RagNa SS: Demons [Last Part, Page 41 updt Dec. 16th]

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

very nice update...👍🏼

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Love Raghav turmoil with himself lol
Poor guy is separately fighting with his feelings for Kalpi
I like how he notice every little details about Kalpi. That's dedication and attentive lol
Kalpi playing it cool is amazing, it only driving RS crazier ;)
Beautiful update

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Megha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Shonaaa! About time! You've been saying you'd update in like forever... But better late than never...

As for the update, what to say... I'm in total dreamland! You literally took me back to good old EMA days when Raghav, Sammy, Kalpi and Pakhi actually went to the office! Lol. Anyways, I felt like I was falling in love with Raghav Singhania all over again... Just perfect...

Love the way you penned down every single detail and every single emotion. Raghav's insecurities, Fiesty Kalpi, Sammy being oblivious and delusional Pakhi. But a part of me feels that Sammy is doing this on purpose, more like I hope he is...

Anyways, please continue soon. Don't take as long as the last time! And thank Jiya too for coming up with such a beautiful SS with you!

P.S: I'm still waiting for your PM! The weekend has arrived! Please watch suits already!!!

Edited by ForeverFabulous - 11 years ago

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Syed695
Awesome!!!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Syed695
Awesome update👍🏼!!!

Raghav's turmoil was explained in detail n he has noticed evry single thing in kalpi yet says he doesn't like her...n d verbal cum silent war dey have with eachoder is superb...smile has let him goin so far but waitin for his insane behaviour out wen kalpi-sammy affair would b confirmed(knwin d naughty sammy😆)

Superb update!!!

Thanks again for your lovely comment! I am really glad you liked it. Oh and yes, we will definitely get to see Raghav suffer a lot more 😈

Haha we are thinking of taking all the badla from Raghav that CVs couldn't manage to show or take from him. So yes, we have some more of those scenes of him suffering while Sammy waltzes off with Kalpi when he's looking 😆 Plus, I always felt that Sammy should've been a little naughty even in the show 😛

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: faznasaijil
Nice onr..loved it..update soon

Thank you! Already did. Hopefully you like the next one as well 😊

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Treasures
Amazing! Please post the nxt part!

Thank you! Always great to hear from you. Hopefully you like the next part just as much 😃

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond
This is awesome!!! I love it!! I love this raghav!!

Thank you Dianne! We really wanted to work with the old Raghav that the show had initially introduced. That Raghav had so much depth! So we both wanted to create something that brings the old magic of RagNa back. Who better to do that with other than our Akdu Raghav and Jhakkaas Kalpi? Glad you liked it =)

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond
Wow! What an amazing and detailed update! Love every way you described rags feelings and their convo! Awesome! Loving it!

Again, thank you so much. We tried to give a lot more flavor to this update, showing exactly how their encounters and dynamic was at the moment. Its so nice to see the response. Thanks again for the lovely comment.

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Shona_Mayur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Raghav is madly in love with Kalpi
He notice every little details about her
I like how everytime he tried to justify his own feelings to himself lol
Aww why is Kalpi crying?
I like that curious Raghav showed up at the right time to comfort his Kalpi
Beautiful update

Thank you!

Haha I won't say anything about Raghav being in love or not because I want the reader to make their judgment from the writing but I will definitely say that Raghav is one confused soul at the moment 😆 Poor dude, he's crushing over the girl's every little details and still thinks it's normal. tsk tsk. Really glad you liked it 😃

You will find out the reason behind her crying in later parts. Can't reveal it but it's definitely not forgotten 😉

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Love Raghav turmoil with himself lol
Poor guy is separately fighting with his feelings for Kalpi
I like how he notice every little details about Kalpi. That's dedication and attentive lol
Kalpi playing it cool is amazing, it only driving RS crazier ;)
Beautiful update

Haha yes, Raghav is a really troubled guy. He needs therapy of really talk to someone 😛

Raghav Singhania that we got introduced to in the show at the beginning used to be so attention. Ab ka to pata nahi since I don't watch show anymore. I really glad you liked the update because we tried our best to keep him in his old character along with Kalpi since she used to be so chilled out and always answered him back politely. Thanks for the comment and observation!

Edited by Shona_Mayur - 11 years ago