SS - Hamesha Ke Baad Bhi - Part 2 page 9 (03/02)

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Marzii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

wow great beggining...please pm me when u update more..thanks

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Posted: 12 years ago

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interesting !
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zahara

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#23

WAIT, is Maanvi dead? And everyone is crying and she's in some sort of limbo?

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Srivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Very interesting Neha!!

plz pm me!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

RES (WILL TAKE LONG TIME )

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Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sounds interesting.
Continue soon n do pm me

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ElmWizard5017

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Very interesting !!
continue soon ...
N do pm me :)

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-Pj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Interesting Neha. I have some ideas but I don't wanna share. If all your updates were this length it wouldn't take me long to read. * Ahem ahem *

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NEHA KASHYAP

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Dr Manan was examining her body.. BOTH were looking at him.. Suddenly She took her to the bed and placed her hand on the heart of the body which was laying on bed... ''Tujhe kuch sunayi de raha hai ?? Iss Dil ki dhadkan sunayi de rai hai?? Sunayi de rahi hai na?? Woh sirf isiliye chal rai hai kyunki ise abhi bhi Apni Mannu ke paas hone ka ehsaas hai...

Doctors ne yeh machines lagayi hai taaki iss body mein khoon daudta hai rahe aur apna kaam ache se karta rahe... Par yeh sirf tu aur main jaante hai ki yeh sir se leke paaon tak jo khoon daud raha hai yeh teri wajah se daud raha hai...

Yeh aankhein band hoke bhi tujhe dekh rahi hain..nahin chahti woh khulna.. kyunki unhe pata hai ki tu khuli aankhon se nahin dikhaayi degi…

Tu door karna chahti hai na khud ko isse toh kar de…par meri ek shart hai... Yeh jo iss shareer mein khoon daud raha hai tere naam ka..woh badal de...

Inn aankhon mein hamesha jo tera chehra nazar aata hai, woh aankhein badal de...

Iss shareer ko iss kaabil bana de ki iss ki aatma teri aatma ke bina hi fit baith jaaye ismein...

Bas yeh meri shartein maan le.. main tujhse vaada karti hun ki chup karke bina kuch kahe main tujhse door ho jaungi...

And once again silence took place between them... She was looking more helpless now.. those words were haunting her now which she just heard...She settled herself near the body and put her head on her heart listening its heartbeats and trying to control herslef... She wanted to immerse herself in those beats so that nothing could bother her... She saw Manan getting out of the room and closed her eyes.

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The Vadheras and Chaudharies who were sitting quitely sobbing there, saw Dr Manan coming out of ICU with serious and tense expressions on his face.. They all moved towards him and looked as if asking any improvement.. Manan took a deep breath and said -

"Dekhiye Jeevika ki body medicines ko respond nahin kar rahi hai… Hum poori koshish kar rahe hain par usne shayad jeene ki aas chod di hai… Pichle 2 din se uski body mein koi movement nahin hui hai aur Agar agle 2 din tak coma se bahar naa aayi toh I am sorry.… but i have to say this ki bache aur Jeevika dono ko bachana mushkil ho jayega…"

The news shattered everyone…Tears started running violently on their faces.. Viren found his body going unbalanced but somehow handeled himself and moved towards ICU.. Through glass windown he saw his wife lying there lifeless.. Past incidents started coming infront of his eyes :

"Mannu.. Nai.. Nai Mannuuu..Manuuu,", Jeevika who was sleeping, woke up screaming and ended up waking Viren next to her as well

He got up and took her in his arms...he stroked the back of her head, ''Jeevika.. Kya hua? Bura sapna dekha? Shhh.. Shhh..kuch ni hua...Shaant ho jao" ..There was concern in his voice..

A sob escaped from her , '' Viren ji Mannu.. Mannu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi hai..'' her voice tremulous. She was trying not to cry. Her heart was pounding against her chest and she could almost hear her blood flowing through her veins. She was scared to her wits and the fear was still there now that she's awake. She gripped Viren's hand. He realized she was in cold sweat.

''Shhh… tumhari mannu kahin nahin jaa rahi.. Shh lo paani piyo aur relax karo pehle…bura sapna tha bas." Viren caressed her cheeks while handling her glass of water

''Sapna nahhi tha Viren ji.. woh mujhe chod ke jaa rahi hai…" pushed his hand away.

"Idhar dekho meri taraf… tumne bas bura sapna dekha hai Jeevika… kuch nahin hua hai…" trying to control her...

''Mujhe…mujhe abhi Mannu se milna hai…. Chaliye na viren ji.. Mujhe abhi dekhna hai use" She said getting up from bed.

He hold her hand and made her look at him , "Jeevika hum abhi wahin the naa.. Tumhare saamne hi woh soyi hai.. Mushkil se ek ghanta hua hai aur tum uski neend khraab karogi…"

''Nai viren ji..aap samajh nahi rahe..mujhe bohat ghabrahat ho rahi hai.. Meri..Meri Mannu

Suddenly Viren heard Viraat's loud scream saying MAAANVI… He got scared and here at the same time Jeevika got fainted…

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Drrrn...☺️ 1st update done... Jise samajh ni aaya, dnt blame me.. blame my fatoori dimaag jise samjhaana nai aata:( but next updates mein samajh aa jayega... 🤔 I didnt give long update as i dnt want to confuse u... i will clear things in next update... so till then Keep daudaofying ur Dimaag ke horses🤣
and yesss Like maaro aur comment bhi karo ki aapko kya lagta hai ki kya hua hai
Ab main jaaun? Ok Bye

ps: thanku everyone for such a goody goody response after reading the prologue only.. Loveddd all ur comments.. keep them coming<3

Love,
Neha...

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ElmWizard5017

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Yaar Aap Kay Fatoori dimaagh mein itne aala ideas ate kahan say hein ??
I loved it !!
Beautifully written !!
Wonderful update :)
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the pm :)

Edited by ElmWizard5015 - 12 years ago

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