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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 10


Scene 1

The goons untied kalpi and took her outside; there the leader told them to tie her upside down to dry off. Kalpi out of energy didn't refuse. They took ropes and tied her to a tree upside down.

"Are we just gonna let her dry like this boss?" said one of the guys

"Yah we should have fun while she dries off." Another said

"What do you have in mind?" the boss asks making them smile. One of the guys brought an apple and the other brought a bow an arrows. They put the apple in kalpi mouth which she refuses making the other guy get so angry that he slaps her. He tried again this time she bites it holding it firm in her mouth. She watches as the other guy grabs the bow and arrow and points it at her. Kalpi was scared; she started struggling to get free. The guy with the arrow shoots it but mist, making the friends laugh at him. Each of them took a turn. One arrow hit her cheek, another hit her arms, another went in her leg and the last one went in her hand that was already burnt. They watch as she cries making the apple drop.

They look at her and laugh, one of the guys who were not laughing sympathies with her. He could tell she was an innocent girl. He wonders why someone would want to hurt her. He watches as she cries his heart when out to her.

Walking up to her he says "hello" making kalpi scared

"Don't worries I won't hurt you. Actually I want to free you before they come" he says walking behind her and UN tying the rope. She fell on the floor and he offered his hand for her to take.

"If you go straight that way and keep running you'll reach a grave yard there you might see some people who could help you." He says

"Thank you sir" she says while getting up

"Please don't thank me, I will feel bad." He says before walking away

Kalpi look at him one last time before she ran.

Scene 2

Two weeks have past and Raghav still continues to drink. He's use to that routine. In the morning he would look for kalpi than in the afternoon when he doesn't find her he would go to the bar and drink. Gauri lectured him about it but he ignores her. Paki seeing this was worried but at the same time smiles.

When Raghav came back that night drunk, she was in his room with the lights off. When he enters the room, he was still staggering back and forth. He could see someone there, when she got closer he saw kalpi. She was wearing something seductive. Making him shiver, he was happy that she was back. She walks towards him and grab his hand than she drags him to the bed. "Come Raghav, I'm here now. You don't have to worry about me anymore." She says

"I've searched for you for so long kalpi. Where were you all this time?" he says

"I stayed at the temple. When I saw you I hid behind the shrine." She says making Raghav sit on the bed.

"Why would you hide from me? You know I love you." He says a little bit hurt

"I had my reasons Raghav, please just drop it. I'm here now." She says taking his shirt off

"Your right, I love you kalpi" he says before grabbing her and kissing her. They both fell on the bed and paki took the covers and cover them both. The only thing you could see was the candle light dancing in the darkness.

The next day gauri woke up and went to Raghav room to wake him up. When she opens the door she was shocked. She saw Raghav sleeping with paki, his hands wraps around her protectively. She walks to paki side and grabs her hand waking her up. She looks at gauri with her sleepy eyes. Than she realize the situation, getting up quickly she took the covers and cover herself. Gauri pulls her off the bed and she fell on the floor. She continues to drag paki making her scream. Raghav woke up from his sleep, he saw his mother dragging paki on the floor. He quickly got up when he realize he's only wearing his boxers. Why am I in my boxers? He thought

He walks towards them and says "mom why are you dragging paki around?"

Gauri looks at her son angrily "do you not realize what you have done Raghav?" she says Making Raghav confuse. He recalls what happened yesterday and realize his mistake. Looking at paki covered up in his room. He fell on the floor.

"No. I would never" he says

"You wouldn't my dear but she would." She says looking at paki and dragging her to the living room. Paki was screaming telling her to let go. Dadi came out and saw what was going on she quickly came to gauri and demands her to let her granddaughter go.

