FF - RagNa Journey To Be Each Other's Soulmate (Part 3 - Pg 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update... Pata nahi nein doudke chalaa aata hoon FF's padhne keliye usi tarah jis tarah Raghav Kalpi ke pass jaa raha hai... šŸ˜†..Wht an attitude by Mr.Akdoo Singhania... Loved the update... Waiting for the next chapter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very beautiful update... Loved it <3<3<3 plz update soon :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice updatešŸ‘i wish if it would have happened in the show too😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
I like RagNa converstion and Raghav giving Kalpi her own advice was superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update...first meet was so very nice...update the nxt part soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ā¤ļøRagNa's Second Meet : On Job Interview Day ā¤ļø

Today was very very special day for Kalpi she was going get her three yrs ke mehnat ka fal . She got up early did all her work and was hurriedly getting ready to leave for colleage. She was tensed but was confident that she will do it . Seeing her such hustle vithal questioned

Vithal : Aaj meri rajkumari itni pareshani aur hadbadi main kyu hain

Kalpi : Baba woh...šŸ˜•(she stoped at woh and thought mujhe job milega toh aai-baba ko surprise dungi😊)

Vithal : Haan Bolna beta

Kalpi : Kuch nahi baba woh aaj project submit karna hai isiliye (She took kamala-vithal's blessing and left for college )

Vithal : Ok meri Rajkumari . 😊

Near College near front gate in front of Ganpati Bappa's Idol joined her hands prayed to god to help her today so she can climb one more step near her goal .

Kalpi : Deva please aaj help karna haan . Bahut darr lag pata nahi interviewer kaisa hoga ,kya puchega , kya karne bolega... par tu hai naa sambhal lena

Further entering waiting area for interview she bumped onto pakhi

Kalpi : Oh God College aate hi kiski shakal dekh li šŸ˜” pehle tensed hoon aur upar se ye bala(problem) . Please bhagwanji isse bhi aap hi sambhal lijiyega

Pakhi : Hey Kalpi , kaisi hai

Kalpi : Kaisi Dikh rahi hoon

Pakhi : Main toh bus tu pareshan dikh rahi hai isiliye pucha

Kalpi : (To herself shant ho jaa kalpi )Haan ... woh interview ki wajah se(with slight irritationin her tone ) Waise tu yaha kya kar rahi hai ???

Pakhi :Main bhi Interview dene aayi hoon

Kalpi : Kapoor empire ki princess ko ye chotisi job ki kya jarurat

Pakhi : Jarurat nahi hain dusra reason hain (excitedly started telling her reason)

Kalpi : Iski bak bak kab khatam hogi please koi toh bacha lo

And there came her saviour she was called for interview

Kalpi : (Knock Knock on the door ) May I come in sir

Interviewer was facing the wall and ready some file sitting on comfy chair

Interviewer : Yes

Kalpi : Thank You

Interviewer : Take ur seat

Kalpi : (seated)

Interviewer : (still facing the wall ) Miss Kalpana Vithal Jadhav 10th main 95% , 12th main 92% ,last two years se college main topper participated debates , elocution blah blah... How boring Now apart from this tell something else about you any special qualities u have (and turned around now facing kalpi ) and why do u want this job

Kalpi : (She was shelled shock seeing the interviewer)(

Guess who he was Mr Akdoo(Raghav) Singhania

Raghav : I think I asked a questionā“

Kalpi : (Still numb )

Raghav :(Smirking 😈 )One quality I know you cry very well

Kalpi : (hearing this came she out of her trance ) 😲Sorry sir

Raghav : Now got to know other quality of ur's u l love wasting others time . Don't u think Miss Jadhav ur wasting my time that day also u wasted my time by telling me ur dukh-dard bhari kahani aur hamesha apne khwaboo ki duniya main rehti hai

Kalpi : I didn't tell u to seat and listen to me 😔 (angrily )

