FF: The Mentor : Chapter 8 : Enemy In Laws : Upd. pg 60 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Rozy77

omg wow

such an amazing part ⭐️

u described it all so beautifully 👏

I didn't think raghav would confess his feelings so soon and so clearly.. but it was a pleasant surprise 😃

and shocking too when he just captured her lips...😲☺️❤️

kalpana was sweet 😳. I loved how u described her confusion, helplessness, shyness, hesitation and eventually her giving in 👍🏼😳

u owe us another part asap 😆😉... cant wait to read what you have in store for us😃

and do include more kisses in them 😆

take care hun

thank u rozy the holi sequence did inspire to be bold...hope they give more such scenes so that i write even bolder 😳

u will get more of kalpi POV over this and raghav in next chapter as this one i wrote from raghav POV and how he saw kalpi react

one month is gone. any chance of update..

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

one month is gone. any chance of update..

i liked ur story.

i too want to update but dont know what to write😕

please my dear readers ,who have read all three chapters and know my FF , do give me some dhansu idea to write next chapter😭

i want next chapter to be real hot but how i dont know

so dhansu ideas invited 😃

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

i too want to update but dont know what to write😕

please my dear readers ,who have read all three chapters and know my FF , do give me some dhansu idea to write next chapter😭

i want next chapter to be real hot but how i dont know

so dhansu ideas invited 😃

Originally posted by: LaughItOff

If it helps you... You can use Songs as inspiration... If you know what I mean. Songs pave way to real emotions. I hope you come up with Fantabulous part.

yes they do give emotional content but right now i am at loss of story as to how to move on ...i want to write a good story as well ...right now i am really beating my head to think of some twists 😆...thats why i have not been able to write since a month 😕

I will start reading this... soon..!! Vacation time..!!

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

I will start reading this... soon..!! Vacation time..!!

after reading provide some dhansu future twist ...i did start off with good enthusiasm but right now i am lost .

..my raghav kalpi siggy with raghav coming down from sky from helicopter and kalpii seeing high up at the sky scrapper is my inspiration ...

...i want to write something passionate but also be logical with story .

I just hope that you get the story line or twist or what ever soon...
Its too good to abandon... Please do something Shana? Just update it soon...

Shana sweetie its awesome...!!!! Plz update soon...!!! <3