FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 26

Originally posted by: -sevenstreaks-

I ve been waitng for d update long time..I knew someday u ll..thanks a lot for update 🤗..It was awesome asusual ⭐️..continue asap 😳

Thank u for that big hug sevenstreaks 😃

Its so nice to feel that u liked it 😳

Originally posted by: anurose

thanx for updating it..it's awsm..

Thank u for reading and liking it Anu😊

Originally posted by: niknish1980

super update... Update the next part soon

Thank u Niknisha😊

Originally posted by: hathway

Welcome back!!beautiful update.
I think this is the first FF where i have read mighty Raghav Singhaniya slapped in front of his whole staff. Loved it😉
Raghav was ready to explain, but Kalpi had overworked her brain to listen to anyone.
And i loved the most when Raghav was ready for more slaps & disgust coming from kalpi😛, since he was ready to accept with both hands whatever Kalpi would give it to him. He was mad and crazy in love with Kalpi.

Loved the update!!Thank you.

Its so nice to read that u like it Hathway

Yes Raghav is mad in love th Kalpi but he is taking her quit for granted . Like some big bro ,which is not good for a relationship to grow.

Raghav will soon realise , he has been wrong . Coz soon he will realise that Kalpi is slipping away just coz of his mightiness .

Originally posted by: abxetz

Hi Shana 🤗 I am soumya new member 😊 but iread your story and loved it your very talented writer.and thanks dear story continue karnaikeliye 😛 poor kalpi uski saath hamesha uski dosth hai na pain 😭 poor girl 😭 or vo kammo bear tho makhi keliye busy hai 😡 or vo prem 😡 errr.ab ye rags kalpi bi chahiye or revenge bi 😡 ab rags kya decision karega.really nice update shana 👏 ⭐️

Thank u for commenting Abxtz😊 and thank u for that warm hug 😳

U will son find in next update that raghav cant have both . Kalpi is going to give him hard time and Paki is going to make him mad 😆

Originally posted by: nikkiarora093

finally u r back... oh god...mujhe to laga tha ab kabhi deedaar nahi honge aapke...par nahi dekho humari kismat to chamak gayi.. i m glad u r back wid d bang... superb update dear... what a slap from kalpi to raghav.. he deserves dis...he has to choose between kalpi n his revenge...well we all now revange was his only priority ever.. but lets c what happens in dis...keep updating dear...

Ab to deedar ho gaya 😳, aur kismat to humari bhi chamk gayi aap jaisi superb reader paakar 😳

Raghav is too much , i really like teaching lesson to such people in real life who try to play almighty ,now that i have a charter as such in my FF , i am gonna make Kalpi put him straight . So just wait and watch 😆

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

all i could think after reading my own last chapter was that rags need to be slapped , so made kalpi use her woman reflexes 😉

Kalpi will go on , dont worry . Next chapter will be Raghav urn to burn , all his cynicism and smile will be furrr 😆

Yay he needs to burn!!! 😡 and love the way u think 😉 so what's the plan a new man for kalpi 😉 😆 to make rag a muffin jealous 😆

It was wonderful ...you really such a great writer ..I was a silent reader bt after reading your story I can't stop myself from giving a comment ...it is lovely ..waiting for more ...update soon .. 👏

It was just superb yaar I just loved it update next chapter soon dear plz plz plz

plez cntinue ur amazing story😃