ragna ss: tere bin....nahi jeena...part 9 page 16...8/6/14 - Page 5

superbb!!!👏

Just loved it. Hope some thing like this happens in the show also.

I love it great update and can't wait to read the next one

loved it!! this is not a boring update at all...infact this was the best out of the 3...so wish this would happen in the show

For all those who liked and commented...thank you sooo much...love you guys


Part 4

Chawl

Neetu sleeping on sofa...kamla ,pakya and vittal did nt sleep the whole night and each sitting at one corner filled with deep thoughts..

Kamla pov: bappa...wat is happening?? Hv u closed ur eyes or wat ? Nw wat will happen to my pakhi baby?? Y u hurt her sooo much?? Hw can she bare this shock ?? No no...i cnt see her breaking down...she will be in need of me...i cant sit here quite...i shud go...i shud be near pakhi...she needs me ...she needs me...
Kamla: (loudly) she needs me...she needs me...i have to go..

Vittal: kamla wat happnd?? R u gng to meet kalpi? Where would she be nw?? Is she in need of u?? Did u forgive her??
Pakhya: comes near their parents and listening their parents with keen interest..

( neetu is awake but pretends to be sleeping ad hear their conversation)

Kamla: no vittal...i hv only one daughter...dat is pakhi baby...she needs me...she has be cheated again and again...ill never forgive kalpi for hurting pakhi...

Vittal: kamla...our daughter is kalpi...and i hv only one daughter that is kalpi...i believe kalpi...she is like her dad..who can take decision wisely...and her happiness is very imp for me than any1...
Kamla: stares at vittal...and asks vittal wat abt pakhi??? Kalpi has taken such a decision where pakhi's life has become a question mark..do u mean dis is right?

Vittal: pakhi...pakhi...pakhi ...kamla evn think abt kalpi for a while...and yes this could be the best decision...though i was angry at raghav initialy for ditching kalpi ..nw m nt...raghav baba is a gud person...he took dat decision for his mom...to take revenge on kapoors for his fathers death...hv u forgot?? Hw good was raghav baba''s dad??, hw he has treated us?? Hw he gave shelter for many like us?? And that great Singhania seth was murdered by these kapoors...wen i only cant bear this...how can raghav baba keep quite?? All wont be like u kamla...and kappors does nt deserve forgiveness...and i also knw dat raghav baba loves kalpi more than his life...and he can never liver pakhi and will nvr accept her as his wife...so kalpi's right...

Pakhya: aai...baba is right...kalpi's happiness is more imp for us...and this decision is perfect for making everybodies like bac to normal...pakhi will understand aai...

Kamla: wat u guys are speaking??..no...i cnt accept dis...

Vittal: (shouts at kamla) kamla...till today we all hv listened to u...for the first time m ordering u...u shud nt go to meet pakhi and dis final...if u dnt listen to me dis time...tnk dat our relationship came to an end..saying dat vittal and pakhya goes out...leaving bac kamla crying..

Neetu hear the whole conversation...she is angry at vittal...but happy on knwing kalpi and raghav's togetherness
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In car

Raghav and kalpi breaks their hug after a long time...
Raghav makes a call to sammy and narrates the things watever happnd ...sammy feels happy for his frnd...
Meanwhile kalpi again gets upset...she tnks abt her family n tears filled her eyes...raghav on noticing this cuts the call...holds kalpi hands and says...kalpi dnt feel bad...ur patents will understand slowly...ill promise u that...ull get bac ur family soon...kalpi looks at him assuring she will be k..

Raghav:kalpi hw was ur sleep yesterday?? (Making puppy face)

Kalpi: y?

Raghav: bcoz u were on my lap...n as far as i knw u slpt peacefully hugging me...evn ur slp u look amazing...and make me loose my control...this made kalpi blush and forget abt her worries..

Kalpi: ohh...stop it raghav...

Raghav: k my princess...shall we leave??
Kalpi: hmm...but where??
Raghav: to our house...where we are going to spend our rest of the life...
Kalpi: k...with a cute smile...

