RAGNA FF:DAASTAAN-E-ISHQ (CHAPTER 39 TO EPILOGUE - page 88)

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AFTER GETTING UNEXPECTEDLY SO MANY COMMENTS FOR MY OS THOUGHT OF WRITING A SHORT FF . DON'T KNOW HOW IT WILL TURN OUT BUT DO GIVE IT A TRY.😛

INDEX

PROLOGUE - PAGE 1
CHARACTER SKETCH- PAGE 2
CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 3
CHAPTER 2 - PAGE 4
CHAPTER 3 - PAGE 6
CHAPTER 4 - PAGE 8
IMPORTANT NOTE- PAGE 8
CHAPTER 5 - PAGE 11
CHAPTER 6 - PAGE 13
CHAPTER 7 - PAGE 15
CHAPTER 8 - PAGE 17
CHAPTER 9 - PAGE 19
CHAPTER 10- PAGE 21
CHAPTER 11- PAGE 23
CHAPTER 12- PAGE 25
CHAPTER 13- PAGE 26
IMPORTANT NOTE- PAGE 27
CHAPTER 14 AND 15- PAGE 27
CHAPTER 16- PAGE 29
CHAPTER 17- PAGE 31
CHAPTER 18- PAGE 32
CHAPTER 19- PAGE 33
IMPORTANT NOTE- PAGE 34
CHAPTER 20- PAGE 35
CHAPTER 21- PAGE 37
CHAPTER 22- PAGE 39
CHAPTER 23- PAGE 41
CHAPTER 24- PAGE 42
CHAPTER 25- PAGE 44
CHAPTER 26- PAGE 46
CHAPTER 27- PAGE 49
CHAPTER 28- PAGE 51
CHAPTER 29- PAGE 54
IMPORTANT NOTE- PAGE 58
CHAPTER 30- PAGE 58
CHAPTER 31- PAGE 61
NEW CHARACTER SKETCH- PAGE 66
CHAPTER 32- PAGE 68
CHAPTER 33- PAGE 72
CHAPTER 34- PAGE 76
CHAPTER 35- PAGE 80
CHAPTER 36- PAGE 82
CHAPTER 37- PAGE 86
CHAPTER 38- PAGE 87
CHAPTER 39- PAGE 88
CHAPTER 40- PAGE 88
CHAPTER 41- PAGE 88
EPILOGUE - PAGE 88
PROLOGUE
A beautiful mansion is echoing with the laughter of two beautiful ladies. One is working in the kitchen preparing the tiffin as she has recently learnt some new dishes and insisted on preparing the daily tiffin. While the other sat on the lavish sofa arranging and going through the files for the afternoon meeting. A lady in her late 60's climbed down the stairs and asked "Arey aaj tum dono ko office nahi jana kya?". "Nahi nahi maa jana toh hai bas nikal hi rahe hain." said the one from the kitchen. While the other one with utmost concern and strictness asked the lady "Maa aapne dawai li?Khana pura khaya ya abhi bhi hai?Aap apna khyaal rakh payengi na?". The lady just nodded in a yes and smiled to them. She felt blessed to have them in her life.😊

Meanwhile in an office cabin two men sat completely engrossed in their laptop screens. One of them said"Yaar usne toh iss baar bhi kamal kar diya...kya presentation banayi hai". To which the other replied "She is the best iss baar bhi project humein hi milega. Par ye dono abhi tak aayi kyun nahi..." Just then the ladies entered the office...and the two men could'nt help but look at them with awe😉 indeed they were the most beautiful ladies and offcourse gorgeous wives people would only dream of..


Ok should I continue????😕

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay.. Frist to comment.. Do continue... Wanna read this new FF... Sounds interesting..
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guys plzz ask soni also to read this she wanted an ff on ragna marriage😛
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Lol mihika neki aur puch puch
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Interesting..very-very interesting! Ladies in control..ahaan..like it!
No need to ask, just post it and we'll read it!
Continue soon and PM me too!
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continue soon plzzz kalpi and raghav sammy and pookie right
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SO GUYZ HERE IS THE CHARACTER SKETCH OF MY FF.😛

CHARACTE SKETCH

RAGHAVENDRA SINGHANIA: A smart,suave,intelligent,too arrogant,handsome and a brooding buisness man of 29 years. Just has one mission in life "Destroy Kapoors". Has a best friend and a very reliable brother named Sammy. Finds his world in Kalpi and is very possesive and protective over her. Has suffered a lot due to his past but has let go of it with Kalpi beside him.Lovingly called as Raghav by all.

SAMAR RAIZADA: Fondly called as Sammy. A very smart, intelligent, handsome and cute..in short no less than Raghav. He is of same age as that of Raghav and loves Pakhi as if life depends on her. He is Raghav's best friend and brother. Lost his parents two years ago in an accident but finds a motherly figure in raghav's mother and calls her maa.

KALPANA VITTHAL JADAV: A very very down to earth, intelligent,confident, strong headed and hardworking girl. She has the personality of self-motivated go getters and can fight for what is right. She is the childhood best friend of Pakhi and sees Sammy as a brotherly figure. Loves Raghav unconditionally and deeply. Fondly called as Kalpi.

