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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 40 - THE SHOCK

"EVERY ACTION HAS AN EQUAL AND OPPOSITE REACTION. TRUE ISN'T IT?"

Prem entered the house with Ayesha as his bride which gave the biggest heartattack to Neetu and Sahil. Neetu as usual started showing her tantrums while Sahil was too shocked to react. Here Pakhi was having a hard time controlling her laughter but given the intensity of the situation she started her acting as per the plan "Bhaiya aapne shaadi kar li? Yeh kya aapne humme se kisi ko bataya bhi nahi." Prem held Ayesha's hand and said "Mai Ayesha se pyaar karta hoon. Ayesha ek peon ki beti hai yeh jaankar aap log iss rishtey ke liye nahi maantey isiliye humne aapko bina bataye hi shaadi kar li." He turned to daadi,took her blessings and straight went to his room with Ayesha. Pakhi followed both of them into their room and said "Vaise abhi toh raat nahi hui hai toh kya mai andar aa sakti hoon?" Ayesha blushed while she continued to tease Prem. Later on Prem started chasing her when Sammy called her. now it was her turn to get teased. Ayesha stopped both of them and said "Bas ab humein humare asli kaam pe dhyaan dena chahiye." They called up Kalpi and asked her to gather everyone in Raghav's office. As that is the only place where no one would suspect us.

Here Mohan and the girls collected enough proofs to get their plan into action and waited for Kalpi's call. Later that evening all of them met at Singhania constructions and decided to get their plan into action. Kalpi was busy making a backup plan incase the first one goes flop. Next day they all started executing their plan. One week later they got to know that PP and Sahil were going make a deal out of a small one year old girl next month. The only girl that came to Prem's mind was Asmaa and also his brothers. Hence Prem and Ayesha decided that they would adopt Asmaa and Piyush while Maya and Pakya decided that they would adopt Priyesh. As per plan Raghav, Kalpi and Sammy took over each and every dear and by the time Sahil was to make the deal out of Asmaa Raghav had taken over whole of Kapoor empires. In all these Neetu was nowhere to be found. On further investigation it was found that Neetu was not involved with all these rather she too loved the kids of that orphanage. Prem went and told her everything about Sahil Kapoor. On learning her husband's true colours she was shocked and broken. She understood what she had done to Kamla and Kalpi all these years. It became a turning point in Neetu's life. Daadi and Kamla consoled her while Vitthal gave her the support of a brother. Kalpi with her talents and skills took over Kapoor's property and now the kapoors were on roads. That is when Pakya and Prem suggested that they would all live under the same roof and would be known as Jadoors.

Finally the day arrived. Everything was set. Police was informed, traps were laid, cameras were placed and tracks were also kept. As informed Sahil and PP came there and met some people. They handed over a baby girl to those unknown men and were ready to leave with the money but were caught red handed with all the proofs. They tried their best to convince the police when Raghav came out from hiding. Sahil now thought of playng his trump card and said "Tum mujhe toh police ke hawaale kar doge Raghav par kya tumhe tumhari maa nahi chahiye. Agar tumne mujhe nahi chudvaya toh tumhe yeh kabhi pata nahi chalega ki tumhari mom kaha hai." Raghav was shocked to hear about his mother after so many years. But still he asked the police to take him away. Sahil was again about to say something when his eyes fell on Gouri coming along with Kalpi and Pakhi. He was too shocked to say anything. That is when he heard Neetu's voice from behind "Kya soch rahe ho Sahil? Maine bataya hai inhe Gouri ke bare mein. Aaj tak tumne job hi galat kaam kiye maine usmein tumhara saath diya. Magar ab nahi tum apne fayed eke liye anaath ashram ke bacchon ko bech rahe ho. Neki ki aad mein gairkanooni kaam kar rahe ho. Tumne Raghav ke pita ko maar kar pehele hi apne aur pure parivaar ke upar khooni ka daag laga diya hai aura b bacchon ki taskari..chi chi." Sahil saw that everyone's attention was on Neetu and the kids. He took it as an opportunity and tried escaping from the place. PP also tried following him but was caught by the Rohini and Kavitha. The Police fired on Sahil to make him stop but the bullet straight went and hit him just below his chest which made him fall head over heels and his hear got hit on a big rock. He was immediately taken to the hospital where the doctors declared him to be in coma. He could see everything, hear everything, feel everything but could no longer respond to anything. While PP was taken to jail and according to court's verdict she had to serve an imprisonment of lifetime.

