FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Update!!PM me wity next update:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Intense and passionate ☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg wow
such an amazing part ⭐️
u described it all so beautifully 👏
I didn't think raghav would confess his feelings so soon and so clearly.. but it was a pleasant surprise 😃
and shocking too when he just captured her lips...😲☺️❤️
kalpana was sweet 😳. I loved how u described her confusion, helplessness, shyness, hesitation and eventually her giving in 👍🏼😳
u owe us another part asap 😆😉... cant wait to read what you have in store for us😃
and do include more kisses in them 😆
take care hun
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow shana amazing fic please do add me to the pm list



thank u jyoti jyoti😃

i am not pm ing these days ...will try to let u know anyways 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona_Mayur

Woah, that was really unexpected. Shana! That was brilliant. I can't believe that I missed reading this almost. This part was so brilliantly written. I loved the progression and the pace of this part. It was so adorable. I especially loved the ending - it was so unexpected and so welcomed! Awesome job =)



thank u shona

i am not very regular in updates thats why may be u missed it 😆

wrote this chapter from raghav POV so surprise was expected ...coz our raghav often surprises...next chapter i will write mostly from kalpi POV ...so u will get more reason there.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prishna_fan

love it to the core, plzz continue soon !!!! it was unpredictable !!!! lovely



seems like i really surprised everybody 😕...now i am turning raghav baba too 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Awesome! I'm loving the way he has opened up to her and making her realize her feelings for him!



thank u 😃

raghav is a unique mentor...he will surprise her more in coming chapters ...i can promise u on that 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShanUlas



thank u dear😊...pls tell ur name

will try to write soon.

though i am a lazy person😕

my name is riya... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SoniLuvsRT

Omg di such a lovely,passionate,intense,romantic chapter 👏👏👏
Update was mindblowing,superhit 👍🏼
Loved it loved it just loved it to the core 😳❤️
Hehe i njoyed RagNa's first kiss more than RagNa 😉☺️😆
Plz do countinue soon...can't wait...



thank u soni 😃...will continue for sure but soon i cant promise...i am a big kaamchor in writing 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

Awesome! I'm loving the way he has opened up to her and making her realize her feelings for him!



its raghav way abrupt and passionate ...kalpi has to prepare for this in future as well ...he feelings r no less then storm 😆

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