FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 28

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Shan 😃 🤗 How I missed this story. So happy you are back and you will complete this. Though I guess from now on it will be only road through pain and more slaps, disgust and heartbreaks. 😭 But I am looking forward to see how these two eventually come together; how Raghav manages his desire for revenge and his love together; how he wins over his love again. As long as its Ragna in the end together, I don't mind.

Kalpi is so right in her place, which girl in her right mind would agree to such a demand; of meeting that person alone in his office who has supposedly just broken her. Hope everything works out but how? Big question. LOL. I really want Pakhi, Kamla and Prem to suffer also. 😳

First let me tell u I love the RagNa GIF u have in your DP. Raghav blasting Kalpi for her foolish bravery to swim in unknown waters !!!😆 That was one of our fav. scenes

Now thank u for that big hug 😛. In next chapter I am filhaal planning to make Raghav suffer first and yes Kamla and Paki dreams will get a jhatka too , so yes your demand noted down dear reader .

next chapter will accommodate it 😊

Originally posted by: premap

Superb update 1st my grateful thanks 2 you for continuing this lovely story after along break ! Kalpi should avoid Rags at all cost ! He is too egoistic and expects others to 'fall in ' with his plans. Please do not create another 'majhboor ' Rags , I do not think we the RagNa fans can ' digest it ! " Thanks again.

Thank u for commenting and encouraging me Premap

Yes I promise u No majboor Raghav in my FF😊. But yes he will be jealous and confused Raghav for sure in next chapter along with his usual player , cool and khadoos Raghav 😆

Originally posted by: Nandinisai

Awesome update

thank u Nandini😊

Rachu looks beautiful as Ajab de in your DP😛

Originally posted by: ragnabw

Finally u gave ur darshan Shana superb update Shana I am loving this kalpi the way she handled ragga I liked it

Yes I gave Darshan 😃

We all want our Kalpi to be strong , don't we , so i made her.

My FF is obviously the reflection of what we want our Kalpi and Raghav to be and how we want them to get their lessons ,in case they go wrong. I promise it will be so till the end 😊

Originally posted by: lolor

really happy reading update of this ff...

superb update

kalpi slapped rags...but he deserves it

now sammy is also angry on rags...

lots of slaps disgust. in its way...

Thank u Lolor😊

Well Raghav is taking his loved once for granted coz he thinks ,they will be their for him. But he needs to care for them or they to may take same attitude for him. That is take him for granted.

Then lets see kisko mirchi lagti hai 😆

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

Read this after awhile but connected to the story instantly

this is definitely one of my favorites

wonderful update 😃

Thank u Santhi😃

Yes will try to update ASAP.

Originally posted by: gadhaprem

It was wonderful ...you really such a great writer ..I was a silent reader bt after reading your story I can't stop myself from giving a comment ...it is lovely ..waiting for more ...update soon .. 👏

Thank U for commenting.😊

U really have chosen a funny display name😕😆. Pls tell me a name ,I call u with 😊

Originally posted by: artiodedra2007

It was just superb yaar I just loved it update next chapter soon dear plz plz plz

Thank u Arti

yes will try to update ASAP😊

Originally posted by: sunyy

Yay he needs to burn!!! 😡 and love the way u think 😉 so what's the plan a new man for kalpi 😉 😆 to make rag a muffin jealous 😆

spoiler : yes kalpi will have a new male friend like many of us wanted though after Raghav case , she won-'t be opening up so soon 😊

Originally posted by: ReezaZul

plez cntinue ur amazing story😃

will update soon Reeza

Thanks for commenting 😊