After all these fiasco Pakya and Prem went to orphanage and went along with all the procedures for adoption and brought the three kids home. Neetu at once got busy with the kids and thus loved them with all her might. Two months later Raghav and Sammy were sitting at the mandap waiting for Kalpi and Pakhi respectively. They got married with all the rituals and with everyone's blessings. Everyone forgave Sahil except Kalpi who found it very difficult to even look at him after whatever he had done. Everyone understood her feelings and so no one till date forced her to change her mind regarding Sahil Kapoor.

Rohini, Kavitha, Deepu and Saru congratulated Mohan for his daughter's wedding as well as on becoming a grandfather to Ayesha, Priyesh and Piyush. All the four girls were now best friends and almost worked on each and every case together.


PHEW FLASHBACKS OVER AND NOW THE ENDING CHAPTER.

Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Di... All r +ve here... very nice...😉
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THIS IS GOING TO BE THE LAST CHAPTER EVERYONE . OFFCOURSE I WOULD GIVE AN EPILOGUE TOO. AND AS I SAID THIS IS NOT A FLASHBACK CHAPTER.

CHAPTER 41: END OF ALL

"FORGIVE AND FORGET. THOUGH EASY TO PRONONUCE BUT TOUGH TO BRING INTO PRACTICE."

Raghav went to Kalpi's cabin while Sammy and Pakhi waited out side. Kalpi turned back and said "Accha hua jot um aa gaye Raghav. Humein Bahar jana hai. Aur haan tum dono bhi humare saath aa rahe ho." All the four left the office building and went to where Kalpi wanted to take them. On reaching the place Pakhi asked "Kalpi yeh to City Hospital hai. Tu humein leke yahan kyun aayi hai?" without turning Kalpi said "Chalo mere saath pata chal jayega." They all followed Kalpi and reached Sahil's ward. On entering the wasrd they saw whole of their family present there. Everyone was looking Kalpi with the same expression "What is the matter?" Kalpi looked at them and said "Aap sab yehi soch rahe hain na ki maine aap sabko yahan kyun bulaya hai. Aaj maine purani saari baton ko peeche chodne ka faisla kar liya hai." Neetu smiled and said "Lekin Kalpi, beta tu pehele hi aage bad chuki hai." Kalpi turned to her and said "Nahi aunty agey toh ab badhungi. Sahil uncle ko maaf karke." Everyone widened their eyes and looked at her. they knew she was telling the truth that she was going to forgive Sahil Kapoor.

Kalpi went near Sahil Kapoor and said "Aapne bohot se galat kaam kiye hain uncle. Jo hua hum mein se koi usey badal nahi sakta aur zindagi itni lambi nahi ki mai aapse martey dam tak nafrat kar saku. Iisiliye aaj mai sabke saamne aapko maaf karti hoon." As soon as she said that Pakya noticed some movement in Sahil's fingers. He told the same to prem and others. Atonce Vitthal rushed to call the doctor. On examining the doctor said "Yeh toh chamatkaar ho gaya. Mr. Kapoor coma se bahar aa chuke hain. Ab unhe koi khatra nahi hai." Everyone smiled while Kamla and Prem went and distributed sweets to all the people present in the hospital.

Two days passed since Sahil returned home which was actually a home now. Asmaa as usual kept everyone lightened up with her innocent talks while Priyesh and Piyush were busy planning new ways to trouble Manda along with Neetu in their team. (Yes Manda ..she is still the same..LOL sorry I couldn't change her...she is very cute the way she is.). The family trip plannings were in full swing and everyone was busy doing their share of task. Like Maya and Ayesha were incharge of the food depo..no one dared to give the responsibility to Pakhi even though she insisted (pata hai na kyun. Arey she is all new to cooking...hehehehe) Prem and Pakya had to get entertainment materials ready. Kalpi and Pakhi took charge of the kids while Raghav and Sammy took care of the means of transport. Vitthal and Sahil were to be guard dogs of the luggages while Neetu and Kamla had to check all the arrangements were done properly or not. The grandmothers that is aaji and dadi had just one work that is to sit and chat..