Raghav : Gusse main bhi kitni beautiful dikhti hai šŸ˜›

Kalpi : Aap ne kuch kaha

Raghav : 😲 Main ye bol raha tha ki itna zor se bologi toh sunayi dega naa aur yaha interview dene aayi ho ya apne khwaboo ki duniya ki ser karne

Kalpi : (With same attitude😈) Sorry sir... Pehli baat maine nahi kahata aapko waha beth ke meri baatein sune ke liye aur main interview dene hi aayi hoon agar kaam ke related koi question kare toh achcha hoga phir mujhe aapke sawaal answer search karne ke liye khwaboo ki duniya ki ser nahi karni padegi now u decide u want to take interview for manger post or ur life partner post

Raghav : (Got embarrassed and shy )I m here to take ur interview

Kalpi : Telling me or urself (Happy seeing raghav confused her POV that u caught me naa now its turn )

Further interview took place like any other interview . She came out cabin . After finishing her work she was now ready to leave . While leaving again she came in front of Ganpati Bappa's Idol Thank u deva aaj tune meri help ki warna pata nahi kya ho jata 😊

Edited by savariya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So I hope you don't mind but I made a few changes to your story nothing big. The words in bold are the changes that I made. I don't understand Hindi so I didn't do changes to those. Sorry. :)

Kalpi was heartbroken when she learned that her mother had spent the day with Paakhi instead of her on her birthday no less, breaking the promise that she had made, a promise that apparently meant nothing. She decided to go for a stroll as she wanted a moment to recollect her thoughts.
Thoughts that were filled with her mother's dreams. Dreams that her mother sketched out for her but was never there with her as she successfully climbed each and every step that would eventually lead her to achieving her mother's dreams. These dreams were her only companion for which she was living for, that is until Raghav entered her life.
As Kalpi left the house, she didn't realize how long she was walking until she came near the seashore and sat on the bench almost as if she was in a trance. Tears started to form in her eyes as she remembered Kamla's disregard of her, she was so hurt and upset that day. She had never felt so numb, she felt isolated and alone as she tried to hold back a sob that threatened to come out.


Kalpi : (loudly) Kyu aai tune hamesha mere saath aisa kyu karti meri kya galti hai.(in frustration she started blurting out her story that kamala always does this to her ...)Aai why do u always stay away from me and hurt me Angry

Raghav who was sitting silently beside her waited until she finished letting out her pent up frustration.

Raghav : Kitna shor hai yaha par

Kalpi : (came out of her trance she looked at raghav ) Excuse Me Disapprove Did u say anything

Raghav : Maine kaha ki yaha pe bahut shor hai naa

Kalpi : Shocked

Raghav : I was thinking that i will peacefully enjoy cold breeze near seashore but tumne bore kar diya from last half an hour i m listening ur dukh-dard bhari story . i can't take moreStern Smile Are u always like ...

Kalpi : Like what Question

Raghav : Like Ummm...Ermm Dukhi Aatma

Kalpi : Angry

Raghav : Oh! God , Main toh darr hi gaya . Madam rone ke saath angry hona bhi aata
Kalpi : I m not crying

Raghav : Oh really i don't think so (leaned towards her touched her face ) Toh aasu kaha se aa rahe hai

Kalpi : Ouch (she got caught) Toh kya hua main ro nahi sakti kya

Raghav : Sure u can and rone se dil ka bhar bhi halka ho jata hai

Kalpi : Pinch (got up to leave )

''Would you like me to give you some advice?'' questioned Raghav.
Kalpi turns away and says, ''I don't need nor want your advice.''

