SS - Hamesha Ke Baad Bhi - Part 2 page 9 (03/02)

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Izzah

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Posted: 12 years ago

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amazinggg job!! plzzz pm me when u update! 😊

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saranya

@saranya.saran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

neha di⭐️firstly this is for u🤗👏

🤗👏woow di...really i'm damn impressed by your writings especially jeeman bondings...i dnt find any words to explain...

after reading this i was choked..,😭

plsss do continue and pm me...waiting for u

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Krisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Don't you trouble me enough ki ab rula rahi hai? Humesha tere updates mujhe senti kar dete hai and after reading them I feel like KASH show mein bhi aisa hi dikhate

The way you write actually makes me visualise those scenes.. I can imagine Jeevika saying those lines to Maanvi and vice versa.

Jaldiii update kar :)

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Fari_15

@Fari_15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Update soon...waiting! 😊

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Ashirania

@Ashirania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

wow...im speechless...it was...perfect...

i like how you transitioned into the whole idea of manvi's demise..instead of just saying "she's dead" you showed it so beautifully...conversation on ganga ghat was WOW. i mean...i liked the whole setting..viren and fly in hospital..but jeevika nd manvi in ganga ghat..thanks A LOT for the PM and i'm so sorry i took so long to comment! pls pls continue soon and pls pls pls pls PM mee!!!! ❤️