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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
nice update.. QH + EMA>> good combo.
your twists are interesting n moving the story in a thrilling way.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments. if you have any suggestions or idea on what story i should write in the future just tell me and i'll do it.👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 12

Scene 1

Raghav walks in the house with kalpi in his arm, he took her to her room and places her on the bed. Gauri and paki walk in the room pretending to be worried, they ask him questions about kalpi but he didn't answer. He puts the cover on her and sat down then he starts caressing her face lovingly. Gauri and paki look at one another tense then they left the room. Seher and Rehan look at one another not knowing what to do next, when they saw gauri and paki came out rehan cleared his throat getting their attention.

Gauri looks up and smiles at them then she told them to sit down while paki made some tea. Once everyone was settled down gauri asks rehan to explain what happened to kalpi, paki gave them their tea and rehan explained everything that happened. Paki listened and bits her lip then she started thinking to herself you are lucky right now kalpi, but next time no one will save you. She thought before getting up getting their attention.

"You guys must be tiered, come let me show you to your room." She says before leaving

Rehan and seher followed her to the guest room once they were in paki left them. Seher sat down and remembered what happened today, she was overwhelmed and worried for kalpi. On the other hand rehan started changing to go to sleep, once he was done he tried calling his mom but when she didn't pick up he let it go and went to bed.

The next day paki got up to make breakfast for Raghav, when she was done she went to his room to wake him up, she look around the room and realize he wasn't there. Quickly she went to kalpi room and open the door slightly, she could see Raghav asleep on the chair while holding Kalpi's' hand angry she held on to the door tightly then she left to go in her room. Just when she left Raghav woke up, he looks at kalpi still sleeping and sighs then he went to the bathroom and start taking care of her injuries.

While cleaning her injures he was appalled to see a burnt mark on her skin, he clenched his teeth trying to hold his anger. He continues to clean her wound when he heard kalpi wiping, and flinching in her sleep. Gauri not seeing Raghav at the breakfast table decides to look for him; she went to kalpi room and saw him holding her hand. He walks in just in time to hear Raghav making a promise to kalpi. "I promise you kalpi, who ever did this to you will pay dearly, I will not let them go, I will make sure they suffered just like how they made you suffered." He says making gauri tense

"I will not show them any mercy, Even if you beg me to forgive them I will not listen because they have hurt someone that's very important to me. Just like when I place that sindoor on your head that night, I will show you my power as a husband. No one will ever mess with you again because in gods' eyes and mine as well, you're the only Mrs.Singhania." he says surprising gauri

She quietly walk out the room shock, she held on to the wall for support and went to her room. Once she was in she sat down to think this can't be true, Raghav and kalpi married? When did this happen? She thought I made sure they never get married, so then how was it possible that they got married. Was kamla involved in this? Did she put him up to it? She thought with so many questions bubbling in her head. She went to the small god statue that was on top of her table and started crying "how could you let this happened?" she says out loud

"You know how much this revenge means to me, now kalpi will ruin everything." She says before falling on the floor crying

Scene 2

Seher and rehan prepare themselves to leave, when they saw Raghav coming out of kalpi room tiredly. Raghav seeing them gave them a friendly smile "you guys leaving so soon?" he asks

"Yes we have to start driving to Punjab before night falls; I heard it's gonna be a storm today, so we want to have a head start." He says, Raghav thank them for saving kalpi, he told them if they didn't show up kalpi would have been dead. Seher smiles and pats his shoulder, she told him not to think too much about it because now he has his beloved back all thanks to god. Raghav smiles and offers to drop them off to wear rehan left his car. They agreed and soon left with Raghav following behind.

Meanwhile, Kalpi was waking up from her sleep. Her whole body was hurting, she slowly opens her eyes and saw a figure hovering above her, she close and reopen her eyes to get a clear vision of that person. Once she could see she saw paki above her smiling. Paki seeing kalpi fully awake says "you think by doing this you will get his affection."

"I don't know what your talking about paki?" she says confuse

"Don't play dumb with me, faking your injures to get my husbands attention will not make him leave me" She says

Kalpi didn't understand why paki would assume that, angry she says "I was kidnapped paki, and tortured. I would never fake this." She says, but paki cut her off "Save it for someone that cares kalpi."

