~Ek mutthi Aasmaan~The untold story RagNa

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Hey everyone i wrote a story about RagNa. i'm basically telling what really happened in the episodes. like what they should have done instead. so please check it out and comment. i have other stories of ragna but i wont post them until this story is done. also i will post the other chapters i finished, but i wont continue until i get 20 comments on the page.😊


Chapter 7 has been updates check it out on page 6
Chapter 8 on page 7
Chapter 9 on page 9
Chapter 10 on page 9
chapter 11 on page 11
Chapter 12 on page 12
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Scene1
The scene starts with Kamla entering the house follow by kalpi.

Everyone stopped to turn their heads, as they watch the birthday girl.
Vitthal sensing something was wrong, touched kalpi shoulder.
He turned her around and asked "where were you kalpi?"
Not saying anything she looks at her mother with no expression.
Vitthal smiles and said "I was so worried; you should have told me where you were going."
The dupatta from kalpi head was coming down and you could see the sindoor on her head. Kamla panicking turned of the light. Vitthal could see the tension in her action very clearly. He asked "what's going on, wont you tell me."

Kamla hesitate then said "I'm fine vitthal."
Vitthal stares at Kamla and signs. "Ok... Fine".

He watches Kamla and kalpi walk to the kitchen and thought something is not right with kalpana; I think they're hiding something from me.
Scene 2
Raghav came home; he was very excited because now kalpi is his wife. He promised that he will make sure no one can come between their love, not even Kamla, because today he made kalpana his wife in front of gods. No one will be able to separate them now.

He was going to his room when he saw paki sleeping on the dining table. He comes to her and shook her shoulder. He recalls what happened today when kalpi hugged him and all the moments they had together.

He looked at paki and said "Happy Birthday" then walks away.
Paki, fully awake smiles then says "Raghav remembers my birthday"

Just when she was about to go see him gauri walks towards her. She looked at paki with disgust and said "you are useless as usual, I told you to clean the whole house, instead of you doing that you're here sleeping."
Paki tried to explain but gauri wouldn't hear it, she walked away from her before her temper gets worse.
Scene 3
Kamla is sleeping with Kalpi. She looks at her and cries making her tears fall on Kalpi's hand. Kalpi is up but she pretends to be asleep. The truth is she couldn't sleep, what happened today was overwhelming and emotional. She couldn't get the image of Ai wiping the sindoor from her head and her words to her.
Flashback
Kamla takes her out. Kalpi says no. Kamla says "you don't get it kalpi".

"This sindoor is not a pure relation. It's a sin. Just remove it"

. Kalpi says "no Ai I won't."

Kamla says "it's a precious relation which connects you for the rest of your life. Raghav married Pakhi and this sindoor belongs to Pakhi."
Flashback
Kalpi tries to stop her. Kamla says "leave me. If you try to stop me then you will see my dead face".

Kamla takes a water bucket and throws it on kalpi. Then she says" I am your mom kalpi I know you better".

She takes more water in her fist and rubs all the sindoor from her head. Kalpi is in tears and so is Kamla. There is more sindoor on head Kamla takes more water and throws it at her, removing Raghav's sindoor from her head.
End of flashback
Kalpi starts to cry. When she heard Kamla getting up, she turned around and says in her head once again Ai; you have proved to me who is your favorite. Sometimes I wonder if you're doing it for my benefit.
Scene4
Kamla calls paki and says "I wanted to tell you something".

Pakhi says "I want to tell you something too. When Raghav came home he was so happy".

"He even cut the cake with me. I will win his heart Kamla ma. Tell me this will happen? "Will I get my love?"

Kamla says "yes daughter everything will be okay?"

Pakhi asks "are you happy Kamla ma?

Kamla says "I am happy".

She then asks "tell me what you wanted to say?"

Kamla says "its Kalpi's birthday so people in chowl arranged a party for her. I missed you so much, but I am so happy for you. Stay happy Pakhi". She said earning a smile from Pakhi.

Scene 5
Raghav calls someone and orders something. He says "this is the most precious gift for kalpi. I am sure this will make her happy". He said smiling.

Kamla is making breakfast and Vitthal asks her for the food. She was about to give it to him when Neetu takes it from her and says sahil has to go to work. Kamla looks at vitthal and says let me bring you toast.

