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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Loved it!!
It was awesome
Manvi's breakdown was so emotional
Cant wait for the next update
Continue soon!!

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Hey awesome update are you kidding me i loved this update

virat is alive and is back with mavi and the kids🤗

loved the kids ria is like manvi

virat sharing his fear with mavi was so good and emotional

really hats off for you i really love all your stories👏😳

please continue soon and thank you so much for the pm😊😳

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Disha

@daydreamer9

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

i love you more than all the stars in the sky!!!!
'brilliant' is an understatement for your talent.so wont say brilliant.
then what should i say???
ummm...i don't know. i should better keep quiet.bless you!!!❤️

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

👏👏👏Oh god!!!!! I am really commenting twice & that too same story!!!!!😆

Well I guess this will be little bit short as I have poured all the feelings in my last comment!!!😆😆

The update was quite emotional!!!!! Manvi's burst about her insecurities was obvious & it was hard to see the pain & the disturbance which was going on in their lives!!!!!😭

Manvi is right, this is just the beginning!!!!!!
God knows what's coming up next!!!!!!
The starting was just amazing!!!!!!! The way the flow was going without any conversation between anyone, just manvi's feelings, it was incredible!!!!! You know it was just like a movie, the one which we gets to see in a superhit blockbuster movie!!!!!!!!!!! Just unbelievable!!!!!👏

Three cheers for that!!!!!! HIP-HIP HURRAY!!!!! HIP-HIP HURRAY!!!! HIP-HIP HURRAY!!!!👏👏

Then the kids part was cute, they really missed him!!!!!!
I loved it how virat doesn't want his family to take any kind of tensions & want to keep them safe & the way way he was lightening the atmosphere!!!!!!!

Overall the update was somehow light than the previous ones which were full of tension 7 suspense!!!!! This was a light one, a bit of relief!!!!!!! But the tint of perfection was still there!!!!!!!!!

You can't leave perfection na??

Good!! Don't you ever leave that, you know it describes you!!! If someone has to describe you then he will just say one word PERFECT!!!!!!! It suites your personality, in fact I would say it makes your personality!!!!!😃😃

Keep it up gal!!!!!👏👏👏

Edited by nanditam2107 - 12 years ago

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

acha ji so ur gona be mr india for a week lol no probs will wait 😊

waise honestly telling im feeling like crying wr nt gona gt any update fo soo many days 😭 rofl 🤣 dont worry just being hyper anu 😉

the update was ummm i just have a single word to define it today and that is BEAUTIFUL ❤️ i mean no other damm word can fit to praise ur update this time all the emotions and feelings were merely pure and nothing else the fear they had of loosing eachother the pain to see their love suffering the relief to get their life back every thing had soo much harmony in it... not a single line was for virat or for manvi what i felt is that every single word described virman today...

Everything seems so surreal - a small portion of me is sitting inside the car, riding towards the hospital to my bleeding husband. But the major portion of me is just up there - watching the whole scene, like I wasn't a part of it - like it was all a part of some evil plot in a twisted novel I was reading. How can I be a part of this? How can a day that started with magic wands and sweet nothings end with blood and bullets? There were bullets - two of them - inside him - inside my husband - eating him away - spreading their poison, this very second. this was something really soecial in this update..just these few lines completely fitted manvi's pain and her fear...i loved the way u wrote this the part thing u know..it was just perfect!!!

the golden words of my life. "Mr.Vadhera is doing fine. and again this was fab..indeed they were golden words for how..i mean how can they nit be.. she got her love back!!so they should be precious to her dont they??

Do you want me to congratulate you for building this colossal empire you are so proud of? that constantly keeps putting you under gun-point!!!!this is what im feeling from the time all this plot thing started to pop up in the story..just everything comes behind love or money na u said this too i feel maybe if he didnt get into this buiseness stuff then all this havnt hapnd but destiny has its role in every one's life too!!

" I hear his heart-beat. It was like my senses finally return. beyond beautiful i would say!!! his heartbeat his her lifeline !!!

"A little bit." Nikki adds and we all split in laughteri love nikki for this i love momma more attitude lol

."Oh my!!!" Virat smiles surprised. "I thought you are not talking to me."

"I AM NOT!!" she retorts.this was effing adorable...indeed vadhera women are hot-headed 😉