PAKHI KAPOOR: Childhood bestie of Kalpi. She is very honest and a sweetheart. Belongs to a rich family and thus gets whatever she wants. Initially loved Raghavbut after various critical situations and tragedies, realises that Sammy is the one for her and not Raghav. Loves Kalpi a lot but tries to hurt her (failed each time) to get Raghav in the begining, realises her mistake pretty soon. Fondly called Pooki.

PRAKASH VITTHAL JADAV: Elder brother of Kalpi. Had a soft corner for Pakhi but later finds himself fallen for Maya and marries her. Lovingly known as Pakya.

PREM KAPOOR: A sweet and charming fellow. Elder brother of Pakhi and loves her a lot. Initially had grey shades but after knowing his parent's dirty deeds becomes positive and takes the stand for right. Deeply in love with Ayesha.

MAYA KULKARNI: Raghav and Sammy's friend. She is 4 years junior to them. Love interest of Pakya. She is an exact shadow of her mother-in-law Kamla.

AYESHA SRIVASTAVA: She is the daughter of Prem's office peon. Well educated and started working for Prem as his assistant. She enters Prem's life as a tornado and turns it upside down. Falls for this spoilt brat of kapoors and changes him for good. Her entry will take some time.

KAMLA AND VITTHAL JADAV: Kalpi and Pakya's parents and Kamla is pakhi's milk mother. Both share a deep bond which sometimes makes Kalpi feel neglected and infuriates Vitthal.

NEETU AND SAHIL KAPOOR: Pakhi and Prem's parents. They are the main antagonists of this story. Ayesha's entry in their lives comes as a shock to both of them. They do realise their mistakes but too late.

SAVITRI SINGHANIA: Wife of late Mr.Harivansh Singhania. She is Raghav's mother and Sammy's aunt. Considers them to be her life. Her entry will also take some time.

PRIYESH KAPOOR : Prem and Ayesha's adopted four year old son. Loves his parents a lot. His entry brings new hope and shine to everyone's life.

PIYUSH JADAV : Pakya and Maya's 4 year old son. Best buddy of Priyesh and both of them never leave each other's side. His entry starts starts uniting the three families.

AASMA JADAV : 2 year old daughter of Maya and Pakya. Life of her brothers. Changes the negative characters to complete positive ones with her innocent and pure smile.

These three together removes all worries and fears from everyone's mind with their innocence.


Aaji and Daadi are same as in the show.

HOW IS IT??😕😕
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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SO HERE IS THE FIRST CHAPTER OF MY FF..ENJOY😛AND DO LEAVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS😛

CHAPTER 1- FAMILY

"LOVE MAKES A PERSON STRONG ENOUGH TO WITHSTAND EACH AND EVERY DIFFICULTY OF LIFE. WE JUST NEED TO WAIT FOR THAT LOVE TO HAPPEN AND REALISE IT"😊

It's morning and the rays hit their faces making them glow. A lady slowly opened her eyes and saw the most beautiful sight infront of her eyes. "Her husband- RAGHAV SINGHANIA". While Raghav being Raghav pulled her more closer to him and whispered "I LOVE YOU KALPI" on her ears which made Kalpi blush really hard. While the room downstairs had a different view. A man was constantly staring at his sleeping beauty while she rested head on his chest and slept peacefully. He did not want to wake her up and smiled thinking that she looks so innocent but he had to wake her up since its morning. He slightly ruffled her hair and kissed her cheeks saying "Good morning PAKHI, come on now get up jaan. " But she made herself more comfortable on his chest and was in no mood to get up. She snuggled more tightly and said "Bas thodi der aur SAMMY..."(with a cute pout). Sammy smile at her innocent gesture. Well it was a daily routine for both the couples since the day they got married. After sometime all were up and were busy in their work. Both Kalpi and Pakhi prepared the breakfast while the men came and sat at their respective places. A Lady came out from her room and saw the four smiling and chatting with each other. She sent a quick prayer asking god to keep her children always happy and together. Suddenly Kalpi said "Maa aap wahan kyun khadi hain aayiye nashta kar lijiye phir dawai bhi toh leni hai na". She is Savitri Singhania. She could'nt help but only smile at Kalpi's dominating nature while Pakhi pulled the chair for her. No doubt she was blessed to have these two girls as her daughter in law. As they all sat for the breakfast Kalpi noticed tears in Savitri's eyes and asked all worried "Kya hua maa, aap ro kyun rahi hain?" All eyes turned towards her. Savitri just looked at them and said with a smile "Tum logon ki shaadi ko teen mahine ho gaye. Aur kitna kuch badal gaya na". All started thinking about their lives three months before while Pakhi looked at Kalpi thinking about her deeds which could have destroyed four lives (Raghav, Kalpi, Pakhi and Sammy).. and had tears in eyes.

And now the actual story after Raghav returns from America. What happened after he returned? What did Pakhi do that could have destroyed their lives?And the biggest question how did these four get married?Where is Prem and the others? Janne ke liye aage padhna padega..😉😆
TELL ME HOW WAS IT. I AM READY TO CATCH ALL YOUR JOOTAS AND CHAPPALS..EVEN TOMATOES AND EGGS ARE WELCOMED BUT MAKE SURE THEY ARE NOT ROTTEN ..YOU KNOW I CAN MAKE USE OF THEM😆😆
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Awesum start Mihika.. Do continue soon.. Wanna know wht happened..
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awesome, looking forward to the next part

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