FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96
Kya yaar Shana, all FFs& SS's are filled with separation tracks...pain, anguish & suffering. Have U guys took some oath on killing readers with RagNa pain😭😭
Anyways wonderful update, please continue soon and do clear the mess ASAP😡

nandini .lol...chapter 5 me hi FF ka end kar doo kya 😕

arey .like show ...yaha bhi raghav kalpi saath hi hongey...but yaar be ready for a bolder story in my FF coz for me their nothing called extra marital affair when u marry something like psyco like paaki 😆

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: SONIA6702

amazing update !!! Rags announced his engagement to poo 😭😭😭...

plzz update soon.. !! Cnt wait to read if he will ever marry poo😡

i asure u here ...i am not dumb like cvs to get raghav paaki married in my FF😆...i have much better plans and twist in mind 😳

this is shana ka FF and not pd shirin ki prem kahani !

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rani214

@rani214

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Amazing update but last part is heartbreaking

Don't separate ragna

Continue soon

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Poor Kalpi, feel so bad for her, Raghav should not have said those things to her if her was going to marry Paakhi,

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lovely

@smileysmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Thanks for the update Shana. Really sensual and shocking in the end.

Please update soon. Eagerly waiting. Current track of EMA is so boring. I am ready for anything interesting and your FF seems so. Don't take too long.

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Beautiful update
Wth! One mintue Raghav claiming all right on Kalpi and the next he declaring wedding plans to the world with Pakhi...
I'm already feeling sad for Kalpi

dont feel sad for kalpi...shana ki kalpi is strong ...and not kamla puppet...she is all set to band bajao raghav in next chapter ...shocks will make her even stronger 😳

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Very nice update..

plz continue soon...

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lurve_life

@lurve_life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Brilliant girl...loved your story. Read all the chapters in one go. Please continue soon. Must say our forum writers are far better than the EMA writers...lol