OS- The Confused Couples ~Last Part Page 7~ - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol...such a bizzare confusion...would definitely want to read how it unfolds !!
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Its really hilirious pls continue soon 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2:

After all the guests have left all three guys are left sitting on the steps in front of the building. They glumly look down at their shoes when Raghav spoke up. "All this confusion is because of you, Prem!" Prem looked up in surprise. "'Paakhi is wearing a pink dress'" Raghav mimicked Prem. "Well how was I to know? I just saw the dress on Paakhi's bed!" Prem said. "Yeah but-" "And besides" Prem said. "You guys couldn't even recognize your own love?" "Look who's talking" Sammy said. "You couldn't recognize Maya?" "Well Sammy, that can uh.. sometimes happen" Prem said. "Stop this chitchat, we have got to do something" Raghav said getting up. "But what?" Sammy asked as he and Prem too got up to stand. Raghav straightened out his coat. "Come on guys, we're boys, we can convince these girls in no time" he said. Sammy and Prem smiled along with Raghav as they all gave each other a high five. Then Raghav put his arms around Sammy and Prem. "Let's go on a vacation in my mansion, what say?" "Not bad" Prem said thoughtfully. "I'm in" Sammy said. "Who will invite them?" Sammy asked. "You will" Prem and Raghav said to Sammy at the same time. Sammy looked startled. "Me..why?" "You are the most thoughtful and just come on yaar" Prem said. Sammy agreed.

Kalpana, Paakhi, and Maya meet at Maya's house. They all tell each other about what had happened with them at the party. "We've got to teach these boys a lesson" Maya finally said. "Correct!" Paakhi chimed. They both look at Kalpana who was lost in Raghav's thoughts. "Kalpi!" they said. Kalpi got out of her trance and agreed to help the girls.
Just then Kalpana's phone starts to ring. "Hello?" she asks. "Sammy sir?" Maya and Paakhi went quiet as Kalpana put the phone on speaker. "Kalpana, um, we guys were wondering if you girls could join us for a vacation in Raghav's mansion this weekend" Sammy said. Sammy was nervous because he thought that the girls were angry. The girls wanted a chance to get back at the guys so Kalpana said sweetly, "Sure, Sammy." Sammy was surprised that Kalpana hadn't argued but as she was in his favor he said nothing more.
After Kalpi had hung up, Paakhi said, "This vacation will be a disaster for these boys." "You bet" Maya said. "Mhm..." Kalpana said uncertainly. She wasn't the girly girl types who always thought of teaching boys a lesson so she was having a little trouble catching on. "Okay Kalpi, let's go home and start packing" Paakhi said. "But Kamla Ma.." Kalpi started. "Don't worry, Maya, you, and I are going together na? So what's the problem?" Paakhi asked. Kalpana nodded. Ever since she and Paakhi had told Kamla Ma about their interest in Sammy and Raghav, Kamla had been happy for them but also a little overprotective. After all, she was a mother. Kamla had not minded as the girls already had a good job and were ready for life. Paakhi and Kalpi bid Maya a bye telling her that they'll meet tomorrow morning.

"Kya?" Kamla asked. The girls were sitting in Kalpana's room talking to Kalpi's mother. "Vacation?" Kamla asked. "Haan" Paakhi said. "Lekeen tum ladkiya aise akeli.." "Oh fo Kamla Ma, hum bas do din keliye hi to jaare hai" Paakhi said. Kamla looked towards her mature daughter Kalpi. "Kalpi, tu jaana chaati hai?" Kalpana thought. Yes, she did want to teach that Akdoo a lesson. Kalpana nodded. "Phir theek hai tum sab jaao" Kamla said giving in. "Oh you are the best, ai" Kalpi said hugging her mother. Paakhi nodded and hugged Kamla as well.
Paakhi went home to start packing as they would leave for Raghav's mansion a few hours drive away tomorrow.

The boys pick up Kalpi, Paakhi, and Maya in the morning. The girls showed lots of attitude. When Raghav started to say something to Kalpi, Paakhi said, "Come on, Kalps, let's sit." Prem started to go towards Maya but she shooed him away. So unfortunately, the guys couldn't do much during the drive.
In the afternoon when they finally get to Raghav's huge mansion everyone is pretty tired. Raghav tells them all to choose their rooms. Paakhi said that she would share a room with Kalpi. Maya chose the room she always took whenever she used to come visit the mansion with Sammy and Raghav. Everyone gets to their rooms and plan on meeting during dinner.
When everyone gets over to the large dining table for dinner here is how they sit. Maya sits in the middle with Sammy and Kalpi on either side of her. Across from them Prem sits in the middle with Raghav and Paakhi on either side of him.
"Start" Raghav said. Everyone agrees and starts eating. Then Paakhi exclaims, "Popcorn? During dinner?" "I like popcorn that's why" Prem said. "You all may have some too" he added.
Everyone is busy eating there dinner and are looking down at their food when Maya decides to irritate Prem. She takes a piece of popcorn out of her bowl and aims it at Prem. Unfortunately, it landed on Paakhi. Maya quickly pretended to be busy with her food. Taking the piece of popcorn out of her hair Paakhi looks up in anger. She sees Sammy gazing at her and thinks he must've thrown it. She frowns at him and picked popcorn out of her own bowl and without bothering to keep it a secret she throws a handful at Sammy. Everyone looks up. "What's going on?" Prem asked. Maya who has had enough of it and wants to take the chance to throw popcorn at him gets a handful out of her own bowl. "Here!" she screams throwing a handful at Prem who says, "What the-" "What childishness" Raghav said standing up. "How dare you call my friends childish huh?" Kalpi said getting up as well and grabbing a handful of popcorn of herself. She throws it at Raghav but he was too quick for her as he ducked.
"Enough huh" Prem said throwing popcorn back at Maya. Pretty soon all the couples were throwing popcorn at each other back and forth.😆
They all froze only when they hear Kalpana's phone ringing. "Haan, Ai?" Kalpi asked. "Ji, Ai hum sab theek hai, ji, bye." Once Kalpi hung up Raghav starts to laugh at her. "Look at yourself" he tells her. Kalpi looks down at herself to see that she is covered in bits of popcorn. "Ha ha very funny" Kalpi said. "Because you all are looking the same way." Everyone looks down at themselves. "All because of you!" Maya said to Prem and running away to get cleaned up. Everyone else rushes up to their rooms as well. When Kalpi is walking past Raghav he grabs her by the arm. "You still look pretty" he said. He took out a piece of popcorn out of her hair. They look into eachother's eyes for a moment but then Kalpi shyly runs away into her room. Raghav grins. Paakhi and Maya were showing Prem and Sammy lots of attitude but his Kalpi was so innocent.
Girls being girls took a long time getting cleaned up. Sammy had an idea. He would place a green dress for Paakhi on her bed to surprise her. He immediately pins a letter to it. He sneaks into the girls' room and puts the package on the bed. Sammy is waiting right outside the door. Paakhi had gone off to use another restroom in the mansion as Kalpi was busy in the one they had in their room. So when Kalpi got out she saw a package on the bed. She looks in. A green dress. A note read, 'I'm sorry. Please wear this dress for my sake.' She thought it must be from Raghav and gets really angry. "I told Raghav that I hate the color green and now he's gifting me a green dress. Wow" Kalpi shook her head but still goes to wear it as she doesn't want to refuse to Raghav. Sammy is standing flat against the wall outside the room and when Kalpi steps out wearing a green dress he puts a huge piece of cloth around her face. His plan was to give Paakhi a surprise by taking her to the garden. And now since he had covered her face with that huge piece of cloth he had no way of knowing he was holding Kalpi. "Mmm..MM!" Kalpi said making noises. Sammy just says, "Hold on, it's a surprise" and leads her out into the garden.
Paakhi comes back into the room and sees Kalpana missing so she goes back to the garden to see if she was there.
In the garden, proud of himself that he had managed to bring Paakhi out, Sammy took the cloth off her face. He gasped. Looking back at him was an angry Kalpi. "Sammy!" Kalpana said through gritted teeth. "Kalpi..?" he said. "How dare you, Sammy" Paakhi said from behind him. "Don't you know that Kalpi has no interest in you, so why do you half kidnap her and take her to the garden?" "Paakh-"Sammy started. "Come Kalpi, let's go" Paakhi said, and Kalpi angrily follows Paakhi back inside the home. After the girls have gone, Prem comes out of the bushes clapping. "TUM?" Sammy asked. "Oh jeez, Sammy, don't you know how to do anything properly?" Prem said with a smirk. "Well Kalpi was wearing the green dress which was intended for Paakhi" Sammy said. "Too bad" Prem said showing him a thumbs down. "Just watch how I patao Maya." "Alright" Sammy said and they shake hands.
On the way to their room, Kalpana passes Raghav who looks at her happily. She "hmphs" at him leaving. She was still mad at him for gifting her a green dress. She still didn't know that Sammy had been the one to put the green dress there for Paakhi.
Paakhi and Kalpi went straight to Maya's room and locked the door behind them. "Maya" Paakhi hissed. "Tell na, how do we teach these guys a lesson?"
Maya smiles and says, "I have got a plan."

I hope you guys liked part 2 of this OS. I also hope it wasn't too confusing. I will continue only if you guys liked it. (Sorry for any mistakes)😊



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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤣😃😃😃😃👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏awesome dear you made my day i was laughing like this after so many day thanks yr u are fab writer
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely can't stop 😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Lovely it was so funny
Plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
This confusion is getting more and more funny lol
I like their popcorn fight
Amazing update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful...as hilarious as the previous one...I'm loving this...eagerly waiting for the girls to tadpaofy the guys...but looks like Ragna are lot more innocent than the rest...if possible start their romance track parallel to this revenge track😆...bohuth mazaa aayega😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hahaha🤣
This is sooo funny!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Wow lovely part continue and update soon plzzz

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