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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Roller coaster ride it was. Smart Kalpi plus emotional Kalpi. Its so sweet to see Prem as Kalpi's best friend witnessing the change in her, that she is more lively now. I am loving him here so much. Raghav-Kalpi scenes were emotional, both still love each other; and Kalpi is for the first time confused about him being the real culprit. There car scenes where Kalpi let down her guard for the first time in front of Raghav was so touching; and later on her breakdown was painful. poor thing is herself so much in pain, pain because she still loves Raghav; and pain because she has been wronged and she wants to take revenge too; because she became weak again after days for Raghav's love. N that Pakhi & Gauri; getting on my nerves now really!

Sammy maybe he & Pakhi will be the one to bring about Kalpi's reality in front of Raghav.Hope its not so soon, and its Kalpi herself who tells this to Raghav. Hating Pakhi so much, n I really doubt of she really is mother of Khushi! 😛 Awesome update, getting interesting day by day.👏 n waiting eagerly for the next one. 😃


🤗 Thank u dear.. m happy u r liking it.

Like ur RagNa love right now m in love with PremNa fshp. I always wanted Kalpi to have a true frn in the show so I thought to use Prem instead of introducing some other character. RagNa love each other from the core but a MU is not letting them come closer.

Pakhi and Gauri were never the lovable characters.😆

Sammy will play his role in next part. Thanks once again.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

What an awesome update it was! Wish I could read the whole story in a day! Glad that Raghav didn't come to know of Kalpi's secret. Thank god for Prem! Poor Sammy, his plans failed again. The camaraderie between Prem and Kalpi was nice. Looks like they could be best friends in future. The relation they started out of majboori has become real strong now. They understand each other so well. Prem is happy to see his partner turned friend is living life again. Reminiscing the past Kalpi let her guard down for some time and Rags got to see a glimpse of old Kalpi. She thought of all the wonderful times they spent together. But reality strikes in the form of Pakhi's phone call. Pakhi is angry on Kalpi thinking she snatched her husband. That dumb woman, doesn't know that he was never hers in the first place. She thinks Khushi is her trump card. Later in the room, Kalpi digging her wound again and punishing herself for getting weak in front of Raghav. Felt really bad for Kalpi. Poor thing, she suffered so much already. It was touching to see Raghav attending to her wounds, crying for her pain. They forgot everything for some time , crying for each other, for their lost love. For the first time she's having doubts whether he's as innocent as her in this whole thing. She decides to give him a benefit of doubt, I think. If she sees that secret room of Rags where he kept all photos of Kalpi, i think she will realise he still loves her. Pakhi seeing all that happened between the lovers decides to take revenge on Kalpi. Hope Kalpi expose her soon.


Kiara..🤗 i wonder how u find so much to write about the crap updates. U r truly an amazinf frn and a great reader who never fails to motivate the writer.

PremNa is already the best buddies n i hope i will do justice to their fshp in further updates. I am happy that u liked RagNa scenes. Pakhi was always dumb.. trying to possess the things which was not hers. So true about Khushi.. she is Pakhi's trump card n i used the same term in next update.😆

She will see the secret room for sure n that will prove Rags innocence. Kalpi started doubting Pakhi so chill. She will find the culprit soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK


going on 12th.. uske baad toh I'll no more be a stalker will come only on sunday😭
so i'm free to dance😆


Haww... I dnt come ol on weekends😭 No issues... for u I will take out time. Till than do not forget to complete ur FFs. 😊 u can write it on sunday as well.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragnaareangel

Yipee me first
awesome update


Congos n thank u so much!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow mindblowing update vish!!!! Amazing is not the word!!! I was sitting on the edge of my chair without even batting an eyelid throughout!
Phew i also forgot to breathe!!!

Thank God Raghav did not misunderstand Kalpi seeing Prem n her together! Oh no Kalpi has to really do something about Sammy! And where was this friend when Kalpi was falsely accused and defamed? Now he is so interested to protect Raghav! Does he have any idea what she has gone through? Well then its about time Sammy gets to taste the bitter truth and I want Sammy to support Kalpi this time!!!

Love it!!! Oh no please dont show Pookhi to be smarter than Kalpi I hate it! Kalpi has to stop getting emotional as this is hampering her decision making abilities and not letting her see the truth!!!

Oh I cried for Kalpi today if not for Prem what would have happened to her! She was left all alone fending for herself! her parents her love no one stood by her! Her so called enemy finally was with her! Love the bonding between Prem and Kalpi! Both were abused by their own families and taken advantage of! Both have gone through the pain of losing love from their life and misunderstanding them! The part where Kalpi punishes herself for being weak in front of Raghav made me emotional! Uff enough is enough cant see my Kalpi in so much pain!

Paakhi is taking advantage of this emotional weakness!! So Maria has a daughter named Pari does that mean khushi is really Rakhi daughter🤢 or did maria have twins! This we can know only when Prem gets to see Pari! OMG this is all so exciting! Please update more soon!!! I cant wait! Yuck I hate Raghav for being so helpless! Why the hell does he not understand what Paakhi is trying to do!
For 5 years he was rude to her now all of a sudden he is being kind to her just for Khushi!!! no no no!!! Come on where is my akduuu Raghav!! Please bring him back in form!! Tujhe meri kasam!!!

LOL

Too dramatic I guess! But you are a fab writer! dil khush kar ditta! Now I know why in olden days Maharajas used to remove their jewellery to appreciate an artist! Wish I were a queen then I would have gifted you my necklace on hearing your story!! LOL he he me a queen!!😆
But right now this is all I can afford 🤗👏

You are a ⭐️
Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...excllent story...

u ar good writer...👏

Plez, I'm waitg for ur update..😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Haww... I dnt come ol on weekends😭 No issues... for u I will take out time. Till than do not forget to complete ur FFs. 😊 u can write it on sunday as well.


Chill i'll keep updating my ffs and you keep updating yours😉
Btw fabulous update... So prem ko twins hue the kya?? Please please don't make khushi rakhi's daughter... its really🤢..
Loving the story.. its really intriguing.. hating paakhi a lot... hope sab kuch jaldi thik ho jaaye..😉
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update. W8ing for ur next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.Loved the way Kapli and Prem handling the revenge against Raghav hope after finding the Kalpi truth this time Sammy will confront her instead of going to Raghav after listening to Kalpi's part may be he feel neither Kalpi is wrong as she has suffered, but same time make that clear to her that Raghav is also innocent. My doubt are confirming that Pakhi is culprit😡Hope Pari should be twin sister of Khushi by this it will confirm that Pari and Khushi r Prem's daughter. Sorry for predicting the story before ur write ups but can't wait after reading ur story simply gone little crazy and predicted all this hope u don't mind. Eagerly waiting for next update.
Edited by Cinderella81 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Kiara..🤗 i wonder how u find so much to write about the crap updates. U r truly an amazinf frn and a great reader who never fails to motivate the writer.

PremNa is already the best buddies n i hope i will do justice to their fshp in further updates. I am happy that u liked RagNa scenes. Pakhi was always dumb.. trying to possess the things which was not hers. So true about Khushi.. she is Pakhi's trump card n i used the same term in next update.😆

She will see the secret room for sure n that will prove Rags innocence. Kalpi started doubting Pakhi so chill. She will find the culprit soon.

Oh Vish! First of all don't tell that you , my awesome writer buddy writes crappy updates. Do you think I gave you my favourite author's name just like that! You are indeed a great writer who revel in mystery. Thank you for considering me motivating and thanks for being an amazing friend. I started really liking Prem in this. At last there's someone to support Kalpi when her family and even her love ditched her. Now its payback time!

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