New SS on Ragna-Chap 34 updated on page 113- No PM - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee

characters drive the story ... how well said😊

now ... speaking abt the update ... it was awesome.
the story's going pretty well.
And let me compliment u for 1 thing ... u play with emotions very nicely ( take it to be in a nice sense)
eg. at 1 point i pity raghav for not being forgiven by kalpu & the next moment i get enraged on reading his betrayel.
Love this kalpana as well ... a character so strong in its ownself who has the courage to face the world alone as also has a self-respect which deserves admiral.
i am waiting for ur next updatw ... update asap.

MARUSHKAA


Thank you for the honest feedback. and I am taking it very positively.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its true the characters evolve and they make you write the story! Actually the writer also doesn't know what in store ahead!
Loved the update! However wanted to read more on Raghav's turmoil and his emotions when he gets to know about Hiya!

However you have not yet shared that when did Kalpi trust Raghav so much and be intimate with him that lead to Hiya? Hmmm maybe in future updates! Please keep updating and if possible do PM me as I do not want to miss the updates.

Thanks sweety!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part..Raghav find out that hiya is his daughter..I hope before Kalpna tell Hiya about her dad..I want Hiya-Raghav bond going to strong..I am sure that Kalpi not forget easily..
Go with your flow...we love it..the way your story going...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Its true the characters evolve and they make you write the story! Actually the writer also doesn't know what in store ahead!

Loved the update! However wanted to read more on Raghav's turmoil and his emotions when he gets to know about Hiya!

However you have not yet shared that when did Kalpi trust Raghav so much and be intimate with him that lead to Hiya? Hmmm maybe in future updates! Please keep updating and if possible do PM me as I do not want to miss the updates.

Thanks sweety!


May be I will be able to explain the situation of Raghav and Kalpana's intimacy in future updates. I have already tried to depict Kalpan' s trust on Raghav. Thanks for liking it,
Edited by Saanjh26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good update
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's a very emotional update
Although I feel sorry for Raghav
I totally understand Kalpi feelings and her state of mind
It's alright if she take time to forgive Raghav
After the way he treated her. And what make it worst is he will fully break her heart
Hiya hugging Raghav was amazing
I can't wait for them to bond more
Beautiful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great updt , while reading I feel the charter mkin my eyes wet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...just love the way your story is continuing... Its fabulous...
Please update next part soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
dats amazing...finally raghav got to knw his daughter...👏

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