FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 15

Originally posted by: shonali164

awsm
i read all update jst nw
ur superb writer shan

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

I just came across this FF and I'm loving it so far. There is angst and there is impending drama I feel. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it will pan out.

The way you've so intimately described both their emotions and how you've managed to keep Kalpi's hesitation still intact is amazing. Raghav's impatience was perfectly penned down and I have to admit I loved the kiss. It was something unexpected but nothing unwelcomed. My personal favourite line "She still needed to learn to touch him, He realised he will have to wait for long as for now it was enough for him to know that she did enjoy her first kiss" that line did a home for me. So perfectly described.

Please continue soon because I'm really looking forward to reading more of this FF. And please PM me as well if you do PM.

xx

Originally posted by: anunimpu

Shana sweetie its awesome...!!!! Plz update soon...!!! <3

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hi hun

I know im super late, but here nevertheless😉

fantastic part... as always⭐️⭐️

I loved it😃

I found it so beautiful of raghav to control his feelings and desires around kalpana in that state. and I esp loved that he wanted her to know how she affects him and how much he loves her..

I hope kalpana gets flashes of the night... eagerly waiting for her reaction

prem is such an ass ... I knew I could count on raghav to be her knight

the audacity of paakhi to think raghav is desperate for her...😆

again, amazing part👏

looking forward to the next one

take care

Originally posted by: smile_san

awesome 😊...pls update soon... i read the previous updates...loved it...😳