a sudden he is being kind to her just for Khushi!!! no no no!!! Come on where is my akduuu Raghav!! Please bring him back in form!! Tujhe meri kasam!!!

LOL

Too dramatic I guess! But you are a fab writer! dil khush kar ditta! Now I know why in olden days Maharajas used to remove their jewellery to appreciate an artist! Wish I were a queen then I would have gifted you my necklace on hearing your story!! LOL he he me a queen!!😆
But right now this is all I can afford 🤗👏

You are a ⭐️


Ohh Priya... Just a detailed feedback n I loved it. Sammy has more role to play in the story.. Till now no one is aware of Kalpi's side of story but soon.. not even Sammy as they are under the impression that she left Rags coz he slept with Pakhi.. though they never used their brain to know how she knows it.

Don't worry about Pakhi... my Kalpi is smartest. Prem and Kalpi both are frnz coz of situation.. n their fshp will stay for life. i feel Prem is the one who has the most worst childhood coz Pakhi had Kamla to love her and guide her, Rags somewhere was with his father n after that with Kamla, Kalpi had Vitthal though he wasn't a great support but loved her a lot. but what can we expect from Neetu n Sahil. So I want Prem to find happiness in his life.

For Prem maria story u have to wait for next 1-2 parts. U will get to know about Pari-Khushi soon.

n I assure u that soon Rags will wear hi thinking cap and will be back in the form. Right now he is too messed up to understand the things happening around him.

I love u Sweetheart.. I am assuming that u r the queen and u have given me ur diamond necklace...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

Wow...excllent story...

u ar good writer...👏

Plez, I'm waitg for ur update..😃


Thank u dear.. M glad u r liking it. Will try to update soon.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank u dear.

Originally posted by: eishe10

Brilliant updates!! Continue soon.


Thank u.. will try to continue asap.😊

Originally posted by: aryagr

Lovely update. W8ing for ur next update.


Thank u 😊 I will not make u wait for long.


Thank u dear.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Very nice update😛


Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: sunyy

Good update but didn't like rags feeding paks


Thank u n sorry for that but Pakhi has to counter attack else Kalpi's war will be one sided.

Originally posted by: jiya007

Read both the updates they are awesome


Thanks Jiya.

Originally posted by: sumasridhar

Super yaar. James bond007


Thank u.. JB007.. i love him..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK


Chill i'll keep updating my ffs and you keep updating yours😉
Btw fabulous update... So prem ko twins hue the kya?? Please please don't make khushi rakhi's daughter... its really🤢..
Loving the story.. its really intriguing.. hating paakhi a lot... hope sab kuch jaldi thik ho jaaye..😉
continue soon..


Thank u for liking it. can't reveal anything about Khushi.. being a writer of revenge story u can understand my reason.😊

Will try to update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Awesome update.Loved the way Kapli and Prem handling the revenge against Raghav hope after finding the Kalpi truth this time Sammy will confront her instead of going to Raghav after listening to Kalpi's part may be he feel neither Kalpi is wrong as she has suffered, but same time make that clear to her that Raghav is also innocent. My doubt are confirming that Pakhi is culprit😡Hope Pari should be twin sister of Khushi by this it will confirm that Pari and Khushi r Prem's daughter. Sorry for predicting the story before ur write ups but can't wait after reading ur story simply gone little crazy and predicted all this hope u don't mind. Eagerly waiting for next update.


Sammy is smarter here.. he has already hatched another plan to trap Kalpi.. U will know about in next or next to next update. Don't worry, u will love whatever Sammy will do.

Pakhi is Pakhi.😆

No comments on Khushi.

No need to say sorry.. i like it when readers predict the story.. it shows their interest n ur grip on the story.I love u for taking interest in the story n trying to predict the future. I will try to update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Another awesome update. I don't know why you think it's messy 😲 Hate that Pakhi! 😡 Using Khushi to get close to a husband who ignores you. Have some self respect woman! Idiot Rags, ignored the wife and daughter(?) for five long years in the name of a lover and then all of a sudden doing what they ask you and that too in front of the same girl you loved. Kalpi is so smart that she took snaps of the drawings Neetu did. Hope she gets what Neetu is trying to tell her. Felt bad for Prem, how will you bear it when you comes to know that your sister wants to keep your mother insane. It was emotional to see Kalpi taking care of Neetu even after knowing she's somewhere responsible for Kalpi's sufferings. She's so good at heart. Finally Prem and Kalpi were able to find out about Maria's whereabouts. Prem got to talk with his daughter. Maria gave her the name Prem decided upon. That shows she still love him. Hope he has a beautiful life with her once everything is settled. So if Prem's daughter is Pari then who's Khushi? Hope it's not rakhi's!


I do not know why i feel that my updates are messy... may be coz like other writers I do not use the difficult english words.. I think the update should be simple so that a person who is not very good in english or just do not want to pay much attention to the update can read it easily but when I read other updates I feel I am not able to match upto their level.

Raghav is a jerk but now m planning to bring him back in action. So do not get angry on him. After all who can think in such way about Pakhi(except us😉).

That drawings has important role in the story and Kalpi will figure it out but I am still confuse about it.. Let's see if I get some way to show them or not.

Kalpi is a kind hearted person.. Though time has made her tough n vicious but she still cares for weaker n right now Neetu is in miserable condition.

PRem-Maria will unite soon. u have to wait to know more about Khushi... May be Rags really did it with Pakhi.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

Resss

Unresss.. I know im very very late sryyy..😊
Double update again! Dats awesum..😃 lyk I got my faavv candy hehehe..
Frstlyyy I lykd d ragna moment.. kalpi n raghav's hug..😉
So u r in a plan of showing raghav innocent to kalpi.. bt she s nt gonna believe him so easily again.. bt this pakhi😡😡 gaining ragahv's attention through khushi.. I hate her..
And prem n kalpi's bondng s gng grt lyk sharing caring n all.. and prem wen he heard his pari's voice well dat ll be a bliss fr him.. abt Sammy I'm sure he ll cum back to show kalpi's truth to raghv.. I hope kalpi ll find out d truth regarding raghav soon.. and poor raghav has to hear taunts from amar.. kalpi's plan s dng well n perfect..
I dunno hw u ll make up d revenge or d wicked plans.. it be realyyy intrestnggg n curious to read.. totally it was amazngg n fantastic updates..


It's ok.. no need to say sorry. M glad finally u unressed it as u are become res queen slowly slowly.

Yep.. I think it's high time that Kalpi knows about Rags innocence but not at a time.. It will happen eventually.

My lovely Pakhi... why u all hate her so much?? She is a sweetheart n always the reason for RagNa reunion... Remember she was the one who informed Kamla about the party in the office when accidental confession took place.. so in a way she is good for our RagNa.

Sammy is surely upto something. For now Prem has to take a back seat n enjoy with his family.

I hope i will be able to fulfill ur hope of a good story.

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