Mein sirf tumhe protect karna chahta hoon Part 10 updated pg 18(sep 2) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: alfiya_12

No I loved it😊pls continue the story...I guess evryone R still seein the precap yar so when they finish tat theyl surely comment😆


Thx dear! What was ur fav part?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey, i really love it!!!
It's something new and I love the brother-sister love!!!!
Avni must be really lucky to have a brother like raghav!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: baljodhdhanesar

Hey, i really love it!!!

It's something new and I love the brother-sister love!!!!
Avni must be really lucky to have a brother like raghav!


Thx dear! She really is!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
really a nyc story begning...
waiting for the next parts...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
such a lovely story... reminds me of my brother. continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
I like the concept
Awesome start
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Its awesum...
Plzzz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SS part 2:

~Next morning
Avni woke up in her bedroom on her bed. She wondered as to how she got here. Avni quickly got up and took a shower. She then put on her pink lace top and her pink jeans shorts. She put her hair up in a high and curly ponytail. She topped it off with a big hair bow headband. For her makeup she put on some baby pink blush and glitter pink eyeshadow, black eyeliner and mascara, she finished it off with her pink lipgloss. Avni then went downstairs and saw that raghav and Sammy had already prepared her breakfast and were sitting at the dining table.
Raghav: Good morning Avni.
Avni: Good morning bhai.
Sammy: Good morning Avni.
Avni: Good morning bhaiya!
Raghav: aao nashtha karlo
Avni: ji.
Avni went and sat next to Sammy. Sammy smiled and kissed the top of her head. Raghav, avni, and Sammy finished eating.
Avni: bhai, mein bahar jao?
Raghav: jao.
Avni: bye bhai! Bye bhaiya!
Raghav and Sammy: bye.
Avni went outside and rode her bike for an hour. In the meantime raghav got a call from Avni's school.
Raghav: hello?
Principal: hello? May I speak to Mr. Singhania?
Raghav: this is he. May I know who this is?
Principal: I'm the principal from lakebreed middle school. I called to speak about avni's math grade.
Raghav: yes?
Principal: Mr. Singhania, your sister was doing okay in the beginning of the year but then she gave up. As of now her grade in algebra is a D+.
Raghav got mad.
Raghav: yes, I will try to work with her sometime.
Principal: Ok Mr. Singhania. Bye.
Raghav: bye.
Raghav was furious as of now. He headed up to Avni's bedroom. Avni was talking on the phone.
Avni: You're coming right? What time?
Person: I will be there in 5 minutes.
Raghav came up to her room and stood outside her door leaning on the door frame.
Avni: Okay. See you then! Bye!
Person: bye.
Avni: bhai? Kya hua? Kuch chaiyhe aapko?
Raghav came in and took Avni's wrist and took her downstairs. Sammy was also down there. Raghav had already told Sammy about Avni's grade.
Avni: kya hua? Aap dono mujhe aisa kyun dekh rahe hai?
Raghav: avni, tumhare principal ka phone aya tha.
Avni: kya kaha unho ne?
Raghav: tum algebra ko fail kar rahi ho?
Avni got really scared and started to walk back but Sammy got up and caught her from the back, not allowing her to move.
Raghav: bolo!
Avni: b-b-bhai...
Raghav: Kya bhai bhai kar rahi ho! Jawaab do!
Avni: ji.
Raghav: tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi?
The same person who avni was talking to came in the house.
Person: avni? Anyone here? Hello?
Avni: kyunki aap mujhe kabhi explain nahi karne dethe! Har bar aap sirf mujhe daat the hai. Kabhi meri baath nahi sunthe.
Raghav: Avni!!
Raghav slapped her and then realized he hadn't slapped her, a girl came in between them.
It was kalpana.
Kalpana: aap ko avni pe haath nahi utha na chayie.
Raghav: who the hell are you?
Kalpana: I'm kalpana. Avni hired me to tutor her in algebra.
Avni: bhai. Mein aapko Itni der se yahi explain karne ki koshish kar rahi thi!
Raghav's face looks confused. He is continuously staring at kalpana.

Raghav's POV: how can one girl be so beautiful? So innocent? So different?

Sorry for updating after so long! And sorry for the short update! Don't forget to like and leave comments! Hope you guys enjoyed...thanks!

Preview: raghav is holding Kalpana
Kalpana had her eyes closed tightly.
Edited by Ragnaislife - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Omg!! Kalpana's here.
I wonder what'll happen next!
Great job and continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Omg!! Kalpana's here.
I wonder what'll happen next!
Great job and continue soon! 😊

Thx! I will soon!

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