When love clashes -New FF (RagNa) Part 18 Pg 142 25/9 - Page 87

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ab toh unres kar bhi do na Chinu darling 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

Lovely ss! Love it but I read only after 4/5 episodes to curb my disappointment, when it is short. Tks. for the updates.


No worries!! Sorry to disappoint you but I am occupied with other stuff as well so I prefer to write short but more frequent updates 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Okay...Raghav did deserve this slap! 😆😛 He hurted angel and now he is bearing the consequences. Wondering how will this clash again turn into love and friendship, especially with Prem around! 😆😛 n yes, I did enjoy the kiss! 😆😛 Please update soon. 😊


Thanks Charu!! This kiss will rekindle some old and some new emotions in them 😳. PREM is the haddi between these two😉😆 I am sooo glad that you enjoyed reading this part (It was so difficult to write 😭) Will update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee


Have u purchased some new qoute book ??
Coz they are tooo good !!


NOPE!! I have a habit of reading quotes (especially sarcastic one's) in my leisure time 😛😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchal57

I liked kissing scene.. 1st it was anger den desire & love...

I think now raghav ll go bk 2 his ego as kalpi slapped him..
Lets see wht happen...continue soon..


YAY!! I am glad that you liked it Aanchu 😉😛😳 Keep reading to find answers to all your questions 😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Omg so so so good. I like this jealous macho man named rags! The portrayal of emotions was excellent can't wait until next part


Hey Sunny 😳🤗 I am glad to know that you are enjoying this jealousy track. Feels so good to that I have lived upto your expectations 😳 Thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

awesome update, Raghav deserves that slap, hopefully now his brains would be in da right place, please keep Kalpi strong


Thanks Anjinie 😳!! kalpi will always be strong. She ain't weak and I will not make her weak 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Your not in the red is so true...
Raghav is too full of himself to ever think Kalpi will not be his friend anymore
The nerve of him to be mad at Kalpi for moving on. He left without even a phone call to her and all of a sudden he expected for them to be friends again like nothing happen
I love feisty Kalpi, her answering back Raghav was superb
Omg!!! Their first kiss was awesome :)
Although Kalpi turn mush in his hands I like that she slap him lol
He deserve it ;)
Another spectacular update


Tash 🤗 Thanks a lot. Again a lovely comment from you. I am glad that you loved their first kiss. Bechara Raghav is being the victim of so much hate 😆. Don't worry he will be back on track soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee

Ab main kyaaa boluuu is update ke baare mein????😉😉

U caught onto the jealousy factor beautifully ... i cud feel the pain,the anger, the jealousy within Raghav while reading the update ... Playing with words & thus controlling ppl's emotions seems like ur hobby priti !! (saying so in a good sense)
& then came the 2 lines which are adamant to stay in my mind ...& are not ready to leave my thoughts
"No, Kalpi, you can't leave me like this! It's NOT OVER YET!!!" 😳😳😳

HE wanted to hold her, to love her!! He should be the one for her, NOT PREM !
U know exactly which words shud be kept in caps lock making the lines even more expressive.😃😃
And then in the end ... came the 'cherry on the cake' ...NO NO ...that was the cake itself !! 😆😆
😉
I hope i dont need to mention what I am speaking abt 😊😊
I couldn't help but just blush , blush & blush . Luckily I was alone while reading the update or else ppl wud have witnessed my tomato-red face.

& then that end wala SLAP ! OMGZZZ...
I so hate u for that ... its sooo unfair to finish the update at such a point & keeping ur readers dangling to know what will happen next 😉😉

& 1 thing for sure ... aur kisi cheez se meri vocubulary sudhare ya na sudhare ... Ur updates do the task.😆👏
I mean swivelled, exasperation, balderdash etc. etc.
Feel like sitting with a dictionary while reading ur updates😆😆 Keep enlightening me girl !!😆
& continue soon 😃😃

MARUSHKAA



Aww My Marushkaa baby 😳!! I loved each and every bit of this comment 😳. This update was the most difficult in terms of emotion portrayal as I had to focus on so many emotions at the same time. Glad I lived upto your expectations 😊.

LOL!! I put those words in the CAPS to draw your attention towards it 😉😆


Hehehe!! Same pinch!! I too prefer to read alone so that nobody catches me blushing and smiling😆😉

Dono ki vocab sudhar jaegi!! Meri likne se aur teri padhne se 😆😉 And once again you managed to bring a huge smile to my face😃


P.S - can you see some transition in these updates? I am trying very hard for it and wana know If I am successful at it or not
Edited by idonkno - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Awesome update

Loved d way u portrayed raghav's jealousy, ego n desperation
Could really feel emotions raghav was gng thru d kiss first was of anguish n den desire took place
also first kalpi gav in whc shows she still has feeling for him but den on realising she slapped him ...well I would say he deserved one 😉
Loved d quote
Looking frwd to read aftr effects of der first kiss...continue soon


Thanks Rani 😳 Loved you comment. Keep them coming!! really means a lot to me 😃

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