When love clashes -New FF (RagNa) Part 18 Pg 142 25/9

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Okay...Raghav did deserve this slap! 😆😛 He hurted angel and now he is bearing the consequences. Wondering how will this clash again turn into love and friendship, especially with Prem around! 😆😛 n yes, I did enjoy the kiss! 😆😛 Please update soon. 😊

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: idonkno

Di 😳 I am glad you liked the part 😉😆 I thought maybe you will beat me for bringing this twist 😆 I do not want Raghav to take Kalpi for granted anymore and hence this twist was important 😉

"People say you don't know what you've got until it's gone. Truth is, you knew what you had, you just never thought you'd lose it."

Have u purchased some new qoute book ??

Coz they are tooo good !!

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Aanchu

@aanchuxoxo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#853

I liked kissing scene.. 1st it was anger den desire & love...

I think now raghav ll go bk 2 his ego as kalpi slapped him..

Lets see wht happen...continue soon..

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Omg so so so good. I like this jealous macho man named rags! The portrayal of emotions was excellent can't wait until next part

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

awesome update, Raghav deserves that slap, hopefully now his brains would be in da right place, please keep Kalpi strong

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Your not in the red is so true...
Raghav is too full of himself to ever think Kalpi will not be his friend anymore
The nerve of him to be mad at Kalpi for moving on. He left without even a phone call to her and all of a sudden he expected for them to be friends again like nothing happen
I love feisty Kalpi, her answering back Raghav was superb
Omg!!! Their first kiss was awesome :)
Although Kalpi turn mush in his hands I like that she slap him lol
He deserve it ;)
Another spectacular update

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Ab main kyaaa boluuu is update ke baare mein????😉😉

U caught onto the jealousy factor beautifully ... i cud feel the pain,the anger, the jealousy within Raghav while reading the update ... Playing with words & thus controlling ppl's emotions seems like ur hobby priti !! (saying so in a good sense)

& then came the 2 lines which are adamant to stay in my mind ...& are not ready to leave my thoughts

"No, Kalpi, you can't leave me like this! It's NOT OVER YET!!!" 😳😳😳

HE wanted to hold her, to love her!! He should be the one for her, NOT PREM !

U know exactly which words shud be kept in caps lock making the lines even more expressive.😃😃

And then in the end ... came the 'cherry on the cake' ...NO NO ...that was the cake itself !! 😆😆

😉

I hope i dont need to mention what I am speaking abt 😊😊

I couldn't help but just blush , blush & blush . Luckily I was alone while reading the update or else ppl wud have witnessed my tomato-red face.

& then that end wala SLAP ! OMGZZZ...

I so hate u for that ... its sooo unfair to finish the update at such a point & keeping ur readers dangling to know what will happen next 😉😉

& 1 thing for sure ... aur kisi cheez se meri vocubulary sudhare ya na sudhare ... Ur updates do the task.😆👏

I mean swivelled, exasperation, balderdash etc. etc.