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RagNa SS || My Heart Beats only for You || Part 2 updated on pg 5 - Page 2

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Soni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Yeah sumeshni gonna update soon... 😃

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 11 years ago

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finally somewhere in prem

amazing cs

continue soon

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ektamaddan42

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Posted: 11 years ago

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beautiful cs
do continue soon
nd do send pm also...

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mehfooza

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Posted: 11 years ago

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u made neetu to die in car accident🤣

continue soon dear

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Mehr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Jaan, you are writing an SS!!!!

i'm so happy that you are writing!!!! i so love your work! you must count me as your no1 fan! 😃

this SS sounds very promising! 😃

the character sketches are awesome! 👏

Prem and raghav...hmmm! 😉

i'm waiting dear, you please PM me when you update the 1st part. 😊 😊 😊

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome CS
Hmm... Possessive prem
Waiting to see how RagNa reunite

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Mihika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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AWESOME CHARACTER SKETCH.. 👏👏 BUT PREM KO GREY SHADED😲😲😭

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Soni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sorry for less RagNa.. Their love story yet to start😃

Part 1...

****** Sangeet Ceremony Of Kalpi & Pakhi's wedding ******

At Jadhav Residence :

Kamala - Arre bhau aap sab ye kya kar rhe ho..aur kitni der lagegi sajawat karneme..jaldi jaldi haath chalao mehmaan aaneka samay ho rha hai..

Vitthal : Kamala kabse tuze aawaj lagaye jaa rha hu.. Kaha thi tum.

Kamala : Arre vitthal yahi hu mai..ye sab log kaise kaam kar rhe hai dekh rhi thi.

Vitthal : Let this leave here & just see our girls r ready or not..?? The guest will start arrive soon.

Kamala : Haa vitthal, i'll go & check it.. Plz u stay here & see the management.

Vitthal nods his head & kamala leaves frm there to Kalpi & Pakhi's room.

In Kalpi/Pakhi's Room :
Kalpi : Pakhi wht r u doing timepass yar.plz get ready soon..u know naa baba doesn't like to get late for any ceremoneies.. See i'm all ready..😳

Pakhi : Kya kalpi u r too much haa.. See i'm almost ready.. Btw kalpi tell me 1thing why r u going so impatient haa 😉 bhai(prem) thodehi naa kahi bhagke jaane wale hai 😆

Kalpi : Grrr... Pakhi tu fir shuru ho gai..

Just then kamala enters in their room

Kamala : Wht happened beta ? Why r u two quarreling like chhote bachche.. 😆 aaj tumhara sangeet hai aur tum dono ho ke shararat se baaz nhi aaoge.. 😆
While saying all this tears stands in kamala maa's eyes 😭

Pakhi : Ye kya baat hui kamala maa.. Aap khud bhi ro rhi ho aur hum donoko bhi rula rhi ho 😭 & both pakhi/kalpi hugs kamala tightly..

Kamala : Bas bas..now no rona dhona okk.. Give me a broad smile 😃 & they all 3 smile 😃

Pakhi : Achha kamala maa..tell us who is looking more beautiful I or Kalpi 😉

Kamala comes near to both & says.. U both r looking like angels.. 😳 u both r apples of my eye.. Kisiki nazar naa lage meri rajkumariyoko 😳 & then she puts kala tika on kalpi & pakhi *touchwood*

Just then Pakkya comes into their room

Pakkya : Aai ,wht r u doing here.. Ladake wale aa gaye hai niche..chal jaldi..

Kamala : Beta i'm going to greet guests.. I'll send pakkya to take both of u when ceremony will start okk..

Pakhi/Kalpi : Okiess 😃

The guests frm groom side arrives i.e Raghav, sammy(Pakhi's groom) & Raghav's mom gauri..
Raghav was looking damm hot in Purple & black colored shervani ☺️ & Sammy was looking chocolate boy in brown color's shervani 😳

At the Enterance of Jadhav Residence :

Kamala & Vitthal greets them all very lovingly 😳

All guests enters in sangeet hall & takes their seats.

Gauri : Kamala tai i'm feeling very glad to meet u aftr 10 yrs.

Kamala : Tai i missed u all so much in those 10 yrs.. Specially kalpi missed raghav baba so much..

Raghav shocks aftr hearing this 😲 & doesn't utter single word..

Just then Prem comes there & sees raghav & hand shakes wid him

Prem : How r u raghav ?

Raghav : I'm great & he gives faint smile to prem 😊 & how r u..?

Prem : How m i ooking to u bhai 😉 ekdam mast.. Now my love my kalpana gonna become mine forever 😉 ( in teasing mode to raghav )

Raghav gets hurt but says nothing to him & Congratzz him 😃

Prem : Thanxx buddy.. Btw i hv to go..u guyz carry on..& he goes frm there

At one corner raghav sits alone & was going impatient to catch kalpi's one glance.. He was restless.. He very well knows that 2marow kalpi gonna become sum1 else but still he was eager to meet her & was unable to figer out his feelings. then he goes & sits wid sammy & wid his mom & was waiting for kalpi's apperance .

Gauri : Kamala tai.. Call the girls downstairs the ceremony gonna start soon..

Kamala : Yes tai i'll call out them.

& kamala goes to pakkya

Kamala : Pakkya, go fast & take kalpi & pakhi downstairs.. All guests r waiting for them..

Pakkya : Okk aai.. & he goes to take kalpi/Pakhi..

He enters in their room...

Chalo meri maatao jaldi chalo,ladake wale aa gaye hai aur tum dono ka kab se wait kar rhe hai..

Pakhi : Pakkya, tell me naa how is sammy looking.. 😳

Pakkya ; Sammy ko kya dekhna hai usse to hamesha hi dekhta hai

To be continued...

Please feel free to criticize my work 😃 & forgive me for grammatical & typo mistakes if there r any 😛 drop ur valuable comments 😳

Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago