Kalpana, Truely an ANGEL Epi-44 updated with note by the author - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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dear u did absolutly fab... amazin update... luvd dat kalpi is pampered nd luvd unconditionally by her othr parents... i realy lyk d way u hv made kalpi emotionally strng by shwin dat she ws showered wid so much luv frm her second parents...
wnt to see hw kamla will react wen she will find out d truth...😊😊😊.. keep updatin...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks guys 4 this awsm response. But dis story is not like the way u all r thinking. This khulaasa will take time but I assure u there will be huge drama. This story is not about a broken Kalpana but about a Kalpana who had faced only success in her life. Remember Prem is still there to make mess. And Kalpana, Use jitne ki aadat bhi hai aur fitrat bhi. So keep patience and enjoy since now except my story characters all know my Kalpi's truth.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls update soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimiunisha

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Chahat thanks 4 the wonderful question. Sry 4 late replying.This is the answer of ur question about Kalpi. Kalpana's dad's company is not a construction company So they never dealt with Kapoors and Singhania's r new 2 d Indian market. The business council is held once in a year.Only few big companies r invited.K. Group of companies r a regular from them.This time in the business council Construction companies r also invited. Imp point- All companies don't have the golden opportunity 2 attend the council only the best has! Since Singhania's r a show stopper in the market so they r also invited and Kapoor's got 1st time this opportunity which dey will loose 4 Prem.


Hello mimiunisha. Firstly, Thank you so much for taking time out and answering my question. I am totally satisfied.😃
Secondly, I am loving your FF so much. It is different and most of all I am loving this new Kalpana (jise jeetne ki aadat bhi hai aur fitrat bhi! 😉) It was so good to read that Kalpana's adopted parents love her so much, they gave her what Kamla couldn't. For now I am loving this mystery around her, at least humein toh pata chal gaya real Kalpana k baare mei. It would be interesting to know Kamla's reaction when she gets to know about Mehras. Hope wo Kalpi ko unse alag na kare. Will you add an adoptive angle also?? Kya Kalpana ko Mehras ne legally adopt kara hai, ya sirf paal k bada kara hai jab wo door thi tab. It would be interesting to know that, since that would mean Kalpana has all the rights on Mehras property and their love which a legal heir has.

I am sorry mai kuchh zyada hi sochti hu tumhara FF pad k!😆 please don't mind, and I read this just now, thats why i am late in my comment too.

P.S.: Can i know your name please?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Thanks 4 ur response Chahat. My name is Unisha known as Mimi here. Hope u had liked my FF. And yes socho socho mujhe bohut acchha laga ki mere paas tumhaare jaise dost hai jo itne dhyaan se meri story parte hai. And what's ur name?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...eagerly waiting for next...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimiunisha

Hey! Thanks 4 ur response Chahat. My name is Unisha known as Mimi here. Hope u had liked my FF. And yes socho socho mujhe bohut acchha laga ki mere paas tumhaare jaise dost hai jo itne dhyaan se meri story parte hai. And what's ur name?


Ok, Unisha is a very nice name.😊 As I said, I just love ur FF, in fact I wait for your update every day.It is a nice change to see a rich and strong Kalpi, both money wise, emotionally and will power wise. more to go for women power!👍🏼

My name is Charu, but on IF I use my pen/nick name, i.e., Chahat. so you can call me either way. 😃
Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago
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Thanku so much 4 reading my updates! So there goes next 😉

Epi-13

Pat-1

Alka- Ab tum hi batao Kalpana mai kya karu. Marne ke siwaaye mera kuch kaam nehi raha. Prem ne kaha tha wo mujhse shaadi karega.Lekin ab jiske bharose mai apne aap ko itne dur jaane diya aaj wahi mujhe characterless bana diya. Mai ek orphan hu bachpan se to nehi lekin bachpan me meri mom ki death ho jaati hai aur kuch saal pehle dad ke bhi death ho gayi hai. Aur ye duniya akele larki ko jeene nehi degi. Mere paas kaam bhi nehi hai jiske badoulat mai kuch earn karu.

Kalpana- Tum chinta mat karo mai hu naa. Utho aur mere saath chalo.

A- Kaha ?

K- Chinta mat karo mai tumhe maarne nehi waali.

A- Tumne mujhpe bharosa kia ?

K- Haa ! Kyuki tum musibatme ho. Waise ab chalo mere saath.

A- Ok !

Kalpana brought Alka to Mehra Mansion.

Her parents are waiting eagerly for her.

The bell of Mehra Mansion rang.

Nia Kaaki opened the door and welcomed Kalpana and the new girl with her.

Abhimanyu and Divya came running and hugged her.

Kalpi- Mom Dad ! Bola tha naa mai zaroor aungi.

Abhi- At last guriyaa ghar wapas aayi.

D- Aise kyu keh rahe ho. Ye meri guriyaa ka ghar hi to hai.

Both of them kissed Kalpana's forehead.

Then all of them noticed that the girl who came with Kalpana was staring at them.

K- Mom Dad ye Alka hai.

Then she told what happened with her.

K- Dad will you do a favour. She is jobless. Use Anne ki P.A. ka post de do naa.

Abhi- Ye uss job ki layak hai ?

K- Mai assure karti hu ye perfect hai uss post ke liye.

Abhi- Agar tu kehti hai to thik hai.

K- Mai Anne ko call karke bol dungi. Uski posting kaha hai ab ?

Abhi- Newly Delhi me hui hai. Kal last yaha office karke raat ki flight se chali jaayegi..

K- Well ye to bohut bari khush khabri hai. Alka mai tumhaare liye shaam ki air ticket book kar dungi. Tum aaj hi Delhi ke liye rawanaa hogi.

Alka was gaping at the scenes which were taking place infront of her eyes but she can hardly believe it. The P.A. of the Managing Supervisor was giving her job at other company.

Kalpi understood Alka's heart.

K- Alka yehi sach hai. Meri iss pehchaan ke baare me koi nehi jaanta hai. Tum Mumbai me nehi ruk sakti...ghar wapas nehi jaa sakti. Better tum aaj hi Delhi chali jaao. I know sab kuch aisa ho raha hai jisse tumhe ye lag raha hoga tumhaari zindegi ne 180 deegree turn le li. Lekin believe me tumhe koi problem nehi hogi. Prem tum tak nehi pohuchega issliye tumhaari personal life ek raaz banke reh jaayegi. Company se tumhe ek flat milega. Sab kuch tumhaare jaane se pehle hi mai intezaam karke rakhne ke liye keh dungi.

Alka- I know tum mujhe problem nehi hone dogi. Itna to tumhe jaan hi chuki hu abhi tak. Lekin jo baat mujhe samajh me nehi aa rahi hai tum actually ho kaun ?

Kalpana smiles.

K- Tum kehti thi naa mai itni acchi presentation kaise deti hu ? Mai itni acchi tarah se business deals kaise samajh leti hu. Uski ek simple wajah hai maine business me training Mr Abhimanyu Mehra se liya hai matlab mere dad se li hai.

Alka- Iska matlab tum ...

K- Zyaadaa confuse mat hona. Kuch chiz mujh tak hi rehne do. Mujhe apni personal life share karna pasand nehi hai. Nia Kaaki aap Alka ko guest room dikha dijiye.

Alka was about to leave with Nia kaaki.

K- Aur haa. Anne kal jayegi Delhi. Tum to aaj jaa rahe ho Aman tumhe guide karega.Tumhaare clothes ki mai intezaam kar dungi. Lunch ke wakt milenge. Ab jaao aur rest karo.

Can anyone guess what ?Kalpi's voice is totally commanding when she said Alka to go to the guest room. Her features hardened when Alka indirectly asked about her personal life.She is a girl who hates to give her personal information to anyone till she finds out that he or she is trustworthy enough. She never believe anyone so easily.