He says "no... Pakiya come we will have breakfast out".

Kalpi comes to Kamla. She turns her head to the other side. Kalpi says "listen to me please". Kamla leaves. The postman delivers a package. Kalpi receives it. Neetu comes and she hides. Kalpi opens it and finds a letter. It says this sindoor is the sign of our love kalpi. She smiles; putting the letter away she opens the package and fined a sindoor box.
Kalpi walks outside with the sindoor. She searches for her Ai to get her blessing. Meanwhile paki walks in the chow and sees Kamla ma. She smiles and Kamla smiles too.

Paki gives Kamla a parshad and says "I want you to pray that Raghav will be mine forever. And he will come to love me back."
Kamla smiles then said "you have nothing to worry about, my daughter. No one can tear you away from Raghav." She said

when she saw kalpi watching her she said "I mean it paki, no one can destroy the relationship you have with Raghav, because your marriage is pure and the gods agreed." Touched by kamla's words paki hugs her and then turns around to leave.
Kalpi hearing this, tried not to show how much Kamla hurt her. She puts on her bright smile and walk to her mom. "Ai" she said softly, making Kamla turn to look at her.

She took some parshad to give it to Kamla, but she smacked her hand away from her face, Shocking kalpi. Not giving up she said "pray for me and Raghav ".
Kamla gave her a cold look, and said "I will never pray for your relationship with him." Making kalpi sad, but she quickly hide it so Kamla wouldn't see her pain.

Not wanting to be anywhere near kalpi, Kamla walks away. Unaware that Neetu saw and heard the whole thing. She smiled to herself and said "I guess my planned did work"

"Soon it will be time for me to get my revenge on Raghav and his mom". She said
Scene6
Kalpi goes to the temple, and breaks down crying. She cried for her love and cried for her Ai. She was so confuse, she didn't know what to do. People who were passing by were giving her the sympathy look. The priest, who was watching the whole thing, decides to approach her. He came up to her and asked her what's wrong. Kalpi looks up and said

"I don't know, what's right and wrong anymore." She said

"What do you mean my dear?"

"I disappoint my Ai, and I don't think she will ever forgive me." She said

The priest smiles at her, and says "life has its bad times, and I'm sure we're all going through it. The only thing we can do is put it behind us. Don't waist your time trying to correct the past, just move forward. And hope for the best. We are all humans, and as you know we make mistakes all the time. So the best thing we can do is to live with it and try not to make the same mistakes." He said earning a smile from kalpi.

"Your right priest, I need to stop thinking about other people feelings and think about my own, because I'm not getting any younger. I need to think about my happiness too". She said with determination.
The priests offer his hand for her to take, and she gladly complied. They walk to the temple and she rings the bell. The wind suddenly starts blowing around her while she walks to her god. She prayed for her relationship with Raghav and prayed for Ai to forgive her one day. When she was done she felt like a wait has been lifted from her shoulder. Smiling, she turned around to walk away.
To be continue...

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Chapter 2

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The scene starts with kalpi entering the chow. She walks in her house and search for the sindoor box. When she found it, she was about to place it in her hairline when Kamla stops her. She looks at kalpi and said "what do you think you're doing kalpi?" kalpi look at her mother and says "this sindoor is the sign of my precious relationship of marriage."
"No kalpi this is not precious. The relation you have to conceal is never precious".

Kalpi smile and said "you're wrong Ai, both this sindoor and relation are precious to me".

Not liking kalpi answer, Kamla tried to make her understand. "Kalpi, only Pakhi has the right over this sindoor. It belongs to her. I told you never to snatch or steal something and today you are stealing Pakhi's life, happiness and sindoor.

"What about my happiness Ai. Is paki happiness more important then mine?"
"What you did kalpi, no parents would wish that for their daughter. This is why I can not let you be with Raghav." She said determined.
"Raghav... He makes me happy Ai. And this sindoor." She said looking at it lovingly.
"Belongs to me. not paki. Because me and Raghav... Decided this in front of God, but my own mom does not want to accept my happiness. You gave everything I was supposed to have to Pakhi. But today you will decide this time what you want. My happiness or Pakhi's?
"Kalpi, Pakhi has every right to be with him. He will learn to accept her. I don't want to see you hurt in the end."
"What right are you talking about? Raghav always loved me. He was forced to marry Pakhi. "She said.
"KALPI! Enough. Paki was not forced to get married. Who do you trust That Raghav who always betrayed you. Shattered your trust and our respect".

