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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Thank God virat is all safe n sound. Fabulous update. The best part was with the kids and virman part just rocking like always.. Loved it.

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

thnx for updating

i liked it so much..

plz update soon

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

lovely part
loved the part where virat opened up his fear to manvi
kids were so adorable as always
please continue soon

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Tejeswy

@kushal90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Now wt do i tell.!? 😲

You leave no chance to make me go speechless 😆

It was as usual the amazing nd mind-blowing update 😃

So u will nt be here... 😒

Nd this was a filler.!? 😲

K till the tym u update bubye tc... 😃 🤗

Come back with a bang on 😉

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paddu503

@paddu503

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

[I][/I]superb update...loved the way u defined the manvi's emotions...the love between them is always magical...the kids were so cute...the way u write the story is always amazing...continue soon...take care..:-):-):-):-):-):-)

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Huma

@Huma0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

really liked the update - loved the way u showed virman's pain n love for each other- its really deep the kids r adorable as usual bt I really love ria - shes nt talkin to him bt she can hug him n everythin n tell him shes nt talkin to him awww cnt wait for next update as always 😉

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

man this yu call a filler 😲 it was just soo perfect update loved it ❤️❤️👍🏼
finally virat is all safe 😃 the way yu expressed manvi's emotions her thoughts her fear her love her anger everything was just perfect infact just wooowww👏👏👍🏼
virat being in all good good joking mood haan his dialogues just made me smile 😃
the way manvi just took out all the fear and frustration on him was really needed gosh she was almost deaD ...
the virman moment their hug and how virat said her about everything all those emotions of his felt soo good reading these part😊
nikki and virat moment was sooo cute 😃
"You missed me? How about that Manvi? Your son missed me, for a change." 😆😆
that dialogue was cute 😊
and ria gosh she is mini manvi soo adorable yet all nautanki types 😉

"I guess all Vadhera women are hot-headed!!!" Dad smiles looking at Ma. Viren nods agreeingly looking at Jeevika and Virat looks at me and smiles.

this part was funny 😆😆😆

awesome fab amazing just loved it 👏👏
update soon 😊

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Awww comeon its not at all a filler...another superb updt..virman scene was emotional yet beautiful...cute family moments...pls cont soon

Edited by rasp_berry - 12 years ago

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nimi00

@nimi00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

👏 You had me speechless after this update, your writing style is wonderful and I love the creativity you have with the story line. I loved Maanvi's outburst and Ria's as well. Ria is a photocopy of Maanvi's hot headed personality. Thank you for the PM 😊

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dspandana

@dspandana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Oh loved ur fanfic...plzz update soon

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