OS- The Confused Couples ~Last Part Page 7~

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mehfooza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Well if you think RagNa should patch up first then that's what I'll do.😊
And sorry I can't update now as I'm a little busy.

Dear u write in our own way..I just love this ss
U continue when u r not busy 😊
With lots of love mehfooza 😉

Edited by Mehfooza - 11 years ago

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nehashtha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

nice one..

thank you😊😊

waiting for last part...😊😊

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samy18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

🤣😃😃😃😆😆😆 this is what was doing while reading it its lovely cockroach hehehe i dnt knw y girls are afraid of cockroach if i had to do something like dis i had put real ones

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Mehr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Hi pookhi!

sorry for late reply, was not in my right mind these days! 😆

yes, its a hilarious update! i loved the fun part!

i really like your work dear! its got a fine touch.

and Prem and Maya are too cute!

bring up the last part very soon!

i'm waiting eagerly!

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Foram

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

again a funny update i was 🤣 throughout

update soon

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donwannaone

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

dear its awsum👏👏👏

lovely update HILARIOUS

update sooon

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Am loving this...this is an other romedy..

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Part 4:

According to Kalpi's plan they would go to the mall tomorrow. Kalpi went up to the whiteboard hanging in Maya's room and picked up a red marker. She started writing down the plan while the girls watched.

1) Take the naughty boys to the mall.
2) Find a cute guy to dance with (There's a dance competition at the mall tomorrow, I hear)

Kalpi then paused for a moment to explain. "These boys confessed to the wrong girl na, so now they'll watch us with another guys." Paakhi and Maya nodded as Kalpi went back to writing on the white board.

3) When the boys question us then just tell them why should they care
4) Revenge Plan is over.

Kalpi turned around to see Maya and Paakhi's reaction. "But Kalpi.." Paakhi asked. "what is step five?" "Good question" Kalpi said pointing the marker at Paakhi. "But..." she said lowering her marker. "I don't know... don't worry though" she added seeing Maya's doubtful expression. "I'll think of something." Maya nodded reading over the instructions again. "Sounds good!" Paakhi said cheerfully. "Kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum bhi aise plans banane me achi ho" Maya said shaking her finger at Kalpi. "Eh" Kalpi said modestly with a wave of her hand. "It's nothing."
"Let's get a good night's sleep then" Kalpi said. Paakhi nodded and asked Maya, "Would you like to join Kalpi and me for a sleepover in our room?" "Of course" Maya said clapping her hands together. "Okay come" Kalpi said leading the way out the door.
The girls got settled in the room with Paakhi on the couch in the room. Once they got comfortable they talked for a while before finally drifting off to sleep.
In his room, Prem thinks over how he called Maya idiotic. "Maybe I said too much.." he mumbled. "I'll go talk to her that's it."
He enters Maya's room and calls out, "Maya.." He looks around the room but doesn't find her. Instead he sees writing on the whiteboard. (Kalpi had forgotten to erase the plan)
"Ah, so this is what the girls are plotting against us 'innocent' boys" Prem mumbled. He quickly woke up Sammy and together they entered Raghav's room. "Wake up, Raghav" Sammy hissed. Raghav wouldn't budge. "I said wake up and stop sleeping like a log!" Sammy said furiously. Raghav moaned and mumbled, "Kalpana mujhe sone do." "Kalpana ko chodo agar tum abhi nahi uthe toh Kalpana to gayi" Prem said whistling in the end. Raghav picked up a pillow and put it over his ear to stop their voices. "What a sleeper" Prem said to Sammy. Sammy just shrugged. Nowadays, Raghav loved sleeping so he could dream about Kalpana. Sammy couldn't blame him. He often dreamed about Paakhi.
Prem went into the restroom and returned with a bucket of water. Dumping it over his head he said, "Time to get out of your dream world" Prem said with a sarcastic grin. "Ugh-what is it yaar!" Raghav said sitting up and rubbing his eyes. "Come" Sammy told him.

A few minutes later, the guys looked at the whiteboard together. Then Raghav smirked. "These girls wanted cute guys to jealofy us na, we'll give them cute guys." "What" Prem asked. Raghav cocked his head and grinned.

The next day, at breakfast table the girls insisted on going to the mall that evening. The guys agreed.

The next day at the mall the girls went to the area where the dancing competition was about to take place. Three guys entered that area together just then and Raghav gave them a thumbs up. They were his friends. They would be the girls' partners and all the while be on their side.
Vishal went up to Kalpana and asked her, "May I have a dance?" Kalpana looked towards Raghav who pretended to be furious. "Sure" Kalpi said placing her hand in Vishal's. Max went up to Paakhi. They soon became partners. Then Varun became partners with Maya.
The three couples lined up with all the other couples. Raghav, Sammy, and Prem were left standing alone. The girls smiled thinking that their plan was working.
Before the competition could begin, the lights went out. Everyone kept turning around to see what was wrong. When the lights went back on the girls turned towards their partners. Sammy, Raghav, and Prem were standing before the girls. The other three guys had left. "Tum!" Kalpi said. "You?" Maya asked Prem. Paakhi frowned at Sammy and crossed her arms. The girls were confused😕
"This couple up!" the host ordered pointing at Sammy and Paakhi. Paakhi glared at Sammy. Sammy went up to her and bent down before her. Paakhi looked into his eyes. They clearly told her how much he loved her. Maybe she should ditch the plan and accept Sammy. Yeah that was it. She took his hand. As the lights dimmed the spotlight was on them. The song 'Bol Na Halke Halke' started. Sammy twirled Paakhi round and round in his arms and pretty soon Paakhi found her anger at him gone. After the song ended everyone broke into applause.

