FF - RagNa Journey To Be Each Other's Soulmate (Part 3 - Pg 4)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RagNa that is what we call our favourite couple Raghav & Kalpana . Each time we see RagNa meeting together we feel that they are soulmates . Soulmates they are only made for each other if one of them is hurt the pain is felt by other , without saying anything they understand each other very well , when they are with each other they forget about whole world , their heart beats only for each other to be with each other .
Story will be based on how raghav and kalpi will come close to each other after each meeting slowly and steadily be each other's soulmate .

Characters Overview :

Raghav : From childhood raghav had soft corner for kalpi and admired her strength , will power, passion to do things with determination and honesty whichever task she takes in hand.He still remembers that she used to always tell if we do any work with honesty and without fear and trust on ourselves then each problem , difficulty , hurdle coming in your way is easily sorted out and you complete your work successfully .After meeting kalpi two three times he has developed some feelings for kalpi but still is confused what is all about.

Kalpi : She felt raghav was very weird .He helped her but never let her say her thank you .
He cared for her but never let her be by his side whenever he needed . His concern made her some feelings for him but is in dilemma whether she is right tinking in that way or she is thinking in wrong way .

Other character's are Kamala , Vithal , Pakya , Sammy , Pakhi , Neetu , Sahil , Prem etc.



NOTE : Guys this is the first time that i am writing FF so please reply whether i should continue further or not . If you say then i will else not


Part 1 : Page 2
Part 2 : Page 3

Part 3 : Page 4
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beginner46 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome dear please continue can't wait to read more 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that's a very good start. 😃
the character sketch of Raghav and Kalpi is very clear and interesting. 😊
don't worry about it being your first try for an FF, let it all flow and bring it on! 😃
update soon dr.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Go for it girl don't u dare thinkibg otherwise ;) i was also a first timer like so just din't care about others and update soon, the CS look ideal for the story.. Good luck :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely.
Plz continue. Eager to read more.
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue Savariya continue... Its a very interesting concept... So please continue... 👍🏼 And PM me the part whn u finish it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue Dear...please update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very very nice start dear...👍🏼
The story sounds very interesting 😊
Would really love to read... So plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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❤️ RagNa's First Meet : On Kalpi's Birthday ❤️

Kamala had promised kalpi to spend entire day only with her on her birthday but she broke her promise and went to pakhi . Kalpi was disheartened by this gesture of her aai.She wanted to stay alone so she decided to go for a walk to rejuvenate her dreams . That dreams which her aai saw for her but was never with her when she was successful climbing each and every step that would led her achieving her dreams . And these dreams were her only companion for which she was living (till raghav came in her life)

Kalpi left her house she didn't realize for how long she was waliking and finally she came near seashore and sat on the bench . She was so hurt by this behaviour of kamala that tears started flowing from her eyes she was not in the state to understand where she was and what's happening to her started her self talk .🤢

Kalpi : (loudly) Kyu aai tune hamesha mere saath aisa kyu karti meri kya galti hai.(in frustration she started blurting out her story that kamala always does this to her ...)Aai why do u always stay away from me and hurt me 😡

Raghav who was sitting besides her was listening to her story

Raghav : Kitna shor hai yaha par

Kalpi : (came out of her trance she looked at raghav ) Excuse Me 😒 Did u say anything

Raghav : Maine kaha ki yaha pe bahut shor hai naa

Kalpi : 😲

Raghav : I was thinking that i will peacefully enjoy cold breeze near seashore but tumne bore kar diya from last half an hour i m listening ur dukh-dard bhari story . i can't take more😳 Are u always like ...

Kalpi : Like what ❓

Raghav
: Like Ummm...🤔 Dukhi Aatma

Kalpi : 😡

Raghav : Oh! God , Main toh darr hi gaya . Madam rone ke saath angry hona bhi aata

Kalpi : I m not crying

Raghav : Oh really i don't think so (leaned towards her touched her face ) Toh aasu kaha se aa rahe hai

Kalpi : (she got caught) Toh kya hua main ro nahi sakti kya

Raghav : Sure u can and rone se dil ka bhar bhi halka ho jata hai

Kalpi : 😵 (got up to leave )

Raghav : Will like to give one free advice

Kalpi : (turned and said ) Don't Need 😒

Raghav : Still i will give.Someone sometime told me that life full of joy and sorrows Something may always hurt u or become hurdle in ur way but never ever let them win over u always face them with smile on ur face .And thing u think is hurting u just ignore it and carry on .

Kalpi : (Went into thought process she remembered that she had told this to raghav in their childhood and smile crept on her face 😊she came out of her trance her and she looked by her side but there was no one she searched here and there but he was nowhere around )

Kalpi ; Who was he ?????? Koi bhi ho Thank You mujhe ye yaad dilane ke liye ki jo hamesha se hote aa raha hai uske baare main soch ke main apna mood kyu spoil karu . Chod Kalpi tujhe pata hai naa aai aisi hi hai jaane de tu kyu aapna mood spoil kar rahi hai(Smilingly she left from there 😊 )

Raghav was watching this from distance was relieved seeing smile on her face

Raghav : Pata nahi kyu main iske pass khicha chala aata hoon , why i can't see her pain,
chod raghav tu bhi kya soch raha aisi koi baat nahi hai . But she looks beautiful when she smiles 😳



Note : Guys please do comment and give ur honest feedback and if u think some changes are needed then u r welcome to give



Edited by savariya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Update...loved their interaction, god his attitude is too much for a normal girl. And as always Raghav drilled some sense into her brain😊

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