FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 25

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riaka thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting.. Plz update.. Nd plz PM me whn u update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaka

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Welcome back dear. I was waiting for this story to move ahead from ages 😆.kalpi is hurt ,betrayed and felling disgust. Kamla is so lost in the happiness of her so called daughter that she is unable to see Pain of her own daughter 😕. Now after everything happened Raghav decided to explain to kalpi and want her on his side. Is not this little too late for him.Prem is stupid jerk here.
Kalpana slapped Raghav Singhnia and that too infront of everyone 😲. Chanta lagaaa😆 hai laga.
Well he deserves it. Want to know what will kalpi do now as Raghav decided to get both revenge and his love. ...
Amazing update dear. Please continue soon 👏



Thank u Riaka
Kamla will be Kamla u know 😆

I Like beautiful Rachu in your dp😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

awesome chappy dear.. Poor Kalpi.. Nd kamla she never thing abut Kalpi.. I hate her.. Dear waiting for nxt chappy.. Plz update soon..



Thank u Bricka😳

Next chapter will take time...but yes it will be long and have Kalpi success story in it . I am just working with plot how to make it convincing


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

U r back and with a big bang 😆 loved ur update rags is playing games and poor kalpi
Is getting the brunt of it. So now what will go
Down? Looking forward to next update. 😛



all i could think after reading my own last chapter was that rags need to be slapped , so made kalpi use her woman reflexes 😉

Kalpi will go on , dont worry . Next chapter will be Raghav urn to burn , all his cynicism and smile will be furrr 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shoonya9

What a comeback update! Yes banging update! It's a whistle blowing update for the upcoming battle.

The shadow is most sharp, Nd most dark when the sun is at peak Nd the object is most dense ie at noon. And it merges with the object at tht time, rule of science, rule of life.

The Sun Of revenge Nd love is most powerful in Raghav in this moment with his act of announcing marriage with Pakhi, Nd the sun of disgust of BEING used by idol, consummed by IDOL is equally strong in object making her most dense, for if she had thought only with angle of their love she would hv given an ear of explanation to Raghav. But she Is naive for tht maturity. In her slap lied her possessiveNess, her claim for her love, her mentor, which Raghav the player has realized, Nd he is surely going to utilize it in his revenge game to burn Pakhi nd Kapoors.

Had Kalpi been more mature, revenge wouldn't have need possible with the intent now it will go. But unknowingly Raghav had given his reins in hand of kalpi, by saying explanation will be provided when Kalpi demands it, nd he is ready for more disgust, slaps etc. Unknowingly shadow has merged with the object. For it is only SOLE RIGHT of a WIFE to demand an explanation from a man. He HAS GIVEN THAT RIGHT to Kalpi, knowingly or unknowingly. Difficult Nd dangerous to execute revenge now without involvement of kalpi, for Kalpi might be less matured but much more sensible, will turn out to control the game of revenge. Hope Kalpi realize the right given to her by her love, her mentor.
So PAKHI will be his LAWFULLY WEDDED MISTRESS nd KALPI MINDFULLY WEDDED WIFE?

Shan u are a PERFECT player. The game indeed is getting interesting.



Dear Shoonya

Seeing your comments make me feel that u not only read it with heart but also put a lot of it while writing your comment 😊. They r always inspiring 😃

Marriage is not happening . So no wife mistress game in my FF as i hate such cat fights . For me marriage is no game as they play in our hindi drama. Life is more then just marriage sautan and bacche 😆

In my FF u will get more of a real story success, failure now. Raghav will have to rethink about his stand on Kalpi and stop taking her for granted coz soon she will be slipping down from his hands and will be more in quest of success carrier and happiness

as i said Raghav will have to reconsider .
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Poor kalpi n kamla like irritated
Hmm prem is another hell
Rag get slap
Update soon



Thank u Sweet. I am happy that u liked the update 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niru04

Beautiful update. Update the next part soon



Thank u Neeru. I am happy that u liked it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read this after awhile but connected to the story instantly
this is definitely one of my favorites

wonderful update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gargdia

Shanu finaly u gave update...
What a comebck update...truly mindblowing😳

Ek mutthi aasman's main concept of raghav's revenge n kalpi's love always create intresting story n the way u turn n twist ur story is awsm...
Kamla as always igroed her OWN daugher for any1 else's daughter😡
she cnt even see the damage of that horrible news on kalpi...the nly persn who knws what happend in this moment realize colourles face of his rajkumari...
Poor girl deprivd frm mother's love lost her last hope of being loved n support of her MENTOR...
The way raghav has executed his plan i cnt expect maturity frm kalpi...y evrytm she do that?
Prem is a jerk...bt nwways suddnly y is he so much intrestd in kalpi...
Raghav is expectin so much frm kalpi...bt fr kalpi his touch n words r disgust n raghav realized it...who woman wil accpt anthr grl claiming on her love,her life,her support...kalpi's slap showd hw much she is angry..possesive...last nit was a bliss n morning blast..dark..😒
raghav is being stubborn decided nt to explain her til she herslf nt demand explainatin...it wil be interesting to see this BATTLE of love b/w 2 love striken people...😳

update nxt part soon shanu.. waiting.



Yes Dia , am back 😃, Thank u that u liked it

Will make next update interesting for sure , so that u like it more 😃...yup it will be battle ...Raghav is taking Kalpi for granted , lets see till when 😉

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