FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: riaka
Please update soon

Update soon 😆 😆

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riaka

@riaka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: sunyy

Update soon 😆 😆

Copy cat😆

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@shahsb_26

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+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#263

You know Shana, I have been here in this forum now since ages, and I read your story, for first time in November, most of the time, when writer updates story after so long, they tend, to just lose out on link of the story, and intensity of writing Obviously appears to low and connection indeed is missing, but honestly... that Did NOT happen here, Flow was very much maintained and story was linked, plus INTENSITY of words did NOT reduce a bit, be it Kamla's ignorance, Kalpana's emotions, while she portrays herself as strong woman, or that of the slap, I could feel the story, and connect with it myself as reader.

Beautiful Update, this is exactly how should have it been in EMA, it would have done wonders!!! Do Update soon...

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SUGANDHII

@suggii

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Damn...!!! How come I missed out such a great piece of work.. This story is beautiful..

Just read all 7 chappies in a go.. And seriously want more.. (I was travelling.. You give a perfect story to look forward to the fight of love vs revenge..)😛

The way you portray each n every character starts from kalpi to Ragha, kamla to pakhi.. Amazing 👏👏⭐️ and offcourse m speechless.. No words to describe the way you express everything beautiful..!!

I've always have fvrt writers, but story.. Girl you rocked it.. This one is no doubt starts to be my only fvrt one 😳 I just loved it..!!

P.S. saw the major tym lag in 1 chappy n 7th but didn't read your note about comeback n continue thingy... I actually made this one as my homepage n bookmark story, so do continue soon if you don't want me to read old updates 😆

Again loved it..!! 😛👏

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ILoveRagNa

@ILoveRagNa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Nice Update 😛 Loved your story

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Jaz

@Jaz_

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#266

You're back!! Missed this story. Was a silent reader when you started this story...just glad you decided to continue it, thanks!

Coming to the update...awesome one. Raghav wants his cake and eat it too. Thinks kalpi will understand and wait around. Don't make Kalpi weak. Time for Raghav to realize the repruccusions of his actions. If he wants revenge, that's fine. Then set Kalpi free. Can't have both. Loved the slap 😉

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#267

read all the 6 chapter in one go, and shana u thrilled me with ur creativity. What an amazing ff, thank u alot for continuing story again.

This is what exactly we always wish to see EMA, love, revenge, passion, jealousy, anger and most importatnly dream to fullfill.
Love each character here, and mostly kamala, u had portrayed her as she shown in serial, she though love kalpi bt her fondness towards pakhi making kalpi crave for her love,was amazing.
Raghav who was battling between love and revenge, wanted to held everything, bt situation wasnt with him. Still, an aura of being Business Tycoon and confidence he having to make thing perfect, was so amusing.
And kalpi,(m too much fond to kalpi always) just love her character, strong yet sensitive, smart yet innocent and lost still loving and caring, was so so beautiful.
Love dis ff, fabulous work dear 😳👏