Part-2

Kalpana went upstairs and opened the door of her room.

Room was that really a room ? She is standing at the door. Opposite to her was her round bed. It was clinged to the opposite wall. Top of the bed was her picture. The picture was only her face which is full of attitude. Her smile in that picture was mischvious.Above her picture was the AC. Two small cupboard were attached to the bed. The cupboards has three..three drawers in it. On top of one cupboard was her mom and dad picture in which she is herself clinging in her mom and dad's arms when she was just 8. Yes this picture was the 1st picture she clicked with her mom and dad in Mehra Mansion of Delhi. The other cupbord on top has a jug filled with water and a glass. The glass is turned upside down.On the right side of her bed was her dressing table. And next to the table was the french door. A door which leads to a clearly visible pool which has an artificial waterfall. Yes ! Once she told dad she loves waterfall so her dad made the model of her room as per her choice.

She went to the pool side.Her eyes wander off and stopped at her punch bag which was hanged on the pool's north east corner. She loves boxing ! Suddenly she remembered the night when the goons attacked her and Raghav on highway. Yes ! She could fight , she knows well if she wanted that night she could show them that girls are not weak ! But what stopped her...her desire to get protected by someone. No ! not by someone but only by Raghav, Raghav Singhania.That night the feminist inside her had vanished, who loves to show women power. Had she fallen for Raghav so long back ? Maybe from ages she had a soft corner for him from the time he taught her maths. Suddenly her eyes went to the pool's water.

K pov- Wow ! Me the swimming champion forgot to open my sandals and to tie my dupatta nicely that night. Ho kya gaya tha uss raat mujhe ? Mai swimming ke simple rules bhi bhul gayi thi.Mai shayad Raghav se dur bhaagnaa chahti thi isliye yaa fir ye sab stupidity karke uske kareeb jaana chahti thi. Actually mujhe hi pata nehi mai karna kya chahti thi uss raat.

She saw there is a white small glass table with two chairs. Then she saw the cupbord for files which was attached to the wall. The great thing was that the part covering the pool had no roof. It was like prone to sunshine or whatever nature offers. She retuned to her room from the pool side. The poolside was attached to her room just like it was a part of her own room.

Now the left side of the bed. After the cupboard was the door to the bathroom. She peeped inside the bathroom. The bathroom was big as her chawl's room. It had a huge basin then a bath tub with hand shower system. All her essential items were there to which she was used to from childhood. There were shampoos to conditioners. Liquid soap to face wash and hand washes, everything.She came out of the bathroom.

Now starts the longest wardrobe which streches to the door which is connected with her room's balcony. That wardrobe can be said a storeroom of Kalpi's clothes and shoes which are uncountable.

She went directly to the balcony where her swing was kept. She again came inside. Now she could see a cupboard which is three metres in height and she knows very well it has all her gadgets inside it. Starting from her mobile handsets to her iphone. From her phablet to her cell cum watch. The door connecting her room and the balcony was not just a simple door It was made of glass like a big window allowing sunshine to come inside her room.After the cupboard was the door through which she came inside her room. Near the door was the large flat LED Tv which was clinged to the wall and under the TV was a small cupboard where her jewelleries are kept. On top of the cupboard was her two big teddybears which she got from her mom and dad on her 9th birthday .

Yes ! Her scanning of her whole room has finished. All the things are kept in the way she likes.

She went to the balcony and called Aman.

A- Haa ! Ma'am kahiye.

K- Aman aaj hi Alka Delhi jaa rahi hai flight se tum khud use pickup karna aur Company ka ek flat use de dena. 9 :00 pm use lene airport chale jaana. Thik hai.

A- Yes ma'am.

Kalpi cuts the phone.

She went downstairs and directly headed towards the dining parlour which is next to the kitchen. The dining table is a 6 seater. The table can be seen from the stairs. She noticed Alka and her parents are seated for the lunch and waiting for her.Nia kaaki was standing because she serves the dishes.