"No... Dadi I will not let her go. She is a shameless girl." She said

"Paki hasn't done anything wrong gauri." She said back

"Hasn't done anything wrong? She used my son while he was drunk to sleep with him." she says

"What's wrong with that? She's just doing her wifely duty." She says

"No one asks her to, she can't force someone to do something they didn't want to do. My Raghav doesn't love her and I know he wouldn't want to sleep with her, even if she is his wife." She says

"I haven't done anything, all I did was took him to his room because he was drunk. He needed my help." She says while crying

"He needed your help? I'm sure he did. Instead of helping him you used him to trap him. You're no different from your parents." She says

"That's enough gauri" says dadi

"No, she might be Raghav wife but Raghav is my son whatever I say will go in this house. And paki you are leaving this house from today." She says shocking everyone.

Scene 3

Vitthal ignored kamla the whole day; he didn't want to be anywhere near her but

Kamla still wouldn't give up, she tried talking to him but he walks away. Even when she tried to feed him he brushes her and step outside. She was about to go talk to him when her phone rang. She picks it up and says "hello"

"Kamla, this is dadi." She says

"Hi dadi, what's wrong?" she asks

"Gauri is planning on kicking paki out the house" she said

"WHAT!" she says

"Please come and sort this out." She says

"Ok, I'm coming."

Kamla quickly leaves not saying goodbye to vitthal. Nettu who heard everything smirks; she walks to vitthal and says "your wife left the house."

"I don't care what she does now." He says

"You should, what if she's cheating on you or maybe going to paki house after you told her not too." She says

"I know kamla she wouldn't cheat on me. But going to paki house she would." He says

"I'm surprise you're not mad, after all she did disobeyed you not once but twice. It clearly shows who has the voice in this relationship." She says hiding her smile when she saw his fist bold.

"Before you know it the whole chaw will know of your and kamla relationship." She says then leaves.

Scene 4

Kamla reached paki house. She knocks and a servant opens the door for her. She walks in and saw paki still on the floor, dadi talking to gauri and Raghav walking to his room.

She came towards them and went straight to paki, helping her up.

"What are you doing here kamla?" says gauri

"This is how you treat your daughter in law." She says

"She's no daughter of mine." She says with hate

"No but she's Raghav wife, you can't kick her out of this house" She says

"I can and I will" she says

"But you have no say in what she does." She says

"Are you questioning my authority's kamla?" she says grabbing her hand

"Yes what you're doing is wrong."

"Wrong? The one who is wrong here is paki, she has disrespected my son." She says

"What are you talking about?" she asks lost

"While my son was drunk, she used him and slept with him." she says

"Paki wouldn't use someone; I raised her better than that." She says defending paki

"Why don't you ask her yourself" she says

"Is that true paki?" she asks making paki shake her head

"No kamla-ma, I was only helping him. I didn't force him." she says

Kamla looks at gauri and says "see I know my daughter, she would never do something like that." She says, when she saw Raghav coming out of the room she says "why don't you ask your son what happened?" she says accusingly

"My son is the victim here" she says

"We should hear his side of the story too." She says when Raghav came his mother asks him to explain what happened.

"It was blurry to me." He stated "but, I came home drunk, when I reached the room I saw kalpi." He says

"See paki had nothing to do with this, my kalpi is at fault." She says

"Are you stupid kamla, if he slept with kalpi why did I see paki and if you haven't notice kamla kalpi is not here." she says shocking kamla

"What do you mean she's not here?" she asks worried

"Kalpi ran away from Raghav wedding."

"Kalpi would never run away from her problems." She says

"Exactly, I wouldn't be surprise if paki made her disappear; after all she is her parent's daughter." She says earning a slap from dadi-ma

"Paki would never do that. She thinks of kalpi like a sister. "She says

"How do you explain her coming from kalpi room before the wedding ceremony?" She says shocking everyone, making them look at paki.

Scene 5

The group came back and saw kalpi gone, the only one they saw there was their friend. The leader came up to him and asks him "where is the girl?"

"I set her free." He says making the leader punch him

"Are you crazy, why would you set her free?" he says while beating him up

"I had too; the girl hasn't done anything wrong." He says

"Not to us but to the kapoor she has. If mam finds out she will cut our head off." He says

"Come on boys, let's go. She wouldn't get far, let's find her." He says getting up leaving his other friend on the floor hurt and bloody.

Kalpi was running she didn't know where, but she ran as fast as she could. She tripped on a rock and fell in the mud. Suddenly she heard voices from behind her. She recognizes the voice as the leader. Quickly she got back up and ran. She ran passing trees and some graves. She continued running until she saw some people.

Coming closer to them, she yells "please help me, please" she says crying when they didn't hear her she came closer and said the same thing making them look at her.

To be continue in the clash ~Ek Mutthi Aasmaan~ the untold story meets Qubool hai Dohari Musibata

Chapter 11

Preview

"Why are we here?' says seher

"I finally found where my father was buried. Turns out this is the place." Rehan says bending down to say his prayers.

"But why are we here in the dark, we could come back tomorrow." She says

"No, I want to show my respect now. Don't you want to be in Punjab by tomorrow?" he asks making her nod her head

"Good, so please be quiet I'm trying to show my respect." He says

Seher sat on top of a grave yard. She was looking at the stars when she saw some one coming. "R...Rehaan" she says sacredly when she got no response from him she turns around again, and saw the person coming closer.

"R...Rehaan!" she says this time backing away ending up falling on his back. Rehaan turns his head around and yells at seher "I told you to wait but now look I just disrespected my fathers." He says looking at seher only to see her shaking controllably.

"Why are you shaking?" he asks making her point towards the direction she was looking at.

When Rehaan saw what she was looking at, he also got scared, but he didn't show it. Both of them grabbing on to each other and not realizing it at the moment. As soon as the figure was closer to the light, they saw a girl running towards them, she had cuts all around her arm, and she was wearing a white saree which was now dirty. She was running towards them saying "please, please help me." She says with her hands together tears coming out of her eyes. Seher and Rehaan look at each other and realize there holding each other. Quickly they let go, Rehaan blushing while seher refuses to look at him. They heard noises and saw a group of guys coming towards them, they were all tense.

Coming soon...


Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Very nice updates... I dont know how i missed this but its really good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
U r amazing writer bt y u made ra& khi sr..
I m disappointed..I m sure if I hurt u bt ra& khi never wanted
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I didn't make rakhi ragna 575, making rakhi consist of me putting them together, but i didn't they only slept together that does not make them partners for life. but this story has alot of drama. its alot of twist and turns also i can't tell you what i have in store for ragna but keep reading 😊
anyway i made a new story, i'm writing it now it was based on the whole warrior thing i posted. so thats what i'm writing about its good so please try to read it when i post it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelk1

I didn't make rakhi ragna 575, making rakhi consist of me putting them together, but i didn't they only slept together that does not make them partners for life. but this story has alot of drama. its alot of twist and turns also i can't tell you what i have in store for ragna but keep reading 😊

anyway i made a new story, i'm writing it now it was based on the whole warrior thing i posted. so thats what i'm writing about its good so please try to read it when i post it.

Plzz now don't make ragna..Plzz pair kalpi wid nice guy..sry if hurts u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry ragna 575 this is not that kind of story. this is a RAGNA story because us fans still believe they will end together.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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please make sure the 🤢🤢 also suffers most for whatever she is doing ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very emotional update
My heart breaks for Kalpi
That witch Pakhi is so damn cheap and disgusting
Hey dear, the pic that you uses I didnot make it
Someone else it, plz give her credit. I used her creation from EMA gallery
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dont worry paki will be punish but not right now, for now shes causing some twist in the story. i want to show how much of a kapoor she really is. also she will cause her self and her parents to end up in jail. so be patient please. and keep remembering this is a RagNa story so if some small rakhi happen its just to show how manipulative she really is.🤢

Natasha i dont know who made the pic if you do please tell me so i can credit that person.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry 2 say u md it as CV taking advtag of rags hulinstin n I even felt 2 cry after ur updt n it hurted so much n its Tourcoing fm core of my heart as I cold not read fully new even ff, ss, it heart wrenching plz plz even rags is alone no matter BT WD raki never plz plz nver wd 🐷
Edited by sumasridhar - 11 years ago

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