RAGNA FF:DAASTAAN-E-ISHQ (CHAPTER 39 TO EPILOGUE - page 88) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Plz plz continue soon
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Continue soowm. And Tantrum Kapoor LOL
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vry good updt mihi
vry well written👏
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awesome stpry.
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nice update👏...update soon😉
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THIS CHAPTER IS IN PRESENT TRACK. IT WILL SHOWCACE THE ENTRY OF PREM, PAKYA, THEIR WIVES- MAYA AND AYESHA, AND OFFCOURSE THE KAPOORS AND THE JADAVS. ENJOY READING.😛

CHAPTER 4- THE JADOORS

"CHANGES ARE BOUND TO HAPPEN. ITS UPTO US WHETHER WE ACCEPT IT OR CRY OVER IT".

Once Raghav and Sammy left for the office the ladies too went on to complete their chores. As they have to reach office for the afternoon meeting.

A car came to screeching halt under a building. A couple stepped out of the car. The lady saw her man in deep thoughts and asked "Kya soch rahe ho? Pareshaan ho kisi baat ko lekar?" When she got no reply, she shaked him from his shoulders and said "Agar phir koi nayi shararat soojhi hai na toh abhi ke abhi uss plan ko drop kar do varna...". The man looked at her and with a cute pout said "Kya maya tum bhi na...main toh bas yeh soch raha tha ki kalpi aur Pooki ko honeymoon pe kahan bhejein. Dono ke dono bilkul apne patiyon ki tarah workaholics hain. Isiliye honeymoon par toh bhejna hi padega na." Maya smiled at this and said "Bas itni si baat. Arey ghar pohoch gaye hain na toh Prem ke saath plan kar lena. Vaise agar tumhe yaad ho toh hum bhi abhi tak honeymoon par nahi gaye hain. Hum se mera matlab hai-tum, main , Prem aur Ayesha." Pakya smiled and said lovingly "Jaan ek kaam kartey hain un charon ke saath saath hum charon ki honey moon bhi plan kar lete hain..whatsay??" Maya smiled widely and excitedly nodded a yes.

In the same building one of the house had the sounds of aarti and bhajan. It was normal isn't it? But the aarti songs were coming from Neetu's house. Now is that normal? Well circumstances does change people forever and for good. Prem Kapoor was one such person. Yes, you read it right "PREM KAPOOR". Prem was standing near the Ganpati idol with his wife Ayesha beside him. While Ayesha went to distribute the prasaad among the family members Prem stood there thanking "Shukriya bhagwaan mujhe galat se sahi raastey par lane ke liye. Meri pichli saari galatiyon ko maaf karne ke liye. Pakya, Sammy aur Raghav jaise doston ke liye. Ayesha ko meri zindagi mein lane ke liye. Ab bas meri dono pyari beheno ko humesha khush rakhna. Kalpi aur Pakhi ko har dard se door rakhna." Pakya and Maya stood at the entrance of the house whose name plate had a weird name inscribed on it. "KAPOORS + JADAVS=JADOORS". They smiled at the name and entered the house. Yes, the Kapoors and Jadavs lived under the same roof. Kalpi had bought the whole building in which the Kapoors lived. The story behind this will unfold in some other chapter. Maya went into the kitchen along with Ayesha while Pakya heard each and every word of Prem. He sent a quick prayer " Bhagwaan mere doost ko har khushi dena". He went behind the idol and said "Teri iccha zaroor poori hogi baccha". A smile played on his lips and Prem opened his eyes. He very well recognized this voice and said "Tu phir se moorti ke peeche chala gaya. Chal bahar aa". Pakya came out and they both shared a brotherly hug. It was like a routine since the day Prem realised his mistakes and changed himself. Kamla was reading a magazine and Vitthal had the news paper in his hand. Neetu descended the stairs and saw them sitting in the hall. She went to Vitthal with a frown and said "Dada aapko nahi lagta hai ki humein ek picin plan karni chahiye". Vitthal looked at her and said "Hmmm.. idea toh accha hai Neetu. Kyun Kamla?". Kamla smiled at them and said " Jo bhi plan karna hai Mumbai ke bahar ka hi sochna. Picnic ho ya phir ghoomne ka plan Mumbai ke bahar hi hoga". "Haan yeh sahi hai" said Neetu. Dadi and Aaji also agreed with Kamla "Humein bhi Kamla ka idea sahi lagta hai Vitthal". Prem and Pakya came and sat with the others and asked " Kya baatein ho rahi hain?". "Picnic ki" replied Ayesha who carried a tray of tea cups to all. "Picnic wow" exclaimed an equally excited Maya. Neetu asked Ayesha to make a call at Raghav's place and tell them about the plan "Maya beta zara Raghav ke yahan phone karke Savitri tai ko bhi tayiyari kar lene ko kehe dena." Maya nodded a yes and left to make the call. While Ayesha asked Prem and Pakya to complete all their work within two days "Tum dono please apna saara kaam do din ke andar khatam kar lena. Last moment pe agar koi kaam aaya na toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga". "Yes boss (saluting)" Prem and Pakya said together. Kamla laughed at their antics.

Neetu happily said "Bohot mazaa aayega. Bacchon ki shaadi ke baad peheli baar ghoomne jaayengey. Akhri outing toh Pakhi ki birthday par hi thi. Yaad hai kaise humne sabkuch plan kiya tha. Main, Prem aur Sahil...". Just the mention of Sahil turned the whole excited atmosphere into a silent one. Prem just left the place in a huff.Ayesha became tensed but Pakya assured her that he will be fine and went behind him. Everyone knew the reason behind Prem's hatred towards Sahil. Neetu smiled thinking of old days but felt guilty for her deeds at the same time. If only she could go back and correct all the misdeeds. Kamla kept a hand of assurance on Neetu's shoulder and got flashbacks of past.

What happened to Sahil? Where is he? Why does Prem hate his own Father? How is Neetu changed? How on earth are these Jadavs and Kapoors under the same roof? Jaane ke liye aage padhna padega.😉

AND NOW DARE YOU ALL FORGET TO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS. I WILL COME AND HAUNT YOU ALL IN YOUR DREAMS.😛

Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
m the first one to comment on this chapter...
ausem FF👏...do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
first of all i lreally like the speech tht prem had said to god its really difficult for me to imagine our chochopie in tht avtar🤣but in deed its good👍🏼
jadoor serously kya naam hai🤣
aww ilove these bonding-sakhi-ragna-makya(maya+pakya)-preyha(prem+ayesha)😃

awesome updt loved it👏
plzzz cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
I am shocked that Perm has changed cannot wait for the next update
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⭐️IMPORTANT NOTE:
THE NEXT CHAPTER DEPENDS UPON THE NUMBER OF COMMENTS I GET ON THE PREVIOUS UPDATES. IF I CONTINUE GETTING THESE MANY COMMENTS I WILL STOP THIS FF RIGHT HERE. NO OFFENSE PLEASE ITS JUST MY INSECURITIES THAT IS SPEAKING. ANYWAYS TO ALL U READERS RELIEF I HAVE COMPLETED THE NEXT PART NOW IT WILL BE UPDATED OR NOT WILL BE DECIDED BY THE COMMENTS THIS FF GETS.😊

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