When love clashes -New FF (RagNa) Part 18 Pg 142 25/9

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idonkno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: -HeyJude-
Priti! Once again you showed us your AWESOMENESS!
Wow Ragna's first kiss was awesome!
And this is for you 🤗
And please continue soon!

Aww Baljodh 😳 I am speechless 😳 hugs and kisses to you too!! Love ya gal 🤗

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idonkno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: rrinka
awesome update. loved it
pls continue soon

thanks 😳

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

Superbbb n amaznggg...👏

Raghav kissed kalpi..😳 beautifulll n romantic..

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Ushoshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

Superb update!! RagNa kiss 😳

But good thing Kalpi slapped him, Rags will have to work much harder...

Update soon

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maarushkaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: idonkno

Aww My Marushkaa baby 😳!! I loved each and every bit of this comment 😳. This update was the most difficult in terms of emotion portrayal as I had to focus on so many emotions at the same time. Glad I lived upto your expectations 😊.

LOL!! I put those words in the CAPS to draw your attention towards it 😉😆

Hehehe!! Same pinch!! I too prefer to read alone so that nobody catches me blushing and smiling😆😉

Dono ki vocab sudhar jaegi!! Meri likne se aur teri padhne se 😆😉 And once again you managed to bring a huge smile to my face😃

P.S - can you see some transition in these updates? I am trying very hard for it and wana know If I am successful at it or not

Yes ... this ff did have a range of emotions which were spectacularly presented ... so kudos for that.

Happy that my comment got a smile on ur face ... as urs do the same with me 😊

& the answer to ur Q ...I have been appreciating for the transitions taking place in the story since ur past 2 updates.

& transitions keeping other things in mind then... yes I can see minor transitions taking place in the characters & the feelings they emote through ur ff !!

So in ur case ... the ultimate show stealer becomes the storyline compared to other things of the ff.

That's my personal opinion 😃😃

Sorry for the bad grammar of this comment ... in a super noisy place to think of grammar at the moment .😊

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idonkno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: mariee

Yes ... this ff did have a range of emotions which were spectacularly presented ... so kudos for that.

Happy that my comment got a smile on ur face ... as urs do the same with me 😊

& the answer to ur Q ...I have been appreciating for the transitions taking place in the story since ur past 2 updates.
& transitions keeping other things in mind then... yes I can see minor transitions taking place in the characters & the feelings they emote through ur ff !!
So in ur case ... the ultimate show stealer becomes the storyline compared to other things of the ff.
That's my personal opinion 😃😃
Sorry for the bad grammar of this comment ... in a super noisy place to think of grammar at the moment .😊

Thanks Marushkaa!!! You said what I wanted to hear. No worries about the grammar. Even I am stuck with an assignment ( and that too management related ) and hence I could not properly reply to your comments. Had so much to say but I am short of time at the moment 😭

Love ya gal 😳🤗