Not wanting to look at her mom, she turns her back to her and says "After one year, one year... I will be marrying from here and my groom will be Raghav. You can't stop me."
Grabbing her arms, Kamla turn her around and yell.
"How can you say that? I can't believe that my daughter is talking like this. He said one year and you agreed. How will you wait for him? The relationship you are trying to make has only destruction for you and Pakhi. Forget him kalpi please". She pleaded.
Kalpi signs and look at her mom. she knew what she was going to say will hurt her, but she already made up her mind and she wasn't gonna back down. "How can I forget him? You said relationships are made by heart. Raghav accepted me from his heart so my relation with him is true not Pakhi's". She said then walks out the door, leaving Kamla to think.

Scene2
Raghav marks a day on the calendar. He says "just one year and you will be my bride; you will forget all the pain I've cause you". He said
Pakhi comes and sees him marking the calendar. Out of curiosity she asked "why did you cross the day? Are you waiting for some special day? What will you like for dinner? I have learned so many dishes from the net". She said happily.
Raghav looks at her and says "don't make anything for me. This is the last time I will tell you; I don't need anything from you. Just stay out of my way." He said coldly. He was about to go when Pakhi grab his hand.
"Just have a coffee, please". She said

"No I don't want it". he said before leaving.

Pakhi watches him leave with a sad look then she says to herself "don't worry Pakhi, cheer up just follow as Kamla maa said. I will win his heart someday".
Scene3
Kamla starts packing her clothes not really paying attention. She couldn't stop thinking about Pakhi and kalpi circumstances. She knew that paki is on the right track, but kalpi is not. She just didn't know how to get her back on the right track. Oh god, please show me the way. I am again stuck in a place where both of my daughters have the same thing for happiness. Show me some way. I heard that you fulfill everyone's wishes. Please give me an answer and show me the right path. She thought while crying.
When she heard someone coming she quickly wipe her tears away and continue packing. Vitthal sees Kamla worried face. He walks to her and ask her what she's thinking about.

"Nothing I'm just packing".

"Really... you can't even lie. Why are you packing my clothes with yours?" he said

He smiles at her and put both of his hands on her shoulder then he says "I know what you are thinking. You are worried about kalpi. Just go and pray for her". He said while grabbing her hand.
"Come, let's go to sleep. I'm sure you're tiered".
Scene4

The next day, Gauri receives a package from paki. She opened it and sees a picture with paki and Raghav on their wedding day. Rage was written on her face. She walks to kalpi and slapped her. Then she showed her the picture and says "you don't win love by a poster. My Raghav was never in your fate and will never be".

Paki looks at her mother in law; hurt was all you could see in her eyes. She removes her hand from her face and says "why? Why are you doing this to me? Just Give me a chance to prove that I am not like my parents." She pleaded
Gauri bold her fist, then glare at her "a chance?" she said laughing

"Your parents didn't give me a chance when they took my family away from me. When your mother made them put me in an electric bed, I cried, screaming, begging her to stop. But did she?" No!" That's why I will take all my revenge from your parents and you. And I will take my revenge for my husbands' dad". She said looking at the picture then left to get a lighter. When she came back, she light the lighter, and burn the side with paki' face. Paki couldn't do anything; she could only watch as her mother in law burn her wedding pictures.
Scene 5
Kalpi was going to the temple when Raghav stops her. She was surprise to see Raghav after what she said last night.
Flashback
Kalpi was on the balcony, thinking about what she said to Kamla when she saw Raghav coming out of his car. He looks at her and smile, making Kalpi's' heartbeat. She smiles at him and ran to him. They stared at each other romantically and Raghav says "kalpi, I couldn't sleep. All I could think about was you. I wanted to know, how you feel about my decision. I wouldn't live with myself if I forced this upon you". He said turning away from her.
Kalpi turn his face around and look at him lovingly. "You would never force me to do something I didn't want to do. I didn't say anything because I was just surprise. I...I love you Raghav". She said shyly
"I love you to kalpi". He said
He was about to kiss her when she ran away. Then the song Tum hi ho started playing.
Tere Bina Kya Vajood Mera

Raghav ran after kalpi. He saw her by the tree hiding and smiles.

