VIRMAN FF* kyu dard hai itna...*PART 9*pg.130

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Ankita

@-ineffable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

first of all a big sorry for being late in cmnting... 🤢
eekhs!! it was just mindblowing... 👏👏👏di sacchi 😃

virat opened manvi's towel hawww ☺️ best part tha woh wala 😉

virat is acting so rude and all 😔 poor manvi 😔

and what did sanjay meant by again 😕

kya woh pehele se frnds thai 😕

uggghhh.. so many questions.. 😕 main toh pagal hojaungi.. if u dont update 😛

and di apne update ko bura bhala kehna band karo its so amazinggg haan 😊 ❤️

i am toh loving it totally ❤️

🤗 a big huggie for such an awesome update 😃

let me stop my bak bak 😆 otherwise i will make u mad too 😃

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

Take ur time. .all d best 4 ur exams. .

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nandini menon

@MandyTheBlogger

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

hey shilpa...

sorry for late commenting... 😔

acctually got stuck with my mob--pc --internet probs...

finally i'm able comment on your work ...😃

well... the way story is moving is really fab!!!👏

jab jab hum exams ke liye seriously padthe hain thabi

hummare dimaag ki bathi jalthe hain aur

ayissi wonderful ideas dethe hain for our stories for virman... 🤣

so problem lies with our xams ... 😉

when i read ur story i was like 😲 "FULL ON SHOCK !!"

did virat really do that???

and what is with that sanjay's words ... "we'll b friends again .." 😕

**scatching my head to see what you r upto ...**

😛😆😉

waitng for your next update ... and ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAM ...👍🏼

hope you survived your "pizza test" 🤣🤣

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kittu_11

@kittu_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

superb update 😊 thnks for the pm continue soon😊

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inlvwithehmmbh

@inlvwithehmmbh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

I'm as confused as manvi.. I think there is a past to why virat did this and the way he's behaving.. Memory loss for manvi maybe? Whatever it is, I'm eagerly waiting for the next update! It's gonna be really good I suppose. Good luck for your exams and update soon!

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jinaku

@jinaku

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

thanku u very much ji...👏

its lyk a gift fr me when u update...

one advice.-- if u update regularly then u will blessed with good marks.😆..pakka...becoz of gud deeds..thru regular updates...😉..

byeee

srrry ...i m hyper...😲

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nimi00

@nimi00

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

It seems as though Virat has already fallen for her, the story line is really reminding me of Madhubala especially the biwi part. Please continue soon and good luck with your exams. Thank you for the PM 😃

Edited by nimi00 - 12 years ago

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: preity_d
awesome update 👍🏼

Samjhe'.ya samjhau?"
Manvi jumped in excitement saying'.. "Yeh toh Arjun ka dialogue hai'..." 🤣these lines cracked me up

The story is moving like a shatabdi speed now
I was just amazed how VIrat took out that to her newly married wife,woah
and who is he? whats his intention?
So much things to unveil... and things are going superbly

update was high paced, intense and crisp

now waiting for the next 😳

for you
🤗

P.S. Virat biwi bolta hain to meko R.K. ki yaad aaying... usko wifey bolne ko bol na 😛
and this is a dark story but you the writer so much sweet that for me its a sweet story 😛😆
I am liking this dark yet cute Virat so much 😛😉😳

awww...thnx preeto...🤗

its really sweet of u...:)

actually u know what... i was thinking of same...bcoz i read many of comments saying its going madhubala way...nd abt biwi thing...

but i swear... i never thought of madhubala for once...nd beside i hd never watche that shw... so i didnt knew anything abt it... but for u guys... i did my short research on MB...nd let me tell u my ff nt at all like madhubala...

nd preeto i will consider ur wify thing...😉