Kalpana The vicious Girl updt on new thread(24th Nov) - Page 71

Originally posted by: Luvfanfic

OMG ...Pakhi is so evil ...she not even spared her mother. ...why Kalpi doubted her...please book a place for Pakhi in same mental asylum. ...and lot more torture for her..and do justice. ...

Originally posted by: shonali164

knock knock m i late? 😲
chalo atleast aa to gayi yaha 😆 gving cment only for1st part, wl read 2nd part n gv cment on dat. Bear me vishu, i cnt cment at tym on both 😔

wow gr8, sammy's plan flop. [CLAP]
thank god prem saw rags n change topic. Yar vishu u take 360 turn. I thought dey wl fumble bt u totaly change story. I cnt resist its again smart thinking.😉

aur kitna meri kalpi royegi.😭 i cnt see her to digging her wound. I flinch literaly like, she is digging my wound n it is hurting me. 😭

wow rags still remember ice-creame place still, bt kalpi fell weak cz of it, its touching.
Ragna moment is awsm. Rags is med dat wound wich he himself gv her, so emotional scene. Bt 1 thing is gr8 atleast kalpi cn see n think abt rags innocense.

Pakhi 😡 she is trying to use ltl child for her cruel motives. 😡 kill her at last part plz.
Amazing update.
Wl starting to read nxt part n cment asap.
Lv u wishu

Originally posted by: lolor

oh 2 updates...wonderful...love the way story going ahead...I m surprised to myself only I really like this prem over mr majboor...😲

Originally posted by: Anjinie

lovely that Prem got to know that his daughter is alive is it possible for the girls to be twins. if not then is khushi really Raghav and Paakhi's daughter, somehow I think gauri as has a hand in this as well she is probably helping Paakhi

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

It's a good thing Prem saw Raghav or else Kalpi plan would failed
Prem and Kalpi are amazing
I like when Prem text Kalpi saying her manju will give her lots of ice cream lol
Kalpi remembering her happy moments with Raghav only for that bloody witch to call and interrupt RagNa cute moments of memories
Kalpi hurting herself was awful and I like how her Raghav came and dress her wounds
Can I kill Pakhi plzz 🤢 she is so annoying
I'm so happy for Prem finally he get to hear his daughter voice
I hope he reunite with his family soon
As for Kalpi she kept on doubting Raghav which I don't blame her entirely but how can she not see Pakhi evilness. Now she think Raghav make Sheetal leave but where as Pakhi is the culprit
I hope Kalpi realized Raghav is innocent and make Pakhi pay for all her deeds
Beautiful updates

Originally posted by: fairylover

It's ok.. no need to say sorry. M glad finally u unressed it as u are become res queen slowly slowly.

Yep.. I think it's high time that Kalpi knows about Rags innocence but not at a time.. It will happen eventually.

My lovely Pakhi... why u all hate her so much?? She is a sweetheart n always the reason for RagNa reunion... Remember she was the one who informed Kamla about the party in the office when accidental confession took place.. so in a way she is good for our RagNa.

Sammy is surely upto something. For now Prem has to take a back seat n enjoy with his family.

I hope i will be able to fulfill ur hope of a good story.

Originally posted by: fairylover

I do not know why i feel that my updates are messy... may be coz like other writers I do not use the difficult english words.. I think the update should be simple so that a person who is not very good in english or just do not want to pay much attention to the update can read it easily but when I read other updates I feel I am not able to match upto their level.

Raghav is a jerk but now m planning to bring him back in action. So do not get angry on him. After all who can think in such way about Pakhi(except us😉).

That drawings has important role in the story and Kalpi will figure it out but I am still confuse about it.. Let's see if I get some way to show them or not.

Kalpi is a kind hearted person.. Though time has made her tough n vicious but she still cares for weaker n right now Neetu is in miserable condition.

PRem-Maria will unite soon. u have to wait to know more about Khushi... May be Rags really did it with Pakhi.😆

Originally posted by: vasishna

hahaha.. vish

seems lyk u love pakhi a lot Lol.. maybe she d reason fr our ragna reunion bt still I dnt lyk her much..

and I'm sure u ll fulfill our wish by giving us a good story.. no doubt abt dat!

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

I differ to agree with you. It's not about how you use difficult words and all. A writer's success lies in hooking the reader with your story. You have successfully managed that. All your ffs are really good and different from one another. So it doesn't matter if you think your choice of words are not at par with the others. You are a great writer ( abhi daily mujhe yeh kehna padega, kya? ) 😉 Waiting to see the old Raghav Singhania . Glad to hear about Prem- Maria. Can't digest the last statement of yours. Please don't write that Rags did the deed with Khi. I'm gonna throw up 😲