OS- The Confused Couples ~Last Part Page 7~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys, I am back with another OS as I love writing. I do hope you all enjoy it.

Note: In this story Prem is a positive character. Also, this OS is on three couples: Prem+Maya, Sammy+Paakhi, and Raghav+Kalpi


Part 1:

It has been eight months since Paakhi and Kalpana started working in the Singhaniya Group of Industries. Sammy and Paakhi have fallen in love with each other.😳
Our dear Raghav and Kalpana have fallen in love with each other. And Maya fell in love with Prem during their meetings. Prem and Raghav were business partners so they often had meetings.
All three couples have fallen in love but do not know how to confess to each other.
This upcoming Saturday Raghav has held a mask party and he has invited everyone.
Everyone thinks that it is a good idea to confess to each other in the party.
They didn't know that confessing in a mask party wasn't such a good idea.

Paakhi and Prem are both getting ready to go the party. Prem goes to Paakhi's room to ask her if she's ready as it is time to leave. "I'll be out in a minute" Paakhi calls out from the restroom. During that time Prem sees a pink dress on Paakhi's bed and thinks that is what she will wear.
A few moments later when Paakhi still hasn't come out, he knocks on the door and asks her when she will be ready. Paakhi gets irritated that Prem is disturbing her so she tells him to leave and she'll come with Kalpi. Prem agrees as he is desperate to see Maya.
Paakhi goes to the chawl and finds Kalpi waiting for her. "Nice dress" Kalpi said to Paakhi who was wearing a light blue dress. "Thanks" Paakhi said. "Did you get that pink dress from the mall that I wanted?" Kalpi asked Paakhi. Paakhi nodded and handed her the dress. Kalpi smiles and goes to get ready. She wants to look wonderful when she confesses to Raghav.

Party:

Prem who has already arrived at the party is looking for Maya when he bumps into Sammy. "Hey Prem" Sammy said. "Hey" Prem said with a grin. "Where is Maya?" "She's coming in a little while" Sammy said. "But where is Paakhi?" he asked Prem. "She and Kalpi are coming in a short while" Prem responded. Before Sammy could stop himself he blurted out, "What kind of dress is Paakhi wearing?" "Why are you so interested?" Prem asked with a smirk but added, "Pink dress." Sammy smiled thinking his Princess Paakhi would look pretty in it. Raghav is passing by and hears that.
Raghav is really excited as he wants to confess to Kalpi as soon as possible but she is nowhere in sight. Sammy comes up to him. "Hey Raghav" Sammy said. Raghav nods politely.
Just then two lovely ladies enter. One is in a blue dress and the other in a pink dress. Both Raghav and Sammy think that the girl in the pink dress is Paakhi. Raghav smiles thinking that the blue dress girl must be his Kalpana.
Both Sammy and Raghav went up to the girls. "May I have the pleasure of dancing with you?" they asked. The girls nodded thinking that it was their love. They are dancing to the tunes happily.
Meanwhile, Prem is looking for Maya and finally notices a girl in an orange sari. He knows that Maya loves wearing Sari's and goes up to the girl thinking that she is Maya. He offers her his hand and asks her for a dance.
All of them are so happy to be with each other that they don't even talk to each other for a while. They just dance and dance.
Finally, Prem takes the girl off to the side and starts, "I wanted to tell you something.." Meanwhile, Maya is behind him waiting to surprise him. "That I love you." The girl in the orange sari shyly runs away. Maya who was standing behind Prem gasps loudly. Prem turns around and is shocked to see Maya. "Maya tum yahaan?" he asked.
Maya is really hurt and runs away from there tearfully.
On the other side, Sammy has taken Kalpana to a side thinking that she is Paakhi. "I wanted to say.." he started. "I love you." Then he took off his mask to reveal his face to Paakhi. Kalpana's eyes widen when she sees Sammy. Sammy sir liked her? How was that possible? Paakhi who was standing right behind Sammy got the wrong idea. Sammy already loved Kalpi? Kalpana takes off her mask angrily. "Sammy sir..?" Kalpi asked. Sammy is shocked. This was Kalpi? "Congratulations Sammy" Paakhi said from behind obviously hurt. Sammy turns around to see Paakhi standing there in tears. Before he could say anything Paakhi puts her mask back on to hide her tears and runs away. Sammy turns to Kalpi. "Kalpi.." "Sir, how can you love me?" Kalpi asked Sammy. "K-" "Sir, don't you realize Paakhi loves you?" Kalpi went on. "Listen Kalpi!" Sammy said. "I thought you were Paakhi." "What?" Kalpi asks. Sammy nods. Kalpi lets out a sigh of relief. Thank God. "Thank god, Sammy Sir, magar ab aap Paakhi se kya kahenge?" she asked. "I'll explain everything to her" Sammy said. Kalpana nods and watches Sammy disappear into the crowd. She looks around excitedly for Raghav.
Paakhi is tearfully running towards the entrance when Raghav pulls her aside thinking that she is Kalpana. Kalpi who sees Raghav comes near him. "I love you" Raghav said to Paakhi. Paakhi's eyes widened. How could Raghav Sir love her? She loved Sammy! Paakhi is just shocked but behind Raghav, Kalpi is really hurt. Paakhi takes off her mask and shakes her head. Raghav is surprised to see Paakhi. "Sir..really?" Paakhi asks. "First Sammy sir confesses to Kalpi and now you confess to me? Have you guys gone mad! Kalpi loves you so you should be confessing to her! And I love Sammy so he should have confessed to me! But no, you love me?! And Sammy loves Kalpana?!" Paakhi shakes her head frustratedly. "I'm leaving!"She walks past Raghav and is out the door in moments. "Sir?" Kalpi asks Raghav. Raghav turns around to find Kalpi. Kalpi thought Raghav loved Paakhi. "Kalpi.." Raghav started. Kalpi held up a hand. "Enough, sir." Kalpi follows Paakhi out the door.

Basically Maya, Paakhi, and Kalpana are really angry. Kalpi thought Raghav loved Paakhi. Paakhi thought Sammy loved Kalpi. Maya thought Prem loved another girl.
How sad...
How will Prem, Raghav, and Sammy clear this confusion?
This mask party had been a disaster!!!

I am done with the first part guys. I hope it wasn't too confusing. Only if you guys wish for me to continue will I continue...
Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Confusion hi confusion hai boss!!! Awesome start!!!
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Good one confusion hi confusion it will be fun😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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confusion hi confusion😆😆
wow dear .awsume update
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Confusion pe confusion 😆 Awesome please update soon! :)
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oh god this is really funny ff, loved the beginning
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very apt title! 😉
its full of confusion but i loved it!
eager to know how they'll sort out this huge misunderstanding now.
so, update soon now and you better continue this...koz i'm hooked!
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So much of confussion but loved it
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Tis is Confusion Ka Mahasangam. Awesum start. Very comical and interesting. Update soon..
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Awesome start
Plz plz continue soon

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