RagNa SS || My Heart Beats only for You || Part 2 updated on pg 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope Kalpi doesn't marry Perm! looking forward to Raghav's reaction when he sees Kalpi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
awesome start Soni! 👏

Raghav's entry with Sammy!hayy! sherwani and all! kya entry hai. and gauri is very nice.
Kamla being sentimental about her daughters going away.awww!

i can easily imagine Paakhi in her eagerness to meet and know more about Sammy! 😉


Edited by mehr05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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here am i again! 😃 😃
meri Soni wrote an SS and i'll comment only once? na!!! 😃

so, i just want to admit something: i really like Pakya a lot nowadays. seems like he's got under my skin. 😳
and i so love reading about him. 🤗

i want to smack Prem! why that unwanted remark to raghav about Kalpana being his now? he hurt my Raghav! but i know, he'll get thullus in the future! 😉
and did i say thank you for this ss? no, then, Thank you meri jaan, for this wonderful SS. 🤗
am very eager to read more and more.
update fast dear!
and always remember, mein tumhari sab se badi fan hoon, no1 position par. 😃 😃 😃

Edited by mehr05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Wowww awesome plzzz
Update next chap soon
Plzzz
Plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Sound really nice plz cum fast with part2
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Thank u so much buddies for liking my work 🤗

Next update is below 😃
Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Part 2...

Countinued...

Pakkya : Sammy ko kya dekhna hai usse to hamesha hi dekhta hu mai..as usual he is looking ur chocolate boy wid this pakhi blushes 😳
Bt aaj sammy se bhi jyada koi aur hott & dashing lag rha hai..
Pakhi : I know prem bhai must be looking hot..

Pakkya : No no..not prem... Raghav is looking hott & dashing...

Kalpi : Whttt 😲😲😲 does raghav come here..?

Pakkya : Yess my sweetheart he is here..

Wid this kalpi feels sumthing unknown feelings..she was getting literally goosebumps ☺️ but was unaware wid her feelings for raghav 😕

Kalpi & pakhi were looking stunning & gorgeous 😳 Kalpi in sky blue & purple colored combinational Ghagra [;$] & Pakhi in pink colored ghagra 😳

Both girls comes at downstairs..
The pair of raghav's eye constantly looking at kalpi widout a single blink of his eyes 😳 he looks at her frm bottom to top.. He mesmerises by her bulging eyes, & those her pink,rosy lips 😳 he gets lost in her dusky beauty.. & was unable to take his eyes off frm her.. Raghav to himself she is same as she was before 10yrs.. Same eyes, same naughty smile.. Every thing is same &
His deep beautiful thoughts broke by sammy's voice..

Sammy : Heyy raghav, whr u lost..??

Raghav : Ummm aaa 😲 no whr..😕 & raghav to himself ye kya kar rha hai raghav..she is not ur's... So Control ur self man.. & wid this he relaxes himself... 😳

Kalpi & Pakhi takes their seats.. Pakhi sits beside Sammy & Kalpi sits beside prem

Sum1's pair of eye were constantly looking at kalpi frm the corner. He was busy in adoreing kalpi's beauty & was catching her every tiny move.

The Sangeet program starts..
& the ppl frm girls side & boyz side shakes their legs on dance floor.. Sum boyz pulls sammy & prem on dance floor,both does the dance on the song dilwaale dulhaniya le jayenge.. & betwn this prem pulls kalpi on dance floor & sammy pulls pakhi & raghav & they start to do dance.. While doing dance raghav's concentration was on kalpi more than his dance 😉😆 & while doing dance kalpi loses her balance & in the fear of falling on ground she closes her eyes but the strong grip of sum1's hands catches her on time by holding her waist.. & she holds his shoulder tightly in fear 😳 she opens her eyes & sees it was raghav who held her..both looks at each other widout any disturbance & lost in each other eyes intensely 😳 for long time suddnly their intense stareing session broken by prem 😡😡

Prem : Kalpana r u all right na.. Kahi lagi to nhi

Kalpi : No prem i'm all right. Thank u raghav for saving me 😳

Raghav gives her million doller wali smile 😃 & feels very blissful 😳

The sangeet function overs & every1 goes back to their respective rooms for sleeping session 😆

In prem rooms Prem was talking on phone wid sum1 else..
Prem on phone : Don't worry mr.mehta..anyhow i'll come to meeting..this project is very precious for me & for this i devoted myself completely, at any cost i can't let this project go frm my hand & he cuts the call ..

In raghav's room he was calling to mind his & kalpi's scene ( how he caught her frm falling on ground n all ) he was twisting & tossing on his bed 😆

Here in kalpi's room she too was restless... She recalls same scene of her & raghav & while recalling she was blushing hard 😳

Raghav & Kalpi both were restless coz of their unknown feelings for each other.. Whole night they were twisting & tossing on their respective beds & like this their whole night passes.. 😳

Both were unaware from wht their destiney planned for them. 😕


To be continued...


Please feel free to Criticize my work & forgive me for grammatical,typo errors if there r any 😃 & drop ur valuable views 😃

Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Itz amazing dear...
Just loved how Ragav saved Kalpi...
Hope they realize their feelings soon...
plzz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Superb update
Plz plz continue soon
Edited by SUMESHNI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awe Soni...tujhme bhi writer ka bhoot ghus gaya...ahaaan...kya lukha hai tuney...rags is behaving so madly...surf kalpu kalpi aur kalpi...wanna see tu isne kitna mangal karati hai...itna toh bata hai boss...lovely ss meri jaan...but tera result kya asya ..bata bhi ab...

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