Tujhse Juda Agar Ho Jayenge

He snuck behind her and put both hands on each side of the tree, so she won't escape.

Tho Khud Se Hi Ho Jayenge Juda

Smirking he put his forehead on hers. And they had a staring contest. Just when he was about to touch her face, she ducks and ran away from him.

Kyun Ki Tum Hi Ho
Ab Tum Hi Ho

He laughs and ran after her. Then he grabs her hand.

Zindagi Ab Tum Hi Ho

And pull her to his chest hugging her from behind.

Chain Bhi Mera Dard Bhi

His hand that was on her stomach was working its way up to her shoulder while whispering something to her ears, making her shiver. Then he turned her around

Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho

And kiss her. Her hands found its way around his neck while his wrapped around her body, pulling her closer. They kissed for a while, until kalpi pulled away to breath. They stared at each other and Raghav smiles.
"So will you wait for me, one year kalpi?" he said making her nod her head. Just when he was about to say something she says "I will wait for you, but you will have to promise me something". She said hesitating a little bit.

Seeing her worried face Raghav asks her "what is it?"

She grabs his hand and says "I want you to promise me that you won't see me for a year, until you know I'm the only one in your heart". She said

Raghav remove his hand from hers then says "how can you expect me to do that."

"I know, this will be hard, but please Raghav. Do this for me". She said almost in tears.

"I don't know if I can stay away from you, that long kalpi." He said then signs

"But if that's what you want then I'll do it." He said while touching her cheeks. She smiles at him and says "thank you Raghav". Then she hugs him.
On the way back, both of them were silent. Neither of them could utter a word. When she reached the chow she said good bye to him then enters her home. While Raghav stayed outside by his car tense.
To be continue...

Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Chapter 3

Scene1

The scene starts with Kamla saying good bye to everyone. She looks at her family lovingly and says "take care of yourself and Pakiya and Kalpi. "

"God will take care of everyone, so don't worry." Said vitthal

Pakiya and vitthal goes with her outside while kalpi watches from the balcony.
Kamla looks at her with a sad smile, not realizing that she forgot to take kalpi parshad too. Kamla turns away from kalpi and says in her head I'm sorry kalpi, but I can not pray for your happiness with Pakhi husband.
Kalpi watches Kamla leave, then says "please pray for me Ai."
Once Kamla left, kalpi phone ring, but she ignored it. She came into the house only to be stopped by Neetu who says she was hungry, And for kalpi to make her food.
Vitthal gets angry and says "no one is anyone's servant. Who ever is hungry can make for themselves. Make for yourself and make for us too".
"Don't taunt. I will make it. I know how to make good food." She said. She burns the stove and puts oil in the pan. With confidence she says "I will make food for everyone."
Vitthal and pakiya watch Neetu in the kitchen. She didn't know where half of the utensils were. When she saw some of them she didn't know how to use them. "What have I got myself into, half of this stuff I didn't know exists. Usually the cook would take care of this." She said to her self. She made up her mind and decides to make Dal Fry since she was craving it. While working in the kitchen she was deciding whether to use a spoon or a fork to mash the dal.

"Hurry up, we're hungry." Said vitthal

"Ok, fine... I'll use a fork." She said to her self.

She started mashing the dal, but then stopped and says "why isn't this smashing, this is harder than it looks." She said

"Hey.. genius." Said vitthal

"Why don't you try boiling it first, Huh?" He said

Smacking her head she says "of course I forgot". earning a snicker from pakiya.
She quickly started working and making the other ingredients. She was so focus on the other stuff and her nail braking that she forgot the tuvar dal boiling. When she turned around, she saw the pot about to explode. Panicking she started screaming "OH GOD, SAVE ME. WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE". She said
Vitthal walks to the kitchen and turned of the fire. Then he glares at her "you can't even make a simple dish, you're no use to us." He said

"I'm leaving."

"Don't you want to eat?" Said Neetu

"I already ate at work." He said

"And you pakiya?" she asks

"I'm going to a birthday party, so I will eat there." He said

"Kalpi and I will enjoy a soda outside." Said vitthal before leaving
Neetu looks at the mess she created then she says "Kamla you need to hurry up and come back, before I die with hunger".
Scene 2
Kalpi is in the balcony, thinking to herself when she got a text message from Raghav. She looks at it and ignores it. Then she decides to go to the temple. When she reached there, she saw Raghav, waiting by the stairs. She walks towards him and he looks at her lovingly. Just when she was about to pass him, he grabs her elbow.

"Kalpi wait." He says

"What are you doing here Raghav?' She said

"There's something, I want to give you."

"I already told you we can't meet, like this." She said

"How can I live without you?" He says

"I know it's hard but you have to be strong for us." She says touching his arm
Raghav relax at her touch, he close his eyes and then open it.

"Fine, but at least except this wedding locket I made for you." He said
"You have all the right on it." He said grabbing her hand.
Kalpi quickly removed her hand from his like he was fire her.
"I cannot accept this Raghav." She says
"Why can't you accept this? In one year we will be one and we love each other. So what's the problem?" He says frustrated
"It's my family Raghav; I know I've hurt Ai. But it wouldn't be right for us to keep meeting like this. This will only hurt Ai and paki some more." She said trying to make him understand.

"If you want me in your life, we will live like we don't know each other, until you take your revenge." She says shocking Raghav. He turns from her with his fist bold.

Kalpi not wanting to see him in pain grabs his bold fist. She slowly rub his hand to sooth him. When she was sure he was calm. She turns him around. Raghav gets down on his knees and starts crying. Which surprise kalpi.
She hates to see him like this. Like a vulnerable child. He grabs her and hugs her mid-section. He cried for his loss and he cried for his love. Kalpi hugs him and massage his head. "Please Raghav, be strong."
"Our love is strong; god won't let us separate for long. We will see each other again." She says in tears her self.

They stayed like this for a while and people who were passing by watch them. Some feeling sympathy and others looking disgust at them for openly showing their affection in public. Once he was calm he stood up. Then he said "before I leave, please take this locket. So you will remember our love." He pleaded
Kalpi was about to reject it when he added "please, just do this favor for me one last time." he says
Signing she accepted the locket. Raghav smiles and puts it around her. She closes her eyes when she felt his hands on her shoulder and neck. Her heart was beating out of control.
When he was done, she opens her eye and gave him one last look before going to the temple. While Raghav stares at her with determination and thought. Don't worry kalpi; I will make sure this situation is taking care of before one year. Because not seeing you for one year will kill me.
Scene 3
Kamla and her convey reach the temple. Kamla enters the temple and she fulfills all the religious rituals, she gives panditji the parshad she has brought. She says "I have come here with a lot of problems. I won't go until you show me the path". A lady says "101 rounds of the temple will make all your wishes come true". Kamla says I will do it then. I will fast until I complete my task.
Kamla starts her round around the temple. The sun was hitting her face and the hunger was getting to her. She completed some rounds and everyone got in line to see her.
Scene 4
After the temple, kalpi came home. When she got there she saw her parshad that she gave to Kamla. She was surprise to see it there. She thought Kamla took it but then realize she took paki's instead of hers. Once again ai, you chose paki over me. She thought.
If you won't give us your blessings, then i will have to get it my self. She thought determined.
She grabs her dupatta and parshad then she heads to the temple. When she reaches there she did the rituals and gave her parshad to panditji, who turned out to be the guy she was talking to yesterday. He looks at her and says "Its you, Nice to see you again".
Kalpi smiles "same to you Pandit ji. Your advice really helped me yesterday". She says making him smile. "It's good to hear that. So what are you doing all the way here?" he asks

"I came to seek blessings from the gods". She said

"I see. I'm sure your wishes will come true". He says

"Thank you". She said

kalpi made her way to the front where the people were and starts doing her round on the temple. Unaware that Kamla was right in front of her. She made some rounds and was starting to get tiered. But she was determined to finish her rounds. I can't stop now; my wish has to come true. She thought.
Kamla stops for a second, feeling dizzy. When she looked back she thought she saw kalpi. But then decided she was seeing things. As soon as kalpi pass her. She realize it was kalpi. Shock was written on her face. Meanwhile kalpi was busy thinking to herself. She was so busy trying to finish her task that she passed Kamla without even a glance.
To be continue...

Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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liked it.. plz continue soon..
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Very Nice, do continue soon 😊
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Chapter 4

Scene 1

Kalpi finished her rounds around the temple, Kamla not far behind. She walks in the temple and prayed for her and Raghav happiness. When she was done she said her good byes to the priest and leave. Just when kalpi left, Kamla comes in, she prayed for Pakhi marriage and for her to live happily and for kalpi to move on and do something with her life. When she was done she left the temple. She walks to the bus stop and got on the bus. she was happy because now a weight has been lifted from her shoulder.

Scene2

Elsewhere, Raghav was in his office when he sees kalpi in her seat. She looks up at him and smiles. Then she walks towards him. As soon as she was close to him she disappeared. He turned around and looks for her but he couldn't find her. He sadly walks to his seat and the truth finally hits him. He remembers what kalpi said to him, that their meeting would hurt Pakhi and Ai so much. He was so busy in his thought that he didn't hear Sammy come in.

Sammy looks at his brother and asks "What happen?"

Raghav looks at him and says "sometimes I hope that I will make everything all right but then everything messes up. I can't love anyone else but kalpi. But she thinks we should stay away from each other."

Sammy thought to himself and said "why don't you try proving your love to her."

"I tried. Look where that got me." He said

"I could tell her to meet me, and you will come their like you didn't know she will be there." He suggested

"Kalpana is to smart, she will know I put you through this." He said

Scene3

Pakhi is in the kitchen making salad for Raghav before Gauri shows up. Just when she was about to finish packing the stuff, she heard gauri asking for her tea. Quickly she hides behind the wall. Gauri came into the kitchen and says "no one is making tea?"

When she was distracted Pakhi ran out the door. Just before she disappeared gauri turned around and saw her. She looks at the door and says "what you want will never happen. Raghav will never be yours." She said

Scene4

Pakhi goes into the office and people started congratulating her. She smiles. Raghav sees her and walk out of his office. He approaches her and asks her what she's doing here. And she says "I bought you lunch."

He glares at her and says "I don't need your food; I'm going out to eat."

Pakhi looks sad and was about to say something when Sammy interrupts her saying they have a meeting to go to. He walks passed her not even glancing at her and everyone went back to what they were doing. Pretending they didn't see or heard anything.

Pakhi being embarrassed quickly walks to the bathroom to throw away the food.

Scene 5

Raghav came back to his office and sees kalpi putting food on his desk. He walks behind her and hugs her. Taking back by surprise, kalpi turned her head around, and then she said "what's wrong Raghav?"

He smells her hair and smiles. Then says "I miss you so much kalpi, I'm just glad you're here with me now." He said making kalpi smile. Kalpi push Raghav to the chair and he grabs her, making her sit on his lap. They stared at each other lovingly and then she feeds him with the spoon. Raghav ate the food while staring at kalpi. He was so happy that she was with him, that he didn't hear someone knocking.

"Raghav" she said

"Huh" he said in daze

She smiles at him and says "someone is knocking on the door."

"Let them wait, I'm here to spend time with my wife. They will understand." He said

"But Raghav "she says before Raghav interrupts her by putting a finger on her lips.

"Shhh" he said

"Let them wait".

Just when he was about to say something Pakhi walks in.

"What are you doing here?" he said glaring at her

"I was waiting for your meeting to be over so we can go home together." She said shyly

Raghav was about to say something about her disturbing his time with kalpi when he turned around, only to find her gone. He signs and got up to leave, with Pakhi following.

Scene6

Raghav and Pakhi were on their way when they saw kalpi in the heavy rain. Concerned he pulled over, and got his umbrella, and then he walks to her half way.

Kalpi just coming from the temple and was heading home when it started raining. She was about to take her umbrella out when she realize she forgot it at home. Cars were beeping at her to move because she was standing in the middle of the road. She moved to the side and looks for a taxi. Just when she was about to sign for a taxi a car pulled over. She knew who's car it was, but she ignore it. Then she turned back around and tried to get a taxi. Just when she was about to give up she felt someone behind her. She turned around and sees Raghav with a yellow umbrella opened.

To be Continue...

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Just loved it when raghav spoke rudely to that pooki..continue soon..
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Thank you everyone. i already written more chapters. but i'm sticking to my word, until i get 20 comments.. not including me. i won't post the rest. but i did wrote another story about ragna its different and uniques so please check it out its call Kis k bh pyra h sakat hai


i'm about to upload it.

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Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".