"Why are you acting like this?" she asks making paki laugh "are you forgetting kalpi, you stole my life everything I had, but this time I will take it back." she says

"I never stole your life paki; if anything I gave you my happiness which was Ai. I can give up everything else except my love for Raghav." She says determined and upsetting paki

"You don't have to because he already accepts me in his heart." She says

"What do you mean by that?" she asks

Paki smirks, she decides to rub it in on kalpi face "Raghav and I slept together." She says shocking kalpi, she felt like the room got closer suffocating her. Paki seeing this smiles and walks away, As soon as she left Raghav came in the room after dropping seher and rehan off. He saw kalpi sitting up and clenching her heart like she was having a heart attack, worried he quickly walks to her. "Are you ok kalpi?" he asks touching her shoulder worriedly.

"DON'T TOUCH ME!!!" she screams while slapping his hands off of her.

"I don't understand kalpi, why are you acting this way?" he asks hurt

"Why?" she says while laughing sarcastically "why indeed Raghav? When I was kidnap instead of looking for me, you were here sleeping with paki." She says coldly surprising Raghav. He tried to explain it to her but she wouldn't listen, she told him to get out because she didn't want to see his face.

He sadly got up and walk to the door, but before he leaves he says "you have to believe me kalpana, I wasn't in my sense. I thought it was you." He says before closing the door.

Kalpi hearing this lay on the bed and cried all she wants to do is see her Ai, even though her mother did her wrong, she needs her right now. Raghav still by the door could hear her still crying; he leans his head on the door and drops down crying himself.

To be continued...

Preview

Scene 1: paki kept going to the bathroom to throw up; gauri being concern calls the doctor. When she came she asks paki some questions and when she answered the doctor smiles.

"Congratulation Mrs. Singhania, you're pregnant" she says just when kalpi and Raghav walk in the room. Shock was on everyone's face, Raghav looks at kalpi who looks about ready to cry while paki smirks and ran to Raghav.

"Can you believe it, we're gonna have a baby" she says putting Raghav hand on her stomach. While he looks at kalpi now crying.

Scene 2: someone walks to the hospital to meet the doctor. She took out the money and says "nice work today, now plan B is in action" she says

"But miss what will happen when they found out the real truth." She says

"They won't, as long as I'm alive they won't." She says not knowing that someone overheard them talking.

Scene 3: Kalpi confront paki in the house, she told her that she was really sick, and how can she play with people's emotion like that. Paki only smiles and says "Just like the way you and kamla ma played with my emotions." She says confusing kalpi

"What are you talking about paki?" she says

"You think I didn't know about your marriage with Raghav, kamla knew how much I love Raghav but she betrayed me and accept your marriage to Raghav. That's why I made sure you and Raghav never got married that night" She says surprising kalpi

"You're the reason why my life was ruined, not only mine but Raghav's too." She says making paki smirks. Kalpi hurt grabs paki hand dragging her to Raghav room to tell him the truth. Paki refusing to go grabs kalpi hair tugging it, kalpi tries to move crying out and grabbing paki hand to free self but she had a strong grip on it.

Raghav hearing the noise came out just in time to see kalpi pushing paki on the floor and paki crying. "KALPI!" he says angrily running to paki to help her up.

Kalpi hearing his voice was surprise, he looks at her and says "I know your angry at me kalpi, but don't take it out on paki. It's not her fault; I'm the one to blame for getting her pregnant." He says

"But Raghav, she's not pregnant; she's been lying to us all." She says making Raghav mad

"Enough kalpi, the doctor came and even showed us proof of her pregnancy, how can you stand their and lie about this." He says

Paki pretends to be hurt making Raghav picks her up. Kalpi upset says "I'm telling the truth Raghav she's lying to all of us. She hired someone to pretend to be a doctor." She says

"ENOUGH KALPI ENOUGH!!" he says "please I don't want to yell at you no more." He says before walking away with paki in his arms. Before he walks in paki room she turns and smirks at kalpi making her sad and frustrated. She watches the door close and promise herself that she will expose paki in front of god himself.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Awesome update!!!! I have been waiting for a long time. I enjoyed reading it. Continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Amazing update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Pakhi😡. I want to kill her! Thank god we didn't have to endure all this Pakhi drama in ema till our ragna was there. Continue soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
amazing update..
wanted to kill pakhi😡
hope kalpi expose pakhi soon..
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Superb update
Want to kill pakhi
Hope kalpi exposes khi soon
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Omg! I want to strangle Pakhi with my bear hands
Hmm... Raghav not believing Kalpi when she told him that porky is not pregnant is awful
Wonderful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
very nice update... but this gave me the same feeling when i watched the last few episodes... scaryy..
keep writing :-)

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