SS - Hamesha Ke Baad Bhi - Part 2 page 9 (03/02)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Diii... Pleaseee... aap aise nahin kar sakti.. aapko meri baat maan-ni hi hogi.. werna humara vaada kabhi poora nahin hoga... humari hamesha ke baad bhi wali kasam toot jaayegi di.. Pleasee apne liye na sahi.. kisi aur ke liye naa sahi.. par meri khaatir..humaari khaatir di.. Laut jaao... please di wapis chali Jao...


She was crying, pleading, begging... No one could hear her... and the only single person who was hearing her, did not want to listen whatever she was saying...

She was feeling helpless' She looked at her surrounding' She saw his husband sitting on floor with his head on his brother's lap who was sitting on bed.. Both were having no-expressions on their faces' She tried to touch them, talk to them but she couldn't' She screamed loudly but her cries were not audible to anyone.. And again she moved towards her di, "Dekho na di..sab kaise baithe hain' aapko inpe zara sa bhi taras ni aata.. Mat karo di aisa..mat karo' woh pehle se hi shock mein hain' ek aur shock woh bardasht nahin kar payenge Di Pleaaase!!!!


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Confusing?? well yes...
This is something I thought of over the past couple of dayss..
I wasn't sure of I'd write, because I wasn't sure if anybody would actually be interested in it. But I'm just going to post a prologue. If anybody finds this interesting, please comment and tell me!
Love,
Neha...

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Part 2 ~ Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really good!! Interesting beginning! Please continue soon! And please PM me, if you're going to send out PMs. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Is jeevika dead!
Interesting i guess i should be ready with tissue box it is going tobe emotional journey
Pm me
I can't miss it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edit: Un-Reserved!

LOL Happy?!

Now you can go ahead and update, please & thank you :)

Jk, definitely gripping prologue- don't let this one hang in the middle like ur other one!! Wi look forward to read it- been a while since I read something something of yours :)
Edited by Amii90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes this does sound interesting babe..
continue and plz plz plz pm me..
x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm already excited! I think I can figure out what's happening but please break the suspense and write further VERY soon! :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb cannot wait to start reading
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting!!
eager 2 read the next part!!
continue soon n do pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just longinggg for a topic like this...love u neha..❤️ plsss continue sooon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls continue soon.wat happen to jeeman .pls continue soon and pls PM me.😊

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