New SS on Ragna-Chap 34 updated on page 113- No PM - Page 35

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Kalpana and Raghav are taken to hospital. Kalpana is lying unconscious on her hospital bed. In her unconscious state she sees that a little girl is walking on the edge of terrace and suddenly she loses her balance and she is falling. She tries to hold edge but her hand is slipping. Suddenly a hand grabs her hand and pulls him. The girl looks at her savior who is a cute teenager whom she had seen a lot of times before. Before Raghav can say something, her baba comes there. She just hugs her baba and tells everything. Vittal holds Raghav's hand and says You have done a great favor on me saving my Kalpi. Thanks Raghav baba'. Kalpana looks at the person and she sees him smiling and saying It is not favor. Kalpana is my friend. Am I right Kalpana'. Kalpana looks at him Kalpi, my friends call me Kalpi'. Kalpana comes out of her dream and also her unconscious state. She realizes that she is in hospital. She remembers how she and Raghav got injured. She looks here and there and finds her aai sitting beside her. Kamla gets happy seeing that Kalpana has gained consciousness. Kalpana tries to ask something to Kamla and hesitates. Kamla is hoping that Kalpana will ask her about Raghav and she wants to hear it from Kalpana's mouth. Kalpna asks Kamla I hope Hiya and Neel do not know about me. They will get frightened after seeing me like this'.

Raghav gets conscious and finds Gouri and Sammys anxious eyes on him. He just asks How is she. I want to meet her'. Sammy tells Raghav that Kalpana is alright and Doctor has instructed him not to move. Raghav looks at determined face of his mother and friend; He pleads Please let me see her once with my own eyes. Please.' Gouri smiles at his son's craziness. Sammy explains that Kalpana's dada is also here and he is sure that he will not like his meeting with Kalpana. Raghav gives him a pleading look and Sammy gestures him that he will take care of it. After five minutes, Sammy comes to Raghav and says Coast is clear. Go and see her. Her room no is XXX. I am going to meet doctor.'

Raghav goes towards Kalpana's room and sees frightened faces of Hiya and Neel. Raghav thinks to console him but it can wait, he has to see Kalpana. He is near Kalpana's room when he hears Kamla Ma's words Don't you want to know how is Raghav baba?' Raghav's heart starts beating faster. He just wants to hear her answer but the next voice pours cold water on him- Why should I ? He must be alright. His family is there for him.' Raghav just stands outside and hides himself from Kamla Ma and Kalpana's eyes. He starts listening their conversation.

Kamla: I thought you still care for Raghav baba after seeing how you saved him.

Kalpana : Aai, I had saved him so that I would not be related to him in any way now. Once he saved me and today I saved him. I am free from his every favor. Now I am not related to him in any way. I have paid for his every favor.

Kamla notices pain in Kalpana's voice. She knows that she was hurt and her heart and soul are wounded by Raghav's betrayal. But she has to forget her past for hiya's good future and she specks You can't detach yourself completely from Raghav. You will be always related to him, You want it or not. He is father of your daughter and you can't deny this fact. Better you accept this.

Raghav gets shock of her life listening this. He is father of Kalpana's daughter i.e. Hiya. How is that possible? Kalpana aborted his child and he again hears Kalpana's voice A father is girl's first hero, her strength like my baba. I promised baba that I will not be judgmental about raghav as a father but tell me truthfully do you really think that your Raghav baba will be a good father to hiya.'

Raghav does not have more strength to listen. He is happy and sad at same moment. Hiya is his daughter. Does not his heart know it always? The strange bond between him and hiya is always so evident. But Kalpana does not believe that he will be a good father to Hiya. He remembers.

Flashback starts.

Kalpana and Raghav are sitting at poolside in terrace of Raghav's home. Kalpana s hand in Raghav's hand and they are soaking their feet in pool water. Raghav tries to hug Kalpana and Kalpana removes his hand from Raghav's hand and tries to runs. Raghav holds her hand and makes her sit again. Kalpana leans her head on Raghav's shoulder.