K- Sorry dad ! Mai thori late ho gayi naa ?

Abhi- Koi baat nehi beta . Chalo lunch shuru karte hai.

They are having lunch when Mohan their driver comes with many packets.

All notices it.

Abhi- Mohan ye sab kya hai ?

K- Dad ! Ye sab Alka ke liye hai. Maine hi mangwaaya tha. ( Turning towards Nia kaaki) Kaaki Mohan suitcase bhi leke aaya hai aur jo chije Alka ko zaroorat ho sakti hai sab leke aaya hai. Aap please pack kar dijiye.

N- Thik hai babiji.

Nia kaaki takes the packets from Mohan and went to te guest room to pack Alka's bag.

Part-3

Airport.

Kalpana herself came to drop Alka.

A- Thanks ma'am.

K- Why are you saying thanks and calling me ma'am ?

A- Kyuki aap ma'am ho. Mai aapke dad ke company me kaam karungi and you helped me so much.

K- Dekho ab tumhaara career hi tumhaara main maksad hona chahiye. Maine tumhe ghusa to diya lekin yaad rahe iss post se higher post jaane ki mehnat tumhe karni paregi. Aur agar koi problem ho to Aman se consult karna, he will come to pick you from the airport and mai Anne ko bhi tumhaare baare me samjha dungi.Ab jaao tumhaare flight ki wakt ho rahi hai. Bye !

A- Bye !

Kalpna came back home. She was having head ache so she went directly to sleep in her room. Her parents gave her good night kisses. She was missing it so much. Kamala never gave her a good night kiss. But she is prone to her mom's good night kiss.

Next Morning-

Morning 8 o clock.

Divya Nia Kaaki ke saath Kalpi ke kamre me aayi. Nia Kaaki ke haath me tray. Tray me plain water and juice. Kalpi ghore bechke so rahi hai apne round bed ke upar. Uske white pillows bed ke chaaro taraf bikharke pari hui hai. Divya sat on her bed and gently shake Kalpana's arms.

D- Beta utho subah ho gayi hai.

Kalpi took a pillow and cover her ears.

K- No mom ! Mujhe thori der aur sona hai.

D- Dekha Nia ghar aate hi shuru ho gayi nautanki.

K with a sleepy voice- Mom mujhe pamper karne ke liye aap log ho naa to thora mera tantrums jhel lo !

D brings her face near Kalpi's ears.

D- Aaj tumhaare dad tumhaare liye special breakfast bana rahe hai aur meri kitchen ki satyanaash kar rahe hai.

Kalpi throws the pillows and sat on the bed.

K- Tabhi mai sochu itni acchhi smell kaha se aa rahi hai jisne meri neend ki band baja diya hai.

Precap- Kalpana came to her dad's office and went directly to the CEO's Cabin.

She saw a girl working in her laptop. She went directly inside the cabin where the girl is working.

K- So today is the last day of Miss Ananya Swaminathan here in Mumbai.

Ananya picked her eyes from her laptop and saw Kalpi.

She left her chair came and hugged Kalpi.

A- Kalpu kaisi hai tu ?

K- Mai to acchi hu lekin meri dost Anne ka kya khabar hai. Mere baare me to tu shayed bhul hi gayi hogi.

A- Oh comeon ! Tere company me kaam karke tujhe kaise bhul sakti hu yaar ?

Sry guys this Epi has a large description of Kalpana's room. But I thought it was needed to know the real luxurious lifestyle of Kalpi. Hope u guys had enjoyed today's boaring epi.Don't bash me 4 dis epi.

There is more to know about Kalpana. Hope u guys liked today's epi. And as always give me your feed backs and likes !

LOVE U ALL !❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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What? Again no comments! I thought u guys will bash me 4 such a boaring epi!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww
amazinggg
dear
how did i missed these updates .read all of them...dumbstricken
dont know wat to say ...again kissies loads of luv
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