VIRMAN FF* kyu dard hai itna...*PART 9*pg.130

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

I read all the updates today and i must say itz an awesome story...
The way you portrayed virat's character is mindblowing...
Plz update soon whenever you get time...
N all the best for your exams...

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

at first let me say that im really happy to see an update, thank youu
you make it with every update more excited...
this is great,
what sanjay meant by again????

thanks for pm

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jayanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Superb update. Thanks for updating during your exams. You have shown different shades of Virat's character very nicely.
Eager to read more. Continue once ur exams are done.

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

First of all thank u for writing it although u have ur exams! N girl wat can I say it was just amazing ^_______^ mystery after mystery... She ran away wohooo but thn got back... Ahem ahem... OMG the bedroom scenes the towel scene eeekkksss I so wanna that towel to drop n hahahhaha blush blush ! I love this virat... He is rough but not stone hard n biwi u r reminding me of Madhubala... N samjhe ya samjhao haha that one was goood! OMg y did u ended was enjoying to the fulliest.. Thank god u wrote one! Hope u r alive after the pizza cuz can't wait to read do pm me waiting impaitently

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Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Amazinggg update
omggg ithink manvi was virat'swife but i think she had lost her
memory nd her parents took her away from virat
plzzz update asap

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Dorae

@Dorae

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Such an awesome update...you are a great writer why you are feeling so low about yourself...

you know what I love all your ff's but your first ff jab we met have some special place in my heart...while I am reading this I feel like reading the jab we met...the same passion I can see in this ff...

You placed the anger, romance, emotion and humour in correct place...while reading that samjhe ya samjhau dialogue I thought it's arjun dialogue but next min maanvi told that.really like the timing of adding that dialouge...

Now eagerly waiting for maanvi parents reaction when they see her and mystery behind sudden marriage and sanjay talk about their friendship again...

Takecare and all the best for exams.

Thanks for pm.

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sha19

@sha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Omg Awesome awesome awesome 😃
Love it
Best of luck 😃

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Sumana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

ommGGG ...super awesomeee update...so many things ...i just loved it ...I m loving this intense story ...Update soon👏😉

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#389

Just read last 3 updates togthr.. loved it.. fab concept nd awesome updateee... 👍🏼

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Nandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#390

Oh man!!! I have not read such a dark story till now!!!!!
I am just loving this grey character of Virat!!!!!!

Every update makes the story more complicated, the mystery is still on & nowhere it is going to end i think so!!!!!

Virat said "Apse diya hua vada aaj maine pura kiya……She is not chaudary anymore……today I made her Mrs. Manvi Virat Singh vadhera….aab toh aap khush hai na?"…...what does this mean????? Whom he had promised?????

And now he himself is allowing Manvi to to back to her parents house & he is super confident that she will come back to him!!!!!!

God!!!! I am totally messed up & confused right now!!!!
And that guy Sanjay said that manvi & he will become friends again...when did they met earlier??????

WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON????????

Shilpa, you have left me astonished!!!!! Its unbelievable for anyone to write a sweet story at one point of time & then suddenly the same person is writing such a dark story with grey characters!!!!!!!!

I can't even think that to what extent your imagination can go!!!!!!!!!!!

Hats off gal!!!!! You are just amazing!!!!!!😃👏👏

Do update soon...will be waiting!!!!!!!

And i know your next update will also blow my mind & i will again enter into the world full of confusion & suspense!!!!!!😆

But guess what??? I really wanna know this world!!!!!😉