PHEW CHAPTER OVER. EPILOGUE TIME.

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EPILOGUE

They all reached Ooty safely and now began settling everything in the farmhouse. It was evening time when all the kids were busy playing and the elders were playing antaakshari. Kalpi was coming with tea for everyone when she started feeling dizzy and fell down. But before she could hit the floor a strong pair of arms grabbed her and prevented her from falling. Raghav was keeping an eye on Kalpi like a majnu when he noticed that she was feeling dizzy and was about to fall. He atonce ran upto her and caught her. Everyone's attention turned to Kalpi and they rushed her inside the house. Prem called the doctor. After doing few check ups he got up and said "Congratulations Mr. Singhania aapki wife pregnant hai." The room filled with joy and Raghav went and hugged Kalpi tightly.

Priyesh went to Raghav and asked "Fufa fufa, bua ko kya hua.. meri girlfriend theek hai na." Raghav picked him and said "Tumhari girlfriend bilkul theek hai. tum logo ke liye ek choti si behen ya bhai laane waali hai." He jumped up and down and ran to Piyush to tell him the news. All congratulated each other and celebrated the evening by dancing and singing.

Two years later. Kalpi and Raghav carried two baby boys looking at each other helplessly. Sammy was pacing up and down like a mad guy while a strong voice came from the hospital delivery room "Samar Raizada. Iwill kill you. Tumhari vajah se ho raha hai yeh sab." While the elders laughed Kalpi and Raghav blushed hard and Sammy was embarrassed to the core. Exactly one year before Kalpi uttered the same line while delivering Ahaan and Ayaan. Just then the wailing of a child filled the corridors and the nurse came out and said "Congratulations Mr. Raizada it's a baby girl." They all went inside the room and saw the mother and daughter ling on the bed. Pakhi asked Kalpi to keep a name for her daughter. Just when Kalpi was about to name her all the kids together uttered a name " Mishika." The baby giggled on hearing the name and thus she was named Mishika Raizada. Everyone smiled because Ayaan and Ahaan also recieved their names from their sibblings only. Evening they all had a party for the new member where a photographer wanted to take a family photo for which ever gave the funniest poses. At last they all posed for a proper family photograph.

"CHANGES COME IN EVERYONE'S LIFE, BEAUTIES LIE IN THE UGLIEST THINGS, LOVE HAPPENS WHERE HATRED ONCE LIVED, SUCCESS COMES WHERE FAILURE HAS A VALUE, HAPPINESS FOLLOWS A SAD STORY. CHERISH EACH AND EVERY MOMENT BECAUSE LIFE IS TOO SHORT TO LIVE IN COMPLAINS."

THANK YOU EVERYONE. I MAY NOT BE PRESENT TO THANK EVERYONE INDIVIDUALLY SO I THANK ALL OF YOU TOGETHER HERE ITSELF.😛


GUD BYE EVERYONE SEE YOU ALL AFTER I RETURN IN DECEMBER. TILL THEN ENJOY AND HAVE FUN. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all congos dear for completng d ff successfullyyy..👍🏼
Nw who ll be ready to watch my dance..??😛😒
Nyways U gave ur ff a perfect n a simple ending which I lykd it..😃
And wat last mein u tried putting ur name to dat bechari girl and then u changed it hehhehe..🤣
and thnk u so much fr entertaining us by ur updates dear..🤣

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🤗 Congrats Mihika for this beautiful FF and completing it. 😃👏 I loved everything, especially positive ending. 😃👏 I'll re-read this FF again, as I'll miss your writings! 😭 Have a nice stay in Dehradun. I'll miss you and your writings! 😭 Please try to stay in touch through twitter and fb. 🤗❤️
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@vasishna - thank you so much dear and i will always be there to watch ur dance. promise😛
@mystic - thank u dear
@chahat4u - oh sweety thank you so much for ur support .

TO ALL MY DEAR eMA FORUM MEMBERS LOVE U ALL KHOOB SARA SE BHI ZYADA🤗

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