Mein sirf tumhe protect karna chahta hoon Part 10 updated pg 18(sep 2) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Pookhi

You should continue. I love your character sketch.😃


Thx sweetheart!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: meenu7

do continue...:)))))))))) smthng without ragna..let us c ..sounds interestng n different


Thx but In this story there is no RagNa...yet but soon will and they'll have SIZZLING CHEMISTRY.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
wow it's interesting..plz continue..hope wo gusse mein aake kalpi ko bhi thappar na mare..!! continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
go ahead
waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
you did not disappoint anybody dear and ya the character sketch is awesome😛 continue it dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Interesting, hope Kalpi is Avni's friend, pls continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
reall new concept...😉
seems intresting...
waiting to c what happens next...😳
cont. soon ...n pm me also😛
but pls introduce kalpi in the story soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

A young girl sits in a room with many art masterpieces all around. She is painting a picture of two men and a young girl in between, laughing and giggling. It is raghav, Sammy, and avni. Her eyes, just the most gorgeous shade of hazel with the most beautifully done eye makeup.
Raghav comes in and sees his baby sister painting. Avni stops painting and looks up at raghav. Raghav goes close to avni and kisses her hands and says "Agar tu na hoti tho hum kaise jiithe?" Avni hugs raghav.
Avni: bhai! Aaisa mat kahein!
Raghav: mera baccha! Aau khana kalo.
Avni: ji bhai. Mein clean up karloon bhai?
Raghav: tikhe baccha. Jaldi aao.
Avni: ji bhai.
Raghav goes to set the table. Avni washes up and comes to the dinner table. Raghav and avni sit down. Raghav feeds avni. Sammy comes with revdi in his hand and puts it in front of avni's eyes.
Avni: Revdi! Do! Do nah please!
Avni repeatedly tries to get it from Sammy but Sammy is putting his hand behind his back and up high in the air. Raghav is watching all this with a smile.
Sammy: no! Itni badi ho gayi hai revdi kayi ga?
Avni: haan kahoon gi! Doh na bhaiya! Please!
Sammy finally gives up at seeing avni's pouty face. He gives avni the revdis and avni hugs him and says "thank you bhaiya!" Sammy hugs her back saying "hey! Kahna kahne kein baad sirf!"
Avni: kya bhaiya!
Raghav snatches the revdis from her hands.
Avni: aap bohut bure ho bhai! Mein aap sein nahi baat karoon gi!
Raghav: acha baba! Sorry! Chalo ab khana kaon.
Avni for some reason was very angry and threw all the food off the table. Raghav got mad and slapped avni very hard. Avni fell on the floor and her elbow was bleeding. Raghav and Sammy were looking at avni on the floor crying. Sammy helped avni up and avni looked at raghav while still crying. Raghav felt a little bad for slapping her so hard. Sammy took avni to her room and got the first aid kit. Sammy bandaged avni's wound and kissed it.
Avni: bhaiya! Bhai nein bohut kas kein mara!
Sammy: I know baccha. Lekin jo tum nein kiya woh bhi sahi nahi. Khane ko aaise nahi pekhte.
Avni hugs Sammy and says "I'm very sorry bhaiya! I'm really very sorry!
Sammy gently strokes avni's back and says "sorry mujhe nahi apne raghav bhai ko kaho."
Avni: you're right bhaiya. Mujhe raghav bhai sein maafi maang lena chaiya.
Raghav is sitting on the couch thinking of how he slapped avni.
Avni comes to where raghav was sitting and sat down next to him. She did not know how to start her apology. But just then raghav put his arms around avni and made her rest her head on his chest and stroked avni's hair gently. Avni was feeling a little cold so raghav put a blanket on her that was on the couch. Avni felt secure in her brother's arms. Raghav had raised her since she was a baby. Their parents had died when raghav was 15 and avni was 1 year old.
Avni: bhai. I'm very sorry...mein-
Raghav: shhh! Chup ho ja.
Avni fell asleep in raghav's arms. And raghav also fell asleep holding avni.

Phew! Done! How was it? Never have written something so pure! The relationship between a brother and sister is a very pure relationship and that is what I want to express. Don't forget to like and leave comments.
Edited by Ragnaislife - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Why no one commenting? U guys hate it! Don't u?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

No I loved it😊pls continue the story...I guess evryone R still seein the precap yar so when they finish tat theyl surely comment😆

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