"Alright second is this couple" the host declared pointing at Prem and Maya. The spotlight focused on them. Only, Maya still was angry so she stood facing the other way. When she turned around she saw that Prem was missing. Her anger turned into sadness and she turned away when she heard a song starting. 'Aankhein Hai Teri Badi'. She turned around to see a smiling Prem looking at her. She watched as her silly Prem danced around her. He was trying every possible way to convince her. "How sweet" Kalpi murmured watching them. When Prem was about to pass by her, Maya grabbed his arm. He looked surprised but then he got really happy when Maya danced along with him. After the song ended Maya smiled shyly. Prem looked at Maya. She was always that ladti ladki types. He had never seen her this shy. That meant... he was forgiven.
After that another couple went and throughout the song, Kalpi was afraid that her number would come next. She thought it was best to get out of there as soon as possible. Just as the song ended she started walking away. But when the new song started she turned around curiously to see who's turn it was. Her lips parted in surprise when she saw Raghav dancing with a girl. Kalpi gritted her teeth and clenched her fists.
Raghav watched out of the corner of his eye as Kalpi got more and more furious. "Your job is almost done" he told the girl he was dancing with.
Finally, not being able to take it any more, Kalpi went up to Raghav and the girl and pulled them apart. The girl hurried away. Kalpi pouted and turned standing with her back towards Raghav. "Jeene Laga Hoon" came the sound of music. She turned around to look at Raghav's loving face. "Pehle se zyaada" Raghav went on. "Pele se zyaada tum pe marne laga hoon" as he said that Raghav went down on his knees and pulled out a rose. The music seemed to stop for a moment as if to see if Kalpi accepted the rose or not. Kalpi smiled and took the rose. Raghav held her hand and put the rose to her head placing it on her hair. "Pretty" he murmured.
Everyone watched their breaths hitched as they watched the couple that had so much love for each other. Once Kalpi put her hand in his they started swaying to the music.
Once they were finished, everyone clapped very loudly.
Kalpana brushed furiously and didn't know what to do. Raghav grinned and putting an arm around her waist led her back to the crowd as the next couple went up.
The next couple was an old couple in their seventies. Even though they were old and messed up on a few dance steps their love could be clearly visible. Everyone politely applauded after they were finished.
"Now" the host announced. "Since we have a tie between three couples, we have to do a small little game to figure out who is the winner out of those three couples." He called out the team names. "RagNa, SaKhi, and PreMa, the trophy is down that lane over there, when I say go you all run over to that table and whichever pair touches it first is the winner... GO!" Raghav took Kalpi's hand and they took off together. Same with SaKhi and PreMa.

All three of them went around a different path. And guess what? Prem, Raghav, and Sammy touched the trophy at the same time. "Now what do we do" Raghav asked in confusion. Maya started clapping. "Tum boys bhi na!" "Jahaan bhi jaate ho sab ko confuse kar ke rakh dete ho! Tum sabhi ko ek saath hi trophy pakadni thi?" Kalpana and Paakhi nodded in agreement. The host seemed befuddled and didn't know what to do.
Everyone watched as the girls and boys looked at each other. They nodded as Raghav and Kalpi grabbed the trophy and went up on stage. "Well..." Raghav announced. "We three couples are honored that we were chosen as one of the great performances but we believe that there is a couple out there who really deserves the award. We three couples would like to present that couple with the award" Raghav said as Kalpi went down the steps.
"Aap log upar stage pe aiye" Kalpi said to the elderly couple. They seemed surprised but non the less followed her back up to the stage. "Aap logon ne hum teen couples ka dance dekha" Kalpi said. "Magar yeh ek couple that jisme sab se zyaada pyaar hum teen jodiyo ko nazar mein aiya." "Ye sach hai" Paakhi spoke up. "Ki hum sab bhi ek doosre ko pyaar karte hai.. lekeen inhe award isi liye milna chahiye kyunki itne saal saath rehne ke baad bhi inh mein utna hi pyaar nazar aata hai." "Aur..." Maya added. "Sabko inh se pyaar ke baarein mein patta chalta hai. Ki umar ke saath saath pyaar badta hai."
Prem and Sammy looked at Maya and Paakhi in surprise. They had always been the girly-attitude type of girls and never did seem to say anything serious. But here they was talking with such maturity. Raghav was not surprised by Kalpi. He knew how much respect she had for true love.
Raghav went up to the elderly couple and handed them the trophy. "Congrats" he said with a grin. The couple smiled. "Jeetein raho bacho" they said.

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After the competition was over Sammy+Paakhi, Prem+Maya, and Raghav+Kalpi got into a group and danced on 'Jhoom Barabar.' In the middle of it though, the couples stopped. The DJ stopped the music and called out, "What happened??"
Raghav was standing next to Paakhi, Kalpi was standing next to Prem, and Maya was standing next to Sammy. "We accidentally switched" Paakhi yelled back. "Let's unswitch" Raghav said loudly. The crowd watched laughing 😆 as they saw thee couples returning back to their normal positions. "And The Confused Couples continue rocking..!" the DJ announced turning the loud music back on.

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Finally! I am done with this OS guys. I know I made some errors and I am sorry for that. I really hope you guys enjoyed reading this OS. Please do let me know how it was. Criticism is accepted as it would help me improve next time.😳

Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago