New Ragna FF Trials of Fate important note pg 21 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
I think I should end this FF since I am not getting any comments or anything. Sorry If I am rude, you guys are still awesome for me
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashpat3

I think I should end this FF since I am not getting any comments or anything. Sorry If I am rude, you guys are still awesome for me


awww...i dun knw wht to say...hope u continue n fill it with luv n comedy...but..its up to u...n im here...always read every OS/FF/SS..coz i luv thm all...😉
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Originally posted by: Autumm


awww...i dun knw wht to say...hope u continue n fill it with luv n comedy...but..its up to u...n im here...always read every OS/FF/SS..coz i luv thm all...😉


I am so happy you are back and replied on my post 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 21

Island

Yohan and Ray manages to free the imprisoned people. Everyone gathers at one spot

Kalpi : I hope everything is fine

Sonia : Yeah but there is only one fear about Ranveer Singh

Raghav : You are right he can come here anytime soon

Yohan : We can send off this people before he comes here

Ray : But if we send them off he will suspect Kalpi

Ranveer comes there with his henchmen which shocks Kalpi

Kalpi : You here (stammers)

Ranveer : What can I do? You did not picked up the phone I was worried about you. Afterall you are important for us

Kalpi : What are you trying to say I did not understand

Ranveer : So you shifted all the people from here so these guys cannot free them. Nice job. Do one last work for me to prove your loyalty

Kalpi : What?

Ranveer : Shoot Raghav and everyone else except your sister as we had a deal (hands her the gun)

Kalpi (scared)

Ranveer : What are you waiting for?

Kalpi points the gun at Raghav and suddenly change the direction to Ranveer

Ranveer : What are you doing? If you shoot me my people will shoot everyone

Kalpi : We are not afraid of dying.

Ranveer : So you cheated us ? You traitor

Kalpi : The one who cheats to his own nation do not have right to call others a cheater. Got it

Riya who is still on the different side informs Sameer and Karan

On the road

Sameer : They all have been caught by Ranveer

Abhi : I have a plan (tells them the idea)

Island

Kalpi : Now get ready to pay for your sins. We will punish you first for destroying our childhood before law punish you

Rajveer comes from back and puts her on gunpoint

Rajveer : What is so hurry ?

Raghav : You?

Rajveer : Yes it is me. Now I will bury you all alive here. First off I will kill the one who foiled all the plans who is none other than Sanjana

Yohan : Don't you dare

Naina : Wait I will shoot her first

Kalpi slaps Naina

Kalpi : I told you nobody can harm my sister until I am alive. I spared you last time but I will not repeat that mistake again

Sameer and Karan come to their rescue. A major fight starts between everybody. Naina gets shot in the event. Ranveer tries to escapes from the spot but a helicopter comes of officers who arrests him. Kalpi was trying to shoot Ranveer but she is stopped by Raghav as it would be against law and he will get punished by law. Both Ranveer and Rajveer with their people get life imprisonment.

Headquarters

ACP : I am proud of all you. You guys proved that you are the true soldiers.

All of them : Thank you Sir

Karan : Lets throw a party for our victory

Sufia : Why do you always want a party? Oh yeah so you guys can see those girls

Karan : Someone is jealous

Sufia : Jealous my foot

Sameer : You started again

Sanjana : I think she is right. We cannot trust them but no girl can stick with them for long.

Yohan : I challenge you will be jealous seeing us with other girls

Riya : Oh really ?

Ray : Why not? Wanna bet? What say Raghav?

Raghav : There might be some other way

Kalpi : Someone is scared

Raghav : I am not scared of anyone. Fine we will bet and win

Anjali : All the best everyone. You boys will make arrangement for party then

Abhi : What will we get if we win

Anjali : We can decide it later

Sonia : Lets decide it right now. If we win then you guys will stay away from us for 5 days without cheating. Lets see if you can stay away from us that long

Raghav : Done but if we win then we all can go for a picnic for a holiday

Kalpi : Done

(All the girls leave)

Sameer : Guys we have to win this challenge

Yohan : Yeah but how will we convince these girls I mean party

Karan : I am sure we can win this

Raghav : I never flirted with anyone how will we do this

Sameer : Come on I know we can win this bet. Lets show this to those possessive girls

Oberoi House

Sanjana : Now it will be fun

Riya : Let us show those boys that we not that jealous types of girls

Sonia : Once we win this bet then we will show them what we are

Sanjana sees Kalpi upset

Sanjana : What happened sister? Why are you disturbed

Kalpi : Nothing. I am just thinking whenever I feel everything is going right some new problem comes up and you have to bear the brunt of that with me

Sanjana : So what? Did we not face everything together. I am sure now everything will be good. We got our love back. Let us forget the past

Anjali : What happened? Are you okay?

