Kalpana, Truely an ANGEL Epi-44 updated with note by the author - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome and different as always. waiting eagerly to know the real kalpana, and everyone's reactions to it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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One question, If Kalpana is so well known in high business circles, then how come Kapoors and Raghav Singhania don't know about her?😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update..hope this suspense ends soon..😆😆
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Guys 4 reading my updates hope u all will like this one also!😉

Epi-12

Part-1

Night.

Chawl.

Vitthal and Kalpana standing on the balcony.

K- Baba...mujhe ghar jaana hai. Mai Raghav ko kal leave application de dungi. Wo mom and dad ko kaha hai maine mai unke saath rehne jaaungi kuch dino ke liye. Aap aai ko manaiye naa. Bolnaa mai apne dost ke ghar jaa rahi hu.

V- Abhimanyu ji tere dad hai. Unka haq hai tere upar.Tu chinta mat kar mai Kamala ko kuch naa kuch samjha dunga. Uske bebakufi ke wajah se tujhe Raghav baba ke yaha kaam karna par raha hai.

K- Koi baat nehi aai ko pata nehi hai ki mujhe inn noukriyo ki zaroorat nehi hai.

V- Haa ! tune apne zindegi ki zyaada din unke ghar pe bitaya hai. Unke laad pyaar aur sanskaar ke wajah se aaj tu itni acchhi bani hai. Humne to sirf janam diya hai lekin maabaap ka pyaar unn logo ne diya hai. Hum to kuch bhi nehi de paaye. Unhone tujhe wahi diya jo tune maanga. Saare maang pure kiye, sirf wahi ek bacche ko jo chahiye apne maa baap se sab kuch unn logo ne diya hai tujhe.

K- Haa baba. Aaj tak maine jo bhi maanga chaahe wo meri koi naazayaz jidd hi kyu naa ho mom dad ne pehle mujhe uski mahatwa samjhaaya aur fir mujhe wo chizde diya kyuki unhe pata tha samajhne ke baad mai uska galat isstamaal nehi karungi. Pata hai baba jab mai class 8 me thi naa tab maine ek do lakh ki red color ki stilletos ki jidd ki thi aur aadhe ghante me wo mere saamne thi lekin mom ne samjhaaya ye stilletos meri hi hai lekin ek shart me mai uski sahi isstemaal karungi. Aur mai use sirf parties me pehenti thi to mujhe next birthday me dad and mom ne mujhe 5 lakh ki ek diamond watch diya. Unhe pata tha meri watches ki ek weakness hai..isliye.

V- Teri zindegi jeene me bohut mushkil hoti hogi naa yaha. Tu ek amir ghar ki beti banke bari hui hai aur ab chawl

K- Baba.. mom and dad ne mujhe zindegi jeena sikhaya hai lekin aapne aur aai ne mujhe zindegi di hai. Isliye aapke chehre ko dekhke mai apne zindegi ko kahi bhi ji sakti hu.

V- Jis din mai nehi raha...

K- Aise kyu keh rahi ho baba..

V- Ek waada kar jis din mai nehi raha uss din agar teri shaadi nehi hui to apne naam se tu Yadav hatake Mehra laga legi. Waada kar beta..

K- Acchha waada raha uss din mai Yadav se Mehra ho jaaungi.

Part- 2

Next morning.

Singhania Constructions.

Raghav's Cabin.

Sammy, Raghav and Kalpana.

K- Sir meri ye application hai.

S- Tum sir bula rahi ho Raghav ko.

K- Haa...Professionally to aap dono meri boss hi ho.

R- To tumhe professional life and personal life me difference rakhnaa aata hai ?

K- Koi shaq ? Waise sir aapne agar meri leave application agar accept kia hai to mai jaau ?

R- Thik hai. But stay in contact.( He said sadly)

K- Aap chinta kyu kar rahe hai. Thori naa mai hamesha ke liye jaa rahi hu. I will be in contact. Bye !

S and R- Bye !

Chawl

Kamala balcony me kapre sukha rahi hai.

K- nehi Vitthal mai kaise Kalpi ko kisi ke ghar bis dino ke liye bhej du ?

V- Kamala mujhe pata wo kaha jaa rahi hai. Tu chinta mat kar wo apne zindegi ke zyaada wakt bahar bita ke aayi hai. Wo jaanti hai kya sahi hai aur kya galat.

Kamala looks Vitthal and understood that he wants Kalpi to go where she wants to go.

K- Thik hai. Tu jaanta to hai naa wo kaha jaayegi ?

V- Haa Kamala mujhe pata hai.

K- Thik hai.

Kalpi returns chawl look at Vitthal and asking him in expression whether Kamala agreed.

Kamala - Beta tu apne koi dost ke ghar jaana chahti hai jo tere boarding school se hai ?

Kalpi- haa aai !

Kamala- Thik hai tu jaa lekin tujhe phone karnaa hoga.

Kalpi- Thik hai.( Her face filled with happiness)

Kamala and Vitthal both got happy to see Kalpi's smiling face just the difference is one know the real reason behind this the other don't know about it.

Kalpi leaving for her mom and dad house.

Kalpana excited.

K- Bye baba bye aai.

Kamala- Kapre nehi legi ?