Kalpana : Raghav do you know I have always dreamt that I would marry a person of my baba's choice. A person who will be like him, perfect in every sense. But my bad luck I fall in love with you. You are short tempered, Arrogant spoiled brat.

Raghav (in his mind : I am listening your this nonsense so that I can make you pay double for it) smiles and cups her face : Do you think I am really that bad? I will change myself for you. Now be happy.

Kalpana : no, never change Raghav. Baba said that you can't be perfect as him. As no daughter will find their husband perfect against their father and my baba is the best.

Raghav is not listening anything but thinking has kalpana told her baba about their relation. No It will be bad for his plan and in his sugar coated voice : Kalpana have u told vittal uncle about us? Actually right now I am not ready to meet ur parents. I need sometime. You know me.

Kalpana : Oh god Raghav, I did not tell baba about you. I just told him that that I like someone but he is so unlike you and do you know what he said that you will always remain imperfect in my eyes but you will be perfect in our daughter's eyes.

Raghav( in his mind our daughter in your dream only. I hate you) : Did not vittal uncle force you to tell my name ?

Kalpana : He asked me but I told him that I want to be sure about us and our feelings.

Raghav smirks( In mind you could not be unsure. You have to be sure about your love. So that I can break ur heart in pieces like you broke Trisha's heart) : Oh really you are still unsure about us and tries to Kiss Kalpana . Kalpana hits his chest softly with her fists and then buries her head in his chest.

Kalpana : I am never unsure about us raghav. I love u and I always will.

Flashback -ends.

Raghav looks at Hiya lovingly. He just wants to hug her and wants to hear word DAD from her mouth. Her worried face is piercing his heart. His feet takes him toward her and suddenly Neel's voice breaks her trance. Neel cries out Papa and runs . Raghav looks at the man and he is shocked to see Rahul there. Rahul sits on his knees and wipes Neel's tears and assures him that his mee will be alright. Raghav sees Hiya coming towards him and stretches his hands but hiya crosses him and goes to Rahul.

Hiya : Rahul uncle,make aaji understand, I want to meet mumma. Please Rahul uncle.'

Rahul : Don't worry Hiya . you both sit here. I am going to talk ur aaji.

Rahul leaves from there. Hiya notices Raghav and goes to him. She starts crying seeing bandages on Raghav's body. She hugs him though her tiny body is just able to hug his legs only and asks him: Is it paining? Are you alright? Raghav sits on his knees after using great effort. His body is paining but he does not care. He wants to hug his daughter once. It does not matter he is best or worst. But he is just a father and he has every right to hug his daughter. He hugs her and cries : Call me Dad once.

Precap :

Kalpana will tell Hiya that Raghav is her father.

Gouri will bring Raghav and Kalpana's marriage proposal.

Kalpana meets Raghav.

Note :

Just used my friend's laptop to update this part. I am sorry if you find this part boring. I could not be able to bring them together so soon as I would not be able to relate with Kalpana if she forgives Raghav so soon. I have tried to add layers in their relationship. I don't know how much successful I am. Kalpana's confusion and non-acceptance is strength of her. I used to think that writer drives the story but in real characters drive the story. I feel bad for Raghav but Kalpana is not ready to forgive him so easily. Most Important, I am very bad in writing romantic part.

Thanks for your appreciation as it encourages writers like me.

Do comment and like button if you want me to continue.

Sorry for spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.

now ... speaking abt the update ... it was awesome.

the story's going pretty well.

And let me compliment u for 1 thing ... u play with emotions very nicely ( take it to be in a nice sense)

eg. at 1 point i pity raghav for not being forgiven by kalpu & the next moment i get enraged on reading his betrayel.

Love this kalpana as well ... a character so strong in its ownself who has the courage to face the world alone as also has a self-respect which deserves admiral.

i am waiting for ur next updatw ... update asap.

MARUSHKAA