In kapoor house
Pakhi was crying for a long time thinking abt her mistakes...and after a long time...ahe tool a decision to forget raghav...as he is no more hers..she realised dat she came inbetwen raghav and kalpi's love...and she getting bac to her oringinal place...she decides to support raghav and kalpi...in making kamla ma realise abt marriage is nthng withour love and also helping them taking their revenge...

Singhania's mansion

Raghav and kalpi get down of the care reaching their building...raghav lifts kalpi in his arm...and carries her in a bridal way into the house...(raghav did nt listen to kalpi to drop her down until he reached his bedroom)

In his bedroom...he makes kalpi to sit on the bed...
Raghav: its ur bedroom from nw on...and also give me some space here madam...
Kalpi: trying to hide her smile...ill tnk of it Mr..singhania...u may leave nw ...came her words as an fake order...
Raghav:k madam...m leaving said while making puppy face...
Raghav turned to move...wen kalpi gave him a bac hug...saying...i love u raghav...u r precious to me...never leave me and go...plzz...i was just kidding...but i can never see u leaving me yet again evn in dreams...
Raghav turned to face kalpana...while hugging her...her says...never kalpi...ill never leave u again...ill wont commit dis mistake once again...
After a while they broke the hug...
Raghav: u get fresh...ill order breakfast...
Kalpi was looking at her dress...raghav understood dat she in need of dress for change...
Raghav pulled kalpi by her wrist and leaded to a cupboard...he asked her to open...she opened to find beautiful salwar suits hanged towards a side...and extraordinary designer saree to the other side...she was dumbstruck to say anything...raghav felt happy while reading her expressions...
Kalpi looked towards raghav with full of love and hugged him tightly asking as wen did he buy these many dresses??
Raghav: u forgot kalpi...i had sent many dresses to u...wch u sent bac to me...those dresses are in the second cupboard...i had purchased these dresses also along with them...
Before kalpi cud say anythng raghav removed a saree from bunch of sarees and asked to wear that for the day...ahe happily took it and gave a small peck on raghav's cheek...raghav was speechless...felt on cloud9...before he could respond..kalpi ran to washroom knwing wat would raghav do next...
Raghav laughed loudly at this naughty kalpi...saying her to get ready soon n con for brkfst ..he left the room...

Raghav orders for the breakfast...and calls sammy to arrange for marriage tonight..

Precap: raghav pushes kalpi's wet hair to touch her bare bac...he s mesmerised with her beauty...kalpi cnt bear the heat inbetween them...

There's a knock on the door...raghav is shockd to see the two people at the door...

Sorry for the grammatical or spelling mistakes if any...plz forgive if so..and love u all guys...for encouraging so much for a new writer

awesome!!😊 Vittu has finally the guts 2 stand up to Kamla..gr8!! Although I am against domestic violence, wouldnt have minded if he had slapped her too!!😉

Originally posted by: amy.r

awesome!!😊 Vittu has finally the guts 2 stand up to Kamla..gr8!! Although I am against domestic violence, wouldnt have minded if he had slapped her too!!😉

Yea being a girl...evn m against domestic violence...and i like me n respecting women...hence cudnt make myself write so...but nw feeling as i might have included a slap by vittal on behalf of all ragna fans 😆

Aww! RagNa were so cute. Kamla and Neetu were just 😡
You're a great writer Meena!! Keep it up!
You keep writing and I'll keep on reading. 😆 🤗

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Aww! RagNa were so cute. Kamla and Neetu were just 😡
You're a great writer Meena!! Keep it up!
You keep writing and I'll keep on reading. 😆 🤗

Pookhi u made my day...ur comments make me fly in air...u r jst amazing...feeling grt hvng u as a frnd...yup...ill write wenever m free and always will b waiting for ur posts eagerly...evn ill keep reading...
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wowww...sweetieee u r so sweettt...thank u for such a wonderful update ya...all scenes are perfect awesome beautiful..u made my day...keep writing dear...cant wait..