VIRIKA OS *YOU CANT LEAVE ME *LAST PART PAGE 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HERE GOES THE LAST PART.THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR SUCH AN AWESOME FEEDBACK .
PART 3 (LAST PART)

Jeevika:virenjii plzz mujhe maaf kardi jiye yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai lekin plzz app meri galti ki sazaah is tarah mat dijiye mujhe .plzz uthye mujhse baat kijiye mein aap ke baghair ji nahi sakti aur aap ne mujhe promise kiya than what happen you cant leave me like thiss plzz virenjii uthye plzz virenjiii

tears started to flow from eyes n landed on viren"s cheeks
. he slowly started opening his eyes n suddenly started breathing heavily .jeevika got scared she immediately called the doctor .doctor came
doctor:oh my god nurse go n bring the oxygen mask patient condition is getting critical plzz mrs vadhera u ve to go out n let us do our work

jeevika:plzz doctor let me stay here n see him plzz doctor i beg u

the doctor agreed n let jeevika stayed there .the doctors were trying their best but nothing was happening according to their favour all their efforts were going failed the lost all hope .jeevika was seeing all this she couldnt believe what was happening she couldnt see her love taking his last breathe in front of her n ran out of the room .

she was sitting on the bench n crying like a small baby .plzz god dont do this to him if u take his u ll also be taking my life .he had never hurted anyone l.he loves everyone immensely he even sacrificed his chile for my sister than how can you do this to him.plzz god save him i beg uu plzzz

she was continuously crying and her eyes were closed .suddenly the doctor came and said god has listened ur prayers ur love have won your husband is out of danger we r shifting him other room than u can meet him .jeevika just cant wait to meet her virenji . finally he was shifted n she went to meet him

viren partially lying n partially in sitting position .jeevika went inside n just hugged him tightly .viren tightened the hug n patted her back ensuring that he z fine .soon they broke the hug

viren:see i never break my promise n what were you thinking k mein tumhara peechha itni jaldo chordoo ga humara saath to saat janmoon ka hai itna assaani se thodi chorooga mrs vadhera

jeevika:virrenjiii im sorry yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai kaash yeh goli mujhe

she was about to complete her sentence but viren put his hand on her mouth

viren:leave all this see now i m fine n no one can separate us even god k n kissed her forehead .this is not fair i have came out from danger n you only gave me a hug

jeevika knew virens intention n gave a small kiss on his cheeks n hugged him tightly n said i love you viren responded with the same passion n replied i love you too .they remain in the same position insuring that they will never leave each other


HOPE YOU GUYS LIKED IT .GUYS PLEASE DO COMMENT AND LIKE
THANK YOU
Edited by mariarauf48 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Good update..👏
Loved the ending...
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
amazinggg update!!!!! loved itt!!!!! do continuee making more and more stories on Virika!!!! awesomeee...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Fabulous

Loved it

Nice ending

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Awesum maria sry i just read in one tak It was really Wonderful..
Waiting 4 new story...
thans 4 da Pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Its so beautiful in its own way!
Loved it, love their bond
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
yuhooo amazing ending...! such a lovely update dear...!!! thanx for the pm...:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
thank you .it was amazing os
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Just was awesome.
Thanx 4 the pm.
Write new story on virika
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Loved it...
<3<3<3
P.s. do pme me when u update something new on virika...
xxx

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