''I will still give it. Someone once told me that life is full of joy and sorrow. Someone or something may hurt you or they might become a hurdle in your path but you shouldn't let them get the better of you. You should always face the problem with a smile, no matter if you get hurt just ignore it and continue moving forward.'' advised Raghav.
Kalpi sat there remembering that she had told this to Raghav in their childhood slowly a small smile crept on her face. As she came out of her trance, she looked to the side but there was no one she searched here and there but he was nowhere around

'Kalpi thinking'

As Raghav watched this from the distance, he was relieved to she that she left with a smile on her face.
'Raghav thinking' or ''Raghav speaking''


So like a word of advice when someone is speaking you use both open and close quotation marks and when someone is thinking something just use this ( 'thinking' ) it makes the work look neater. If you want with your stories just ask.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pein


So I hope you don't mind but I made a few changes to your story nothing big. The words in bold are the changes that I made. I don't understand Hindi so I didn't do changes to those. Sorry. :)

Kalpi was heartbroken when she learned that her mother had spent the day with Paakhi instead of her on her birthday no less, breaking the promise that she had made, a promise that apparently meant nothing. She decided to go for a stroll as she wanted a moment to recollect her thoughts.
Thoughts that were filled with her mother's dreams. Dreams that her mother sketched out for her but was never there with her as she successfully climbed each and every step that would eventually lead her to achieving her mother's dreams. These dreams were her only companion for which she was living for, that is until Raghav entered her life.
As Kalpi left the house, she didn't realize how long she was walking until she came near the seashore and sat on the bench almost as if she was in a trance. Tears started to form in her eyes as she remembered Kamla's disregard of her, she was so hurt and upset that day. She had never felt so numb, she felt isolated and alone as she tried to hold back a sob that threatened to come out.


Kalpi : (loudly) Kyu aai tune hamesha mere saath aisa kyu karti meri kya galti hai.(in frustration she started blurting out her story that kamala always does this to her ...)Aai why do u always stay away from me and hurt me Angry

Raghav who was sitting silently beside her waited until she finished letting out her pent up frustration.

Raghav : Kitna shor hai yaha par

Kalpi : (came out of her trance she looked at raghav ) Excuse Me Disapprove Did u say anything

Raghav : Maine kaha ki yaha pe bahut shor hai naa

Kalpi : Shocked

Raghav : I was thinking that i will peacefully enjoy cold breeze near seashore but tumne bore kar diya from last half an hour i m listening ur dukh-dard bhari story . i can't take moreStern Smile Are u always like ...

Kalpi : Like what Question

Raghav : Like Ummm...Ermm Dukhi Aatma

Kalpi : Angry

Raghav : Oh! God , Main toh darr hi gaya . Madam rone ke saath angry hona bhi aata
Kalpi : I m not crying

Raghav : Oh really i don't think so (leaned towards her touched her face ) Toh aasu kaha se aa rahe hai

Kalpi : Ouch (she got caught) Toh kya hua main ro nahi sakti kya

Raghav : Sure u can and rone se dil ka bhar bhi halka ho jata hai

Kalpi : Pinch (got up to leave )

''Would you like me to give you some advice?'' questioned Raghav.
Kalpi turns away and says, ''I don't need nor want your advice.''

''I will still give it. Someone once told me that life is full of joy and sorrow. Someone or something may hurt you or they might become a hurdle in your path but you shouldn't let them get the better of you. You should always face the problem with a smile, no matter if you get hurt just ignore it and continue moving forward.'' advised Raghav.
Kalpi sat there remembering that she had told this to Raghav in their childhood slowly a small smile crept on her face. As she came out of her trance, she looked to the side but there was no one she searched here and there but he was nowhere around

'Kalpi thinking'

As Raghav watched this from the distance, he was relieved to she that she left with a smile on her face.
'Raghav thinking' or ''Raghav speaking''


So like a word of advice when someone is speaking you use both open and close quotation marks and when someone is thinking something just use this ( 'thinking' ) it makes the work look neater. If you want with your stories just ask.



Thanks 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice update loved it <3<3<3<3<3 update soon alright šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really enjoyed the whole ragna conversations 😊 perfect dear..continue soon

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