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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

very intriguing update...well written..please do continue soon...😊

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

I was waiting for the climax of this whole abduction scenario to play out first before commenting😆...sorry for that but u know my anxiety regarding Ragna and Naksh so don't mind pls.All in all,Wonderfully orchestrated abduction by Naksh n seeing a brave Kalpi in face of danger and smart n attentive Raghav in the face of misery is good...was lacking this in the show as u well know...I can understand Naksh's obsession for Kalpi but I think u should explain his behaviour for it to be so obsessive regarding her a bit more...that is if u have not done so already in the upcoming parts...I know u r nothing but thorough in ur updates but just a bit of suggestion.Sad to see Sammy took the blow this time...hope he's fine...so looks like another love story in the beginning,hmm...great...esp since Pakhi has realised her wrongs n now repenting...love to see their interaction more...As for u Vidya...well have to repeat old words as I didn't get time to comb dictionary for new ones😆...pls make do with them...Wonderful...fantastic... awesome updates...beautiful portrayal of various emotions...powerful display of both Obsession and Possessiveness...and above all Concern and LOVE.Totally Loved it!!!👏👏👏

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

terrific update!!! loved every bit of it. but dear Sammy...wish eh recovers soon.😭

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IronThor

@IronThor

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

Originally posted by: Treasures
Wonderful update! So this is the begging of Sakhi! So sweet!

Thanks Treasures. 😊

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IronThor

@IronThor

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: drdee142
Awesome update. Glad both are safe.
So Sammy saves Pakhi, will this be the beginning of a new love story 😆

Please do update soon

Thanks Dee! Will update soon!

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IronThor

@IronThor

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

Originally posted by: Mihika
marvellous fantastic update dear...loved each and every bit of it...great job👏👏

Thanks Mihika!

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IronThor

@IronThor

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very intriguing update...well written..please do continue soon...😊

Thanks Mystic!

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#898

U wrote the action sequence beautifully..just loved it..

Sammy hurt..😭😭

Continue soon..

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IronThor

@IronThor

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#899

Originally posted by: esha143
I was waiting for the climax of this whole abduction scenario to play out first before commenting😆...sorry for that but u know my anxiety regarding Ragna and Naksh so don't mind pls.All in all,Wonderfully orchestrated abduction by Naksh n seeing a brave Kalpi in face of danger and smart n attentive Raghav in the face of misery is good...was lacking this in the show as u well know...I can understand Naksh's obsession for Kalpi but I think u should explain his behaviour for it to be so obsessive regarding her a bit more...that is if u have not done so already in the upcoming parts...I know u r nothing but thorough in ur updates but just a bit of suggestion.Sad to see Sammy took the blow this time...hope he's fine...so looks like another love story in the beginning,hmm...great...esp since Pakhi has realised her wrongs n now repenting...love to see their interaction more...As for u Vidya...well have to repeat old words as I didn't get time to comb dictionary for new ones😆...pls make do with them...Wonderful...fantastic... awesome updates...beautiful portrayal of various emotions...powerful display of both Obsession and Possessiveness...and above all Concern and LOVE.Totally Loved it!!!👏👏👏

Thanks Esha. 😊And actually the reason for Naksh's behaviour was pointed out in a few chaps. You get an idea of his intention in the chap when he presented Kalpi the cake and told her she was one if the rare persons he ever met who truly deserved happiness. Then in the chap where he told Kalpi about his accident and at the sane time Raghav found out about the accident from Naksh's dad. I remember saying this was an important update because not only did it show that he was working for Sahil but it established the reason for his attractiveness to Kalpi and a huge factor for it was the accident. His father mentioned to Raghav that after the accident Naksh became more passionate about getting what he likes which is why they allowed him to go into advertising.

Now keeping that in mind we move on in the story. We knew Naksh liked Kalpi from day one. He also witnessed Raghav's anger to Kalpi. His other big revelation came in the chap where he attacked Raghav and eventually kidnapped Kalpi. He actually told Raghav then when he saw Kalpi he could not take her eyes off her but after seeing that she was with Raghav he convinced himself she wasn't for him. But what changed his view? When he saw Raghav emotionally hurt her. Why? Because to him, Kalpi deserved happiness and since he liked her from the beginning he thought he was now deserving of her to give her that happiness since in his eyes Raghav failed. And the underlying factor for why he would react so intensely? It's like his father said. After the accident he became more passionate. He had to get what he likes.

It was a bit of a mental problem which Raghav suspected he had. That is why he made Sammy do the back ground check ( which unfortunately did not show anything) and also questioned Naksh about his accident which Naksh said had no adverse effect on him other than the headaches for which he took painkillers for.

So his behaviour was not explained directly in one chap but the clues were laid down in the different chaps so it was just to connect the dots. 😉

Edited by Asgard_Nim - 11 years ago