ragna ss: tere bin....nahi jeena...part 9 page 16...8/6/14 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

Vittal and pakhya were tensed and had no idea of where to search for kalpi and kamla...they were walking across the chawl as if surveying the chwal area...all other people in chawl left to their respective houses and slpt...neetu was looking at d gate curiously for kalpi or kamla's arrival...

There kamla came walking lifelessly towards the chwal...pakya noticed kamla and pointed to vittal...both went to kamla...brought her inside the chawl...made her sit on the chair...vittal sat there down near her holding kamla's hand...pakhya sat on d floor on d other side of d chair...both were looking at kamla to see them...but she was nly looking at the floor...with loads of thoughts running in her mind...vittal cudnt see kamla like dat and askd her as wat happnd? Where had she been for so many hours?? Y did she nt inform before leaving??? Where is kalpi?? Did she nt come with u??

There was no answer from kamla...not evn she reacted for the questions...she sat there like an idol...pakhya shaked kamla's shoulders asking,aai...aai...look here...wat happnd...say aai...where is kalpu??..

Vittal could no more wait to knw abt his daughter...he stood up...askd kamla to speak out...he literally shouted at her to answer...wat happend kamla say me...answer me..where is my rajkumari?? Where is our daughter??

Kamla was broken from her thoughts and she slowly looked at vittal who was impatient to knw abt his daughter...

Kamla:(with anger filled eyes looks at vittal) ...dnt call her as our daughter...she is dead for us ..she broke our dreams into pieces...she broke her promise made to me...and i knw more consider her as my daughter and evn u both shud nt hv any relatiobship with her..

Vittal was so much shockd to react or speak anythng...pakhya askd kamla...y aai...wat happened? Wat did kalpi do?? So that u r so much hurt and speaking of breaking all the relationship?

Kamla: she cheated us...she broke my promise and went to meet raghav singhania...raghav filled kalpi's maang with sindhoor..(she said with anger and tears flowing from her eyes)

Vittal:(with shaky voice) wat r u saying kamla?? I wont believe...my rajkumari would nt do like dis...if dis has happpened there might be some reason behing this...calm down kamla..

Kamla:no vittal...ill never forgive her and no more discussion abt this and she ran to the house leaving pakhya and vittal speechless..

(Unknown to them...the trio's converation was heard by neetu hiding behind the tree)

Pakhya was abt to run behind kamla nly to get stop by vittal...vittal said pakhya to leave kamla alone for some time..

In raghav's car

Raghav's were swollen and was blood red due to continuous crying session for a long period...he was sitting at bac seat...kalpi was sleeping with her head on his lap...he was caressing her hair n was looking at her maang filled with sindhoor...he took his handkerchief and wiped her face and hairs of sindhoor except her forehead...kalpi in her sleep was murmering ...aai ...aai...pls...forgi..ve..me...raghav caressed her hair saying kalpi calm down...calm down kalpi...kamla ma will definitely forgive u...plz calm down...slpeep...sleep ..sleep kalpi...and kissed her cheek..

In sleep...kalpi took raghav's hand...brought close to her and rolled towards raghav and hugged him tightly and made her comfortable...

Raghav felt happy for seeing kalpi slp peacefully and comfortably on his lap...raghav hugs her bac with full love and droping few happy tears...

Raghav pov: i cant see u in pain kalpi...i did nt wanted to loose u in my life..hence did this to get u bac...but never thought that this will hurt u like dis...now ill take ur pain kalpi...ill console kamla ..ill get bac ur family...ill correct everything...ill give you so much happiness dat ull slowly forget my mistake...give u everythng dat u deserve...get bac ur respect dat u lost in kamla's eyes bcoz of me...

Suddenly other thoughts disturbing the present one ..i can also nt hurt mom...cant divorce pakhi for an year...cant take you to my mom...cant give u the name of second wife...cant stay without u..

Wat should i do?? Wat should i do to set everything right...repeatedlt thinkinf wat he must do..wat he must do?? He slept laying his head on kalpi's head...theres was pure silence in d car..

Rest of the night went peacefully in d car but nt in d chawl..

Sorry for the mistakes if any...plz forgive thinking me as ur sis..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res bada wala res🤣
unres🤣

beautifully written dear love you and ur updates are fantasticšŸ‘
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww.. nice 1 yar.. šŸ‘
kash serial me bhi aisa hi ho...
age kya hua??? plzzz update soon..
hehehe m greedy to read more šŸ˜†
plzzz update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

res bada wala res🤣

unres🤣

beautifully written dear love you and ur updates are fantasticšŸ‘



Thank u so much...happy u liked it...i had no idea of writing the second part...nly by ur comment i thought to continue...and inspired by ff's from the forum members nly...and evn u include in yaar...u write amazingly... šŸ˜† ...waiting for ur nxt chapter in ur ff...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meena.mva



Thank u so much...happy u liked it...i had no idea of writing the second part...nly by ur comment i thought to continue...and inspired by ff's from the forum members nly...and evn u include in yaar...u write amazingly... šŸ˜† ...waiting for ur nxt chapter in ur ff...

don say that dear u have a beautiful talent...even better than me šŸ˜› and next chapter is under construction will update once its done.šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful update dear..plzzz do continue..i cant wait..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mihika

don say that dear u have a beautiful talent...even better than mešŸ˜›and next chapter is under construction will update once its done.šŸ˜‰



Aww...so sweet of u...big hug šŸ¤— ...for next one month i hv my fourth sem exams...after that ill improvise and gv u good updates...till then will b reading the posts made here and make little posts 😳
Edited by meena.mva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meena.mva



Aww...so sweet of u...big hug šŸ¤— ...for next one month i hv my fourth sem exams...after that ill improvise and gv u good updates...till then will b reading the posts made here and make little posts 😳

all the best for ur exams dear and ya do make innumerable posts šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love Ragna
But hate kamla n pakhi
I literally hate them both because since time of kalpi birth she had to sacrifice everything which she owns n right on them now raghav too n kamla she is only one who snatches everything kalpi owns n does not even care to knew her daughters pain n pakhi she doesn't even care abt kalpi in the show this has been shown many times always giving pakhi upper hand I absolutely hate it what kind of mother doesn't knew or feel her pain who is ur blood related one n she is blinded by pakhi love over her eyes she can't see anything beyond pakhi n vittal he sometimes doesn't say anything if kamla does something wrong if he would react strongly kalpi doesn't have sacrifice much before n after rakhi marriage...
Edited by AriyaLilyOrchid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls do continue..its beautiful..post the future parts b4 monday itself.šŸ˜‰..cant trust the cvs they will surely destroy evrything!!

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