Sanjana : Yeah we are fine

Sufia : So everyone we have to make sure we win this challenge and show boys that we are not less from them

(Group hugs)

Precap : Some fun and some romance, So who will this challenge?

So how is it guys? Finally action is finished the next two parts will be the last one of this FF maybe. I might start the new one. Hopefully you guys might like it







Edited by ashpat3 - 11 years ago
Autumm thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg...lol...raghv..never flirted with anyone...very funny...thk u...update soon..!!! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovelyyy n nyc update dear..👏
Poor guys..🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you guys I hope you like last parts
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 22

At the party

The girls reaches the venue and gets happy to see the arrangement.

Riya : Girls remember we have to make sure we do not lose our control

Sufia : Done

The boys also enters the venue. Yohan and other boys starts to avoid the girls. All the girls tries to control their anger and finally be able to do so till the end of the party which makes the boys lose the bet.

Sufia : So you guys will not see us for few days

Anjali : Lets see how long you guys can stay without us

All the boys gets upset as they lost the bet and cannot the girls.

Oberoi house

Sonia : I am wondering what will be the position of the boys right now

Kalpi : Dont you think they might miss us?

Sanjana : Sister they were the ones who tried to challenge us that we are possessive

Sufia : You are right they will realize that it is our love not possessiveness

Riya : Lets go check how are they

All the girls go to Raghav's house

Ray : I did not know these girls are so different

Yohan : I could have easily manipulated Sanjana and bring out the frustration but I did not it

Sameer : What ? How can you make us lose this bet?

Yohan : So what? I know how she was controlling her anger

Karan : How can you be so weak? I mean she was the only one who is emotional in love

(girls try to sneak through the door)

Raghav : Even it was hard for me to do it.

Yohan : I could not forget her love

(Sanjana gets shocked to hear it) Suddenly a rat tries to come near the which scares the girls. The girls screams loudly.

Sameer : Who is this screaming?

Everybody comes out.

Karan : What are you all doing here?

Ray : Are you all spying on us?

Riya : We are not spying on you

Sonia : We came to meet you

Sameer : From back door like thieves?

Abhi : I think we should apolozise to you for this silly bet

Anjali : We were here for the same reason

Suddenly it starts raining heavily outside.

Kalpi : Why does this have to start at this time

Sanjana : I think we will not be able to go home tonight

Raghav: You guys can all stay here for today and chose whichever you like

Late at night

Sanjana cannot sleep in their room and goes out. She sees Yohan standing near window.

Yohan : Are you not sleepy ?

Sanjana : No. The moon looks so beautiful

Yohan : Not more than you. I still regret what you have to go through because of my dad

Sanjana : Forget the past. It was nobody's fault. It was the destiny which nobody can change it .

Yohan : Do you still have the place for me in your heart ?

Sanjana : Nobody can replace it nor can anyone snatch my love

Hugs Yohan and goes back to her room

Kalpi goes to kitchen and sees Raghav with the picture in the hand

Kalpi : You did not sleep yet

Raghav : Not really.

Kalpi : Why don't you go to visit your family once

Raghav : I dont want to

Kalpi : Those people are lucky who still have family better than alone.Go meet them once

Raghav : Okay I will but on one condition

Kalpi : What?

Raghav : Will you come with me?

Kalpi : Okay now I will come with you everywhere.

Everybody reunites. Sanjana apologizes her father and Yohan also apologizes to his father. Riya unites with her brother and her family. The families arrange the marriage for all couples. Samarth finally meets his family and regrets for leaving them. Alina- Samarth, Sanjana-Yohan, Ray-Riya, Abhi- Anjali, Karan- Sufia and Sameer- Sonia gets married and all live happily after.

The story end with all the couples reuniting after crossing the obstacles in their path. Their undying love always made them close together and never let it decreased

So guys this is the whole FF. Sorry I had to rush to write this FF because I want to start the new one soon.

Mihika thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully written dear loved each and every bit of it and sorry for the late comments 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy ending...for a new start...ill wait for ur nex ff...thk u for this dear...;)

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