K- Uski zaroorat nehi hai.

V- Bye beta !

Gouri- Bye Kalpi

K- Bye eveyone.

Pakhya- Bye Bye Kalpu !

Kalpi left.

Part- 3

Neetu visited Prem in jail. She brought her lawyer to release Prem. Prem got released.

Neetu and Prem in car.

N- Meri chocopie ! Aise chup chaap mat baith. Kuch to bol.

P- Kya bolu mom ? Sirf itna ab jaan lijiye mai Kalpana and Raghav ko barbaad karke rahunga. Just wait and watch. I will not leave both of them.

N- Acchha unki baat chor wo larki jisko tune churwaane ke liye bola wo kaun hai ?

P- Uska naam Alka hai.

N- Sahil keh raha tha..

P- Oh come on mom. Nothing serious between us. Just was having fun with her.Ab break-up kar diya hai.

N- Oh !

Neetu gave a broad smile.

Kalpi was heading for her house when she saw Alka standing on a bridge in a motion to jump.

She stopped the auto.

K Pov- He bhagwan ! Kahi ye suicide karne ki chakkar me to nehi hai.

Alka was about to jump when Kalpana grabbed her hand.

A- Kalpana chor do mujhe. Mujhe nehi jeena. Please...

K- Alka pagal mat bano. Kya hua hai batao ? Tum to jail me thi naa..fir yaha ?

Alka became little reasonable and sat at the bridge's edge. Kalpi took out the water bottle and gave Alka to drink water. She took it from her hand like a baby.

A- I am sorry Kalpana. Lekin...

K- Acchha pehle tum ye batao ki tum suicide kyu karna chahti ho ?

A- Kalpana Prem dhokebaaz nikla. Maine uske liye Raghav ke upar ilzaam lagaya aur aaj jab wo mujha chura raha tha.

She said what happened in police station.

Police Station.

Neetu Kapoor went out Prem Alka ko chura raha hai.

Inspecter- Kaisa gf hai tumhaara jo apne daaman ko ganda karke dusro ke upar ilzaam lagati hai.

P- Kaun gf. Ye...ye characterless Prem Kapoor ki gf kabhi nehi.

Alka shocked. They went outside Alka asked Prem.

A- Tum ye kya keh rahe the ?

P- Kya sach hi to kaha. Tumhaari jaisi nich larki meri gf.

A- Aise kyu keh rahe ho ?

P- Tumne mere saath kitni raate bitaayi hai koi idea hai ? Tum to characterless ho naa nehi to kuwari hone ke bawjood bhi mujhse sambandh banaya. Ab tumhaare liye ye acchha hoga tum chupchaap muh chupake chali jaao aur kabhi mujhse milne ki koshish mat karna nehi to aaj sirf Inspecter ne taana maara hai kal puri duniyaa maaregi.

A- Prem...

Prem left.

Present..

Alka started crying so Kalpi hugged her tight.

Precap- Morning 8 o clock.

Divya Nia Kaaki ke saath Kalpi ke kamre me aayi. Nia Kaaki ke haath me tray. Tray me plain water and juice. Kalpi ghore bechke so rahi hai apne round bed ke upar. Uske white pillows bed ke chaaro taraf bikharke pari hui hai. Divya sat on her bed and gently shake Kalpana's arms.

D- Beta utho subah ho gayi hai.

Kalpi took a pillow and cover her ears.

K- No mom ! Mujhe thori der aur sona hai.

D- Dekha Nia ghar aate hi shuru ho gayi nautanki.

K with a sleepy voice- Mom mujhe pamper karne ke liye aap log ho naa to thora mera tantrums jhel lo !

D brings her face near Kalpi's ears.

D- Aaj tumhaare dad tumhaare liye special breakfast bana rahe hai aur meri kitchen ki satyanaash kar rahe hai.

Kalpi throws the pillows and sat on the bed.

K- Tabhi mai sochu itni acchhi smell kaha se aa rahi hai jisne meri neend ki band baja diya hai.

There is more to know about Kalpana. Hope u guys liked today's epi. And as always give me your feed backs and likes !

LOVE U ALL !❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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No more comments. WHY?😭 I am waiting 2 know guys did u like it or no. Please let me know with ur comments dan I will know where my mistakes r and try 2 improve dem so u all get a better update next time.😊
Edited by mimiunisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
nice update..interesting...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update😊...wondering wat raghav's reaction will b on knowing her reality ..more than that want what wud b prem's state??!!😉 pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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IMP NOTE




Chahat thanks 4 the wonderful question. Sry 4 late replying.This is the answer of ur question about Kalpi. Kalpana's dad's company is not a construction company So they never dealt with Kapoors and Singhania's r new 2 d Indian market. The business council is held once in a year.Only few big companies r invited.K. Group of companies r a regular from them.This time in the business council Construction companies r also invited. Imp point- All companies don't have the golden opportunity 2 attend the council only the best has! Since Singhania's r a show stopper in the market so they r also invited and Kapoor's got 1st time this opportunity which dey will loose 4 Prem.
Edited by mimiunisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
love it
kash real me ema me aisi zindagi hamari angel kalpi ko mile
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
came across the story now. truly awesome. waiting for the reaction of kapoors and kamla when they get